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Horrible, the story is very slow, the protagonist was strong at first, got weak and then strong, I do not understand anything.....................
Good writing! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
Good writing! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
Why did he kill all his kind Why did he kill princess Is he stupidity is that high If he is not evil even after killing inoceent saiyan than what is he If you wanna make MC evil, make his full evil or make him current his mistakes so that you can justify your statement that MC is only evil to his wife emenys
Não e ruim só que fico muito sem sentido tipo ele poderia revive os pais dele em 1 desejo ou pq ele e tao estupido tipo sei que ele veio da terra mais não motivo pra se estupido
Another DBZ trashfic,no story at all,its very bland,the story was good at first but it became stupid, he knows the plot he didn't use it and killed his kind what a dumb ****(author)
Well he has to be the worst fictional god in in all of history to kill all your followers🌋🌍🌋 i get killing the royal line but all of them damn he is the god of nothing .
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Another DBZ trashfic,no story at all,its very bland,the story was good at first but it became stupid, he knows the plot he didn't use it and killed his kind what a dumb ****(author)
I am giving 5 star just because of the cover pic. Best of luck and don't you dare dropping it. Believe me, not many people tested my patience and lived to tell the tale.
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ANOTHER MC WANTS TO SAVE EVERYONE 🙄 ANOTHER MC WHERE HIS PERSONALITY IS LIKE NARUTO WHERE MC LIKES MAKING PEOPLE AROUND HIM GETTING STRONGER BUT HIM A WEAKLING.. FOOL MC 🙄🙄👍👍................. ............... .............. ................ .....................
Read it if you got nothing to do. Below average, but ehhhh. Good luck with your writing experience though. 14010410410401401414014010401401041401410401401040140140140104104010410401401040104010410401041041
Ok thank you. In any case continues like this because these last 2 days your story has had a very big rise in popularity, 👍 - -----------------------------------------
Out of curiosity wath is your release frequency?? because the suspense is unbearable 😭😖----------------------------------_---------_____--------_--------_------_-------_--------_-----_---
One of Dragon Ball's coolest stories. I hope it continues to improve and also that it does not release the story. 😎😁😄😉🙂😄😊😍😉🙂😂😍😀😎😊😋😅😉😀🙂😉😄😊🙂😆😎😊
It's one of the best fanfiction of dragon ball i come to read thanks you 👍👍%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%:::::::::::::::;::::::::::::::
I know this is a useless hope, but please try not to drop the novel, you can always ask the readers for ideas. Back the the review, Good novel ,I really like dragon ball, and multiverse novels they are the best.
awesome but i do have two questions 1. is it going to be one of those stupid forgiveness arc where he for gives the ***** after she rated him out , his parent died and almost killed him then takes her as his lover bull**** to be king? even goku wouldn't for give her and that says something 2. super sayian four needs a tail are you going to to give him a tail because he scant be ssg mode all the time? maybe have an arc about way they lost their tail the, a sayians tail carries a lot of the saiyans power ? and about the potential thing thats bs the reason way U6 saiyans are stronger is because is s cells grow only a decent living environment and training methods things U7 saiyans didn't have because their fucking nomads if they had what U6 had they whould be op as **** the and because PLOT DEMAND IT. am interested in coufla and kale are doing and how they are going to interact with the mc more then a traitorous spoiled princess ***** who sold out one of her race who is her friend first and only friend that saved her life and his family (mc)
very good 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
ネタバレを明かす Good writing! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
Nice novel. Although the the grammar is quite a bit messy, it's understandable as the author is using translator to write the story. Don't drop it and more chapters.
Very Good :D ..................................................................................................................................................
So far so good. Keep up the good story🤘. I can not wait to see how this novel goes. Mc training is standard so i can bot conplain wish you put in a little prologue though .........
ネタバレを明かす Horrible, the story is very slow, the protagonist was strong at first, got weak and then strong, I do not understand anything.....................
Good writing! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
Good writing! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
Why did he kill all his kind Why did he kill princess Is he stupidity is that high If he is not evil even after killing inoceent saiyan than what is he If you wanna make MC evil, make his full evil or make him current his mistakes so that you can justify your statement that MC is only evil to his wife emenys
Não e ruim só que fico muito sem sentido tipo ele poderia revive os pais dele em 1 desejo ou pq ele e tao estupido tipo sei que ele veio da terra mais não motivo pra se estupido
Another DBZ trashfic,no story at all,its very bland,the story was good at first but it became stupid, he knows the plot he didn't use it and killed his kind what a dumb ****(author)
Well he has to be the worst fictional god in in all of history to kill all your followers🌋🌍🌋 i get killing the royal line but all of them damn he is the god of nothing .
Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
Another DBZ trashfic,no story at all,its very bland,the story was good at first but it became stupid, he knows the plot he didn't use it and killed his kind what a dumb ****(author)
I am giving 5 star just because of the cover pic. Best of luck and don't you dare dropping it. Believe me, not many people tested my patience and lived to tell the tale.
Asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasdasd asdadasg
ANOTHER MC WANTS TO SAVE EVERYONE 🙄 ANOTHER MC WHERE HIS PERSONALITY IS LIKE NARUTO WHERE MC LIKES MAKING PEOPLE AROUND HIM GETTING STRONGER BUT HIM A WEAKLING.. FOOL MC 🙄🙄👍👍................. ............... .............. ................ .....................
Read it if you got nothing to do. Below average, but ehhhh. Good luck with your writing experience though. 14010410410401401414014010401401041401410401401040140140140104104010410401401040104010410401041041
Ok thank you. In any case continues like this because these last 2 days your story has had a very big rise in popularity, 👍 - -----------------------------------------
Out of curiosity wath is your release frequency?? because the suspense is unbearable 😭😖----------------------------------_---------_____--------_--------_------_-------_--------_-----_---
One of Dragon Ball's coolest stories. I hope it continues to improve and also that it does not release the story. 😎😁😄😉🙂😄😊😍😉🙂😂😍😀😎😊😋😅😉😀🙂😉😄😊🙂😆😎😊
It's one of the best fanfiction of dragon ball i come to read thanks you 👍👍%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%:::::::::::::::;::::::::::::::
I know this is a useless hope, but please try not to drop the novel, you can always ask the readers for ideas. Back the the review, Good novel ,I really like dragon ball, and multiverse novels they are the best.
awesome but i do have two questions 1. is it going to be one of those stupid forgiveness arc where he for gives the ***** after she rated him out , his parent died and almost killed him then takes her as his lover bull**** to be king? even goku wouldn't for give her and that says something 2. super sayian four needs a tail are you going to to give him a tail because he scant be ssg mode all the time? maybe have an arc about way they lost their tail the, a sayians tail carries a lot of the saiyans power ? and about the potential thing thats bs the reason way U6 saiyans are stronger is because is s cells grow only a decent living environment and training methods things U7 saiyans didn't have because their fucking nomads if they had what U6 had they whould be op as **** the and because PLOT DEMAND IT. am interested in coufla and kale are doing and how they are going to interact with the mc more then a traitorous spoiled princess ***** who sold out one of her race who is her friend first and only friend that saved her life and his family (mc)
very good 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
ネタバレを明かす Good writing! His choices at the beginning were a bit surprising but it actually turned out pretty well and made the story much more interesting.
Nice novel. Although the the grammar is quite a bit messy, it's understandable as the author is using translator to write the story. Don't drop it and more chapters.
Very Good :D ..................................................................................................................................................
So far so good. Keep up the good story🤘. I can not wait to see how this novel goes. Mc training is standard so i can bot conplain wish you put in a little prologue though .........
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