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Once upon a time, there was an impoverished girl from an impoverished family.
Her father (38) was a former cop that was killed in action. Her mother (36) didn't want to take care of her anymore because the girl (13) reminded her too much of her dead husband.
The mother kicked the girl out of the house and took care of the other children. The girl, still in her teen years, had nothing but the clothes on her back to live with. To get some food and a temporary place to stay, she eventually had to disrobe for others.
Initially, she only did menial jobs for some of her old classmates and acquaintances to earn some quick cash.
Later, when the money wasn't nearly enough and her old connections refused to pay up anymore, she (15) introduced herself to others, who were strangers and thrice her age, slowly going beyond the realm of simply stripping.
She earned enough money to get herself a residence and two meals a day. She made a living by doing things that no girl her age would do. The many jobs that she did would raise eyebrows and make her the scum of society.
Regardless, she didn't want to die before finding something to live for; she wanted to know what it meant to be happy, so she strived to keep herself alive until then.
Until she met the Young Master anyway.
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I thought it was innocent smut lol. I’m about to get struck down by lighting for deluding myself. The story is based heavily on the life of a young woman that’s just doing what she can to get by. She’s been alone and on the streets for so long that she can even sell her body without batting an eyelid. Then the Young Master comes along. I thought this was going to be a story where the Young Master is like, “You pitiful thing, a woman’s body is precious and you shouldn’t be selling it to strangers. Come, I’ll make you my Queen.” Haha, it would’ve even been nice if the story was like that. Now I’m scarred. Thanks for making me realize that I’m just a lowly human being like everyone else.
Actually this story is quite troublesome or inhumane .. it shows that people who were rich and powerful could enjoy life and do whatever they want..while being poor were a mere tool for fun.... On the other way of understanding ... The author were just telling the daily events of our society...being poor and totally damned moron is truly the subject of being bullied...🤔🤔🤔
It’s genius! I love it! I just found this website after reading a bunch of garbage romance books about “the badboy steals the good girl”. This type of story’s a breath of fresh air compared to that. While certain elements of similarity exist between these types of stories and the type I just mentioned, like arrogant young master, character-driven plots, ridiculous and melodramatic story settings, this story is just so intense. It takes overused tropes and throws them out of a window. One chapter in, something extreme happens. Two chapters in, the twist I was waiting for didn’t come, instead, another swept me to my feet in its place. Twenty more chapters in, I’m hooked. I want MOARRRR.
Before I get into my review of this story, let me just say something first. I guarantee it’ll be more interesting than the review. The way I found this story is actually a funny story by itself. Otherwise, I would’ve never chanced across such a bizarre piece of writing like this one in my lifetime. It was an average day where I was on Webnovel reading a mediocre piece of modern-day wuxia. The story was called Invincible Kungfu Healer or something and I was like 80 chapters in. The only reason I didn’t drop the book was because I was just too bored and had nothing good to read at the time. Naturally, as a person reading the book, I would read the comments to see what other people thought of the book. At this particular point in the plot, it felt like story the was not progressing. Author was just repeating the same damn **** over and over. Guy angers influential dude. Influential dude wants revenge so he sends thugs. Guy beats up thugs. Influential dude gets scared. Influential dude sends stronger thugs. Guy gets stronger and beats stronger thugs. And so on. The cycle repeated itself for 80 chapters. The readers were not satisfied with these developments and were quite verbal about it the comments. Then there was this one angry guy who stood up for the book, being like “Oh, you think this story is ****? Why not write something better then?” One of the guys who was insulting the book replies to the angry a day later saying “Done. 30 chapters complete. Give it a read.” Curious myself as to what the guy had written, I find this story. The person who wrote that comment was none other than the author of The Service Girl. I have to say, he did a good job in capturing the subtleties of being poor. This is a depressing story with ****ed up charecters and a nasty society. If you’re into books where nobles or other such self-important entities bully the poor, this story is probably one of the best for you.
What can I say? It’s a good book. I may be the author, and I may be tooting my own fiddle, but it doesn’t change the fact that the book is good, am I right? My subjective opinions don’t have anything to do with objective facts. I wrote this piece of work because I found that **** on the internet couldn’t make me hard anymore. It was just too bland, dry and overused. Then I figured: what better way to get kicks and beat the meat than to put my various fantasies on paper. Boy, aren’t I a genius? Documenting my perversions on digital paper? Now that the way to live! Now, all I need to do is read a few chapters of my own brainchild and my most prized possession will stand ramrod straight. Ha, take that viagra!
Well, I was out there browsing for some nice stories to read. I’m caught up to all the ones I’m currently reading, so I decided to find something new for a change of pace. I don’t frequent the romance genre much since, to me, the whole Supergirl gets CEO concept sounds dated. I wanted to read a romance where there was no reincarnation or supernatural powers involved. And so, I found this novel. At first, I thought it would be a cliché Young Master rapes poor girl, feels guilty and takes responsibility kinda novel. It had all the vibes and I was on the verge of dropping. I’m glad I didn’t because then I would’ve missed out on this beautiful piece of writing. In all honesty, I think this novel is a hidden gem. It really doesn’t have much romance in it. It just shows how dark the world is. I’m a guy that’s okay with reading cultivation novels where people get mutilated or tortured to death. Strangely though, I felt this novel break me somewhat. I have to admit I got many a shameful boner reading some very graphic scenes, but once all the exhilaration faded away and I started to reflect on what I just read, I was genuinely horrified. All in all, this was a good horror novel. The reason I took of a star on character is, believe or not, I’m 30 chapters in and I still don’t know any of the characters names. They just haven’t been mentioned yet. This was a first for me.
Yeah, this story belongs in the fantasy genre, not romance lol. Just wanted to make this clear for some of you readers. This work is more fantastic than it is romantic. For example, up until the 100 chapters that I’ve planned out so far, there isn’t a single *** scene, but there is a lot of penetration going on. So, if you want me to make it clear for those of you who haven’t already understood my argument, here it is in ****** terms: most of the **** in this book is nonconsensual; it is rape.
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This is a good romance story. I learnt a lot about my tastes and the kind of person I am by reading this story. Though the author isn’t Shakespeare or King or some literary genius, the author is really good at what he does. I like most of the descriptions in the story and everything seems cohesive to me. It feels like every little detail in the story, from the smallest of things to the most extreme of things, has a reason to them. It’s just that we’re not smart enough to understand most of them. But they are there.
An extremely intense and brutal... romance novel? The MC being Innocent girl/woman trying her all in surviving all the abuse to protect and help her children. This novel is also extremely sad and kinda scary because of all the gore and torture, but this is pretty good and too strong for underage kids who can’t handle strong gore and brutal things. Strange for someone’s fetish or fantasy to be like this, but I’m not here to judge whatever they have in their mind. 18+ Scenes are pretty strong or descriptive in their own ways. MC’s mind set is pretty strong surprisingly, maybe due to her children maybe. I think I said too much of a Spoiler of this novel. But, Great Novel, Extremely Sad/Scary, A lot of Fetish going on there, Pretty Bloody and much Gore, and not too the point where I should and must stop and get away from this novel due to the extreme stuff going on in this novel.
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Well holy **** was this a ride to enjoy. I spent more time grimacing in pain for the main character though. Would love to see more of this. There’s just too few chapters right now though. Also, there’s little to no dialogue in this book. But I think that’s one of the things that makes this book unique. No dialogue, yet I can see inside the character’s minds pretty much. I think this is a good sign of writing and I endorse the author for creating this book.
OMG This novel is dehumanizing author you can really do better if this novel take another plot you done so well be writing and I appreciate your work but seriously this is bad am sorry. Please am only saying my mind
This novel is probably the closest an otaku like me will come to ***. Some of the “action scenes” are realllly intense and I feel my lower half thrumming in response. The “adrenaline” pumps to certain areas of my body getting me all excited. This happens every time I read a new chapter. Also noticed that the level of mind-****ery only increases as the chapters go by. I don’t understand how this is even possible given that the first chapter, which is by far the tamest, has rape in it. The chapters to come are just... how to say this... impossible to conceive without being a ****ed up person. Yup, the other is pretty ****ed for writing this novel.
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Waiting for next update...plz author make her life beautiful...feeling bad for sevice girl...😭😭😭😭 Ur novel is very heart touching....ur novel is different so keep it up...
I NEVER WANTED TO EDIT A STORY AS MUCH AS I WANTED TO DO THIS. Lol don't worry, the author writes well. I just want to be a co-author for this. This novel has potential to go really far. I'll stay with this story till the end <3 for the newcomers, pure sadism. and that being NOT in an erotic way. (at least, for now) though the author offers a more progressive plot after more chapters are released. i think the author progresses on well romance fiction my ass brace yourselves for this story. not recommended for light hearts. some people might call it dark, but inhumane would be a better descriptive term (at least till now) Good luck reading! (gonna need it)
The innocent love shared between the young master and the damsel is so touching and sweet that I feel I might suffer from diabetes. The young master loves her much more than the main wife that he gave her more kids than the other. It's also cute how he is so possessive of her that he always has a watch over her actions to ensure her safety and keep other filthy beasts from laying their hands on her. He also loves their children so much that he even gave them his family's secret martial arts for them to practice and has assigned them a professional tutor to teach them everything while he busies himself with his loving and cute pet who always wags her tail for her young master while blushing. A must-read for romance fanatics and feminists!
This was so sad I wanted it cry the whole time. Do NOT READ THIS. SO SAD SO SAD SO SAD so sad so sad so sad so sad bdnekelsle keebe e e e e. E d d d d
Great work keep it up👍 "...................................................................................................................
ネタバレを明かす My second review: Now, the author is building his/her world so we're living it rather than a person narrating it from the past. Amazing idea.
Hmm not sure what to say... didn't read all chapters but does the girl ever get better beside endless torture ? I mean I don't understand the whole world building but she seems to need money to life and she seems her body to perverted rich people for her child/children. until she goes back to the young master... I know from a few later chapters she will be tortured and trained as a dog...but why ? I don't really have the heart yet to read all the chapters can someone give me a summary? and author does she submit/break someday? or does she kill the whole family? hope someone writes me a summary why she does this and if there is a contract or something because of the few chapters I read I would never trust this family to care for my children while I will be tortured for the future of my children? sorry for my english (^-^)
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- 1 The Service 5 years ago
- 2 Endure, For I am Ashamed 5 years ago
- 3 Partner of Two, Husband of One 5 years ago
- 4 The Anger from Betrayal 5 years ago
- 5 Punished for My Sins 5 years ago
- 6 A Year Later 5 years ago
- 7 The Young Master is Back 5 years ago
- 8 The Drowning Dog 5 years ago
- 9 Scrubbing the Toilet 5 years ago
- 10 The Wife’s Permission 5 years ago
- 11 Flood after the Famine 5 years ago
- 12 A Third Cruelty 5 years ago
- 13 Young Master’s Residence 5 years ago
- 14 The Family Dog 5 years ago
- 15 Sanitizing the Doggy 5 years ago
- 16 Meeting the New Dog 5 years ago
- 17 Bathing the Dirty Dog 5 years ago
- 18 A Talk with Wife 5 years ago
- 19 The Journey Home 5 years ago
- 20 A Decision for the Children 5 years ago
- 21 Doggy Thief Pays the Price 5 years ago
- 22 Perseverance is Your Only Friend 5 years ago
- 23 Out Walking with the Wife 5 years ago
- 24 Pounded in the Pound 5 years ago
- 25 The Family Meal 5 years ago
- 26 Don’t Bite Off More Than You Can Chew 5 years ago
- 27 A Mother’s Unfiltered Rage 5 years ago
- 28 Girl with a Tail is a Tale indeed 5 years ago
- 29 What’s This? Milk?! 5 years ago
- 30 Am I Still Human? 5 years ago
- 31 An Unwelcome Surprise 5 years ago
- 32 It’s a Game to Him 5 years ago
- 33 Headphones Boy 5 years ago
- 34 Demand After Demand 5 years ago
- 35 Has It Really Only Been Three Weeks? 5 years ago
- 36 A Resourceful Gambit? 5 years ago
- 37 The Dog Shed 5 years ago
- 38 Not Again 5 years ago
- 39 A Voiceless Will 5 years ago
- 40 1000 kg Later 5 years ago
- 41 Anticipation 5 years ago
- 42 Pain and Pleasure 5 years ago
- 43 Bitches Get Stitches 5 years ago
- 44 The Wife’s Thoughts 5 years ago
- 45 The Descent 5 years ago
- 46 The Children’s Villa 5 years ago
- 47 The Depths of Hell 5 years ago
- 48 A Lesson in Discipline 5 years ago
- 49 Scalpel Therapy 5 years ago
- 50 Green Hand to Red Knife 5 years ago
- 51 A Change and a Challenge 5 years ago
- 52 Body Tempering 5 years ago
- 53 The Succeeding Conditions 5 years ago
Ummm... This is probably the darkest part of Webnovel I’ve had the pleasure of visiting. No light will ever reach here. And for good reason too. This story’s an abyss with no bottom. You venture down into it, there’s no returning back to the surface world. You’ll be scarred forever. There’s no hope. There is only despair. No wonder the story’s a hidden gem. I never expected to find a story of this caliber through my random searches for Original Content. I was drawn by the cover and the 17+ tag since I was getting a little hot and bothered with no outlet. Read the first chapter and thought this was going to be something worth investing into because, while I’m not looking for a plot, I am lookin for “plot”. This story screams “plot” 😉. And the grammar and writing style is kick-ass to boot. And after reading a few more chapters... wow. What had I gotten myself into. This story is messed up. IT’S FOKKKKED. And this was exactly the kind of story I was looking for deep down in the most hidden part of my heart. It’s a guilty pleasure all right. It’s like a run of Dark Souls. You go into the game knowing you’ll get ass-raped a bunch of times before finally entering New Game. That being said, this story isn’t for the faint of heart. I’m dead serious.