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作者: shezz1

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The story is missing something so I quit it ...
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shezz1

SHAMLESS author here .. giving myself a 5 Can't help it Pleaseeeee update your reviews and thoughts about it This my first work and hope you don't mind the punctuation marks . I am really bad at it Story is cringe as **** and yes it contains smut (i am a female pervert 😉)

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XiaoYuFu

The idea is original, but something were to change would be that in the description could be a little more info about the actual story to attract the readers instead of just the basic pli, but once again, the idea looks nice.

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greesh

Give it a read and it was worth it Loved it alot. We can say that the aithor is new By her ( mostly its a girl) style of writing and i am happy to encourage a writer I only know to read novels and not write it.. Loved ittttt Maybe this would be my new fav

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hiddenaccount

Came after reading the wolf story This one looks better and more real The best part about the story is the recent chapter is ram jelous .. nice one thou Wait what is butter chicken .. i am going to google it and try that one . And want to try lassie all the more People give this a try . Even if it doesn't have a cover page do give it a try DON'T JUDGE A BOOK BY IT'S COVER

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sweetbeauty

Read other reviews before trying truely Its good , i was just wasting time in webnovel Until i found this its so cool.. Waiting for more Especially the fluff and cuteness😍😍

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lisichengMRS

Came here after reading my mate is a superstar This is lot funnier and has a good tempo.. As the title makes a suspense as to why it would be incomplete not quite sure about it though

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vinayrao

The title builded my curiosity . Its good Author should upload a picture i mean a book cover it may get better reviews and comments Ram is really cute .. I am really curious about the ending just like other comments said ... the title builds curiosity

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shizuka112

I liked it till now and am really curious what is gonna happen as it says Incomplete ... I really want to know Author should concentrate more on punctuation marks.. Maybe commas . I am fine with or without it anyway

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shezz1

Try my other work i am writing it parallely Its " my mate is a superstar " - it's a warewolf story It contains smut and abusive language hope you mind this This will update in a faster pace and i will write its second book as this one is small and just the intro I will look it through the reviews and comments .. I couldn't upload the picture i tried a lot So here i am .. **** the book cover and give it a shot please

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