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I really like the story!! Although there are some grammatical errors, but they are pretty normal if English isn't you first language (it isn't mine either) and I can understand your struggle dear Author. Please keep it up!! 💕💪 You are writing a good story that got me hooked after just a few chapters. P.S.: As I said, English isn't my first language, but I have a decent writing level. Feel free to ask me if you need any help. I hope you don't mind me saying this 🤗
The story is interesting but the grammatical errors are too much. Sometimes it was difficult to know if you are writing about the past or present
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I'm sorry but the writing is all choppy and my brain hurts from trying to read this. I really wanted to read this I made it to chapter 10 but can't continue on any further. It seems like it could be am amazing story if the author takes the time to proof read before posting.
Good but keep updateing ,we can adjust with your mistakes but try to learn ,from them please😁😀😁😀😁😁😀😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😊😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😁😁😁😀😀😊😁😀😊😀😊😀😊😁😊😁😀😀😊😊😀😊😁😁😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😊😊😁😊😁😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😁
Is good. BUT you are bad in english............ ............√(-_-)√...just for you know...... ............. (•~• ) (¶°∆°¶) (>=<) (°Π°)/,,…8#€
This is the best ever like omg I need more!!!!!❤❤🧡🧡💛💛💚💚💙💙💜💜🖤🖤😚😚😚😗🙂☺😙😙☺😊🙂😊😎🙂😊😋🤗😎😚🙂😋🤗😚😎😚🤗😚😎😚😍😊🤗😚🙂😍😚🙂😋😍😚😍😚🤗😚😍😚😍😊😎😚😃😊😍😉😍☺
I really like this story despite the choppy English translation and grammatical issues. If you can read past those things, you will really enjoy this story. Although halfway through I got a bit confused by the background of the main characters, overall it captivated my imagination and I feel satisfied. Great job!
I really like the story!! Although there are some grammatical errors, but they are pretty normal if English isn't you first language (it isn't mine either) and I can understand your struggle dear Author. Please keep it up!! 💕💪 You are writing a good story that got me hooked after just a few chapters. P.S.: As I said, English isn't my first language, but I have a decent writing level. Feel free to ask me if you need any help. I hope you don't mind me saying this 🤗
The story is interesting but the grammatical errors are too much. Sometimes it was difficult to know if you are writing about the past or present
ネタバレを明かす I'm sorry but the writing is all choppy and my brain hurts from trying to read this. I really wanted to read this I made it to chapter 10 but can't continue on any further. It seems like it could be am amazing story if the author takes the time to proof read before posting.
Good but keep updateing ,we can adjust with your mistakes but try to learn ,from them please😁😀😁😀😁😁😀😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😊😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😁😁😁😀😀😊😁😀😊😀😊😀😊😁😊😁😀😀😊😊😀😊😁😁😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😊😊😁😊😁😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😀😊😁
Is good. BUT you are bad in english............ ............√(-_-)√...just for you know...... ............. (•~• ) (¶°∆°¶) (>=<) (°Π°)/,,…8#€
This is the best ever like omg I need more!!!!!❤❤🧡🧡💛💛💚💚💙💙💜💜🖤🖤😚😚😚😗🙂☺😙😙☺😊🙂😊😎🙂😊😋🤗😎😚🙂😋🤗😚😎😚🤗😚😎😚😍😊🤗😚🙂😍😚🙂😋😍😚😍😚🤗😚😍😚😍😊😎😚😃😊😍😉😍☺
I really like this story despite the choppy English translation and grammatical issues. If you can read past those things, you will really enjoy this story. Although halfway through I got a bit confused by the background of the main characters, overall it captivated my imagination and I feel satisfied. Great job!