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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
dropped at chapter 11.Why would she spare cultivators that try to enslave her??? Seeing this kind of stupid logic, wont bother with the rest of the story.
MC barely uses her dragon form after geting a human form.…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….
I started this novel a while ago and got interested. It is nice to see a change with the protagonist by making her a girl. Although it is not gory or bloody, there is violence in the story. As you can see through my rating, it does not get updated fast and then you start to forget the story when the next chapters comes.
So I have to ask are you going to keep writing for this book because I have started to like the way the story is going and would like to know how it ends
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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This story has great potential. There are tiny problems that im not gonna mention and one big one. The big one is updates. It makes me wonder if it got dropped completely. If this got updated at least on weekly basis it would be for sure one of my favorites.
If you skimmed the two most recent chapters you wouldn't be losing out. I couldn't read it; I tried, but I went cross eyed two paragraphs in because of how it kept repeating itself.
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I honest lay would score lower if possible on some of these ratings, but its low enough to see how I feel about this novel. After reading this I now know not all ratinags mean good books. This story suffers from such cliché writing tropes, and lacks in basically everything. Also autocorrect is kinda a nightmare with this tablet. Main Character: The main character is the bain of my existence, she's arrogant, prideful, and very unbelievable. At the beginning she can't even kill a human even though he was trying to Enslave Her, yet at the same time she can kill hundreds of animals without a care in the world. However, later in the novel she kills tons of contestants even though they did nothing wrong. She also is kinda bipolar (even though she's usually scoffing at men or annoyed) as getting more types of "purities" would change her personality, sometimes? Her greedy phase was the most insuffersble, as it becomes her driving point for way too long. Thankfully the anther stopped it, but the damage was already done. I do have more to rant about, but I'm not going to make this any longer. Side Characters: Not much in here, Dana doesn't hang out with people that much to any people in early chapters. But the system is one the best characters in novel, it was a good contrast to the main character, sadly they don't show up very often. If I'm correct there's this guy in school that Dana sorta helps, but he made so little impact or apperance. The teachers, they weren't interesting, at all. I think Dana that women teacher say some drama which probably ended up with some dead men. Somewhere on 50 or 60 Dana gets dispells, and I thought FINALLY I I don't have to suffer as badly anymore! But one might as well be a ghost and the other one was a lustful masochist demon thing. JUST what I've always DREAMED OF. Aka they suck. Updating: They or i think He updated quite frequently, but he went on hiatus so, 3 stars for dumping it. Better than ok but not great. Story Development: The story of plot is almost nonexistent till more than half way in the novel (the 77 chapters). I guess her leveling up and infiltrating human territory could be plot, but its all boring. Whats the main plot point you ask? Sorry I didn't read it, at that point I was skipping and skimming chapters, and given the Beast Cultivating system it wouldn't change a thing. Character Design: I don't have much to say here really. In not going to accuse the author of making no character design but I just done remember anything. Well other than MC being Super Hoooot, yet for some reason despite being an Frost dragon have black hair (just a nitpick). World Background: The world is your standered medieval fantasy world nothing fancy. That and the alarming amount of predatory men, seriously every background character wants to rape, bang, or kill Dana. The first people/men she encounters as a human talk about raping her. And how could I have forgot the Insane amount of times im reminded about her being Hoooooot. Plus the way men in this novel are protrayed is an embarrassment and like how SJWs very the world. Women are spiteful and hate Dana for her Hoooooootness. Both genders will be nice time to time for the plot or to be a stepping stone for the protagonist. If you read this entire thing I appaude you, coungrates I have wrote something worth reading unlike this book. To the author if you even read this, I don't hate you of course your story's just really suck. Im not a professional so I can't give you counstructive criticism. But if this is your passion keep writing, it gets better. Trust me drawing is also quite the drain sometimes.
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need more ̶g̶o̶l̶d̶ ahem .. chapters. ∧＿∧ （｡･ω･｡)つ━☆・*。 ⊂ ノ ・゜+. しーＪ °。+ *´¨) .· ´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨) (¸.·´ (¸.·'* ☆
I really like this novel so please keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A great story with a well fleshed out world and defined characters, the only problem I have with the story is that the author hasn't updated it in months.
I like this novel very much, get me hooked from the start yet after some time author stopped updating novel timely it made me sad as I like this novel very much. As such I hope one day the author can once again start updating timely. Overall a good read made carve for more
I really love the story, it had me hooked ever since she defeated her first beast. 👍 The story is interesting, although it's a bit fast paced causing one to use more braincells to understand everything. 😂 #no_regrets
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Great story I'm impatient for more bc it's a work of art with enjoyable characters.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫
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Characters and the world are well fleshed out. Love the story but there hasn't been any updates for a long time. Please come back to us dox991.
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Girl gets reincarnated as a semi dragon (wyvern). What could go wrong? Well quite a bit. The beginning is somewhat interesting then comes a big heap of plothole and frustration. It does get better afterwards, as promised. All in all a decent read if you're bored and need some light entertainment, but leave logic and common sense behind. First of, she doesn't stay as monster for long but quickly acquires the ability to shapeshift indefinitily. Not a dealbreaker, but it cuts out a lot of potential storylines. Mostly keep in mind this is very much an average wuxia. MC is obviously op but noone knows because she hides it. Everyone is there to either fall in love with mc, hate mc, be jealous of mc or offer up valuable knowledge and/or items and power to mc. Not much explanations given as to why. The story as usual scoffs at prince, princess and other priviledged persons, but I hope the author is aware of the irony that MC is just as bad. Big plotholes, strong plot armor, shallow characters everywhere, inconsistency abounds. Aside from info on sects and cultivation and how strong people are, no worldbuilding. Slight spoiler: A side character had his father murdered, a powerful cultivation and political figure. An enemy nation was framed for it. The boy was young and is described as growing up almost as a commoner. Back to the present where the mc finds evidence of this decade old plot, still being carried around by one of the perpetrators. We also only hear of this when it is convenient. So, again, good read if you're bored and don't want to think. The writing itself is quite good. Just ignore the shallow characters, inconsistencies and plotholes.
Hey, I just wanted to ask if everything was going ok? No you don't know me, at least as far as I know, but I've read both mystic and beast system and liked them. I'm not searching for an update or anything just wanted to wish you well and thank you for what you created, so good luck well wishes and thanks for the chapters. P.S. I left this as a comment before I thought about leaving it as a review, so it might pop up a few times.
رواية رائعه و مميزه حيث انا اكثر إعجابا بالروايات الخاصة بنظام والزراعة معا بدون اكسب للترقي بالمستويات حيث يحتاج البطل للفهم والزراعة بدلا عن الاعتماد الكلي على النظام
At first I was like, ahhh is this gonna be another one of those people raising beasts that are really OP, but the person themselves are weak af? But then, when I realised the MC herself was a dragon I was like YAAASSSSSS. So in my opinion everything's great, except the UPDATES.
Huh...seems good as seen by reviews and from what I’ve read of summary☺️☺️😊😊☺️interesting....looks to be a very awesome and amazingly plotted storyline ... too bad it’s short with so few chapters I’ll wait for more chapters before reading so keep the chapters comung👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏
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I love it i love it so much (°∆° i have been reading it for the past 2 days now becous i am really doing details and stuff and i loved it so much keep doing what you do best writter
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
dropped at chapter 11.Why would she spare cultivators that try to enslave her??? Seeing this kind of stupid logic, wont bother with the rest of the story.
MC barely uses her dragon form after geting a human form.…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….…….….….…..…….
I started this novel a while ago and got interested. It is nice to see a change with the protagonist by making her a girl. Although it is not gory or bloody, there is violence in the story. As you can see through my rating, it does not get updated fast and then you start to forget the story when the next chapters comes.
So I have to ask are you going to keep writing for this book because I have started to like the way the story is going and would like to know how it ends
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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This story has great potential. There are tiny problems that im not gonna mention and one big one. The big one is updates. It makes me wonder if it got dropped completely. If this got updated at least on weekly basis it would be for sure one of my favorites.
If you skimmed the two most recent chapters you wouldn't be losing out. I couldn't read it; I tried, but I went cross eyed two paragraphs in because of how it kept repeating itself.
ネタバレを明かす I honest lay would score lower if possible on some of these ratings, but its low enough to see how I feel about this novel. After reading this I now know not all ratinags mean good books. This story suffers from such cliché writing tropes, and lacks in basically everything. Also autocorrect is kinda a nightmare with this tablet. Main Character: The main character is the bain of my existence, she's arrogant, prideful, and very unbelievable. At the beginning she can't even kill a human even though he was trying to Enslave Her, yet at the same time she can kill hundreds of animals without a care in the world. However, later in the novel she kills tons of contestants even though they did nothing wrong. She also is kinda bipolar (even though she's usually scoffing at men or annoyed) as getting more types of "purities" would change her personality, sometimes? Her greedy phase was the most insuffersble, as it becomes her driving point for way too long. Thankfully the anther stopped it, but the damage was already done. I do have more to rant about, but I'm not going to make this any longer. Side Characters: Not much in here, Dana doesn't hang out with people that much to any people in early chapters. But the system is one the best characters in novel, it was a good contrast to the main character, sadly they don't show up very often. If I'm correct there's this guy in school that Dana sorta helps, but he made so little impact or apperance. The teachers, they weren't interesting, at all. I think Dana that women teacher say some drama which probably ended up with some dead men. Somewhere on 50 or 60 Dana gets dispells, and I thought FINALLY I I don't have to suffer as badly anymore! But one might as well be a ghost and the other one was a lustful masochist demon thing. JUST what I've always DREAMED OF. Aka they suck. Updating: They or i think He updated quite frequently, but he went on hiatus so, 3 stars for dumping it. Better than ok but not great. Story Development: The story of plot is almost nonexistent till more than half way in the novel (the 77 chapters). I guess her leveling up and infiltrating human territory could be plot, but its all boring. Whats the main plot point you ask? Sorry I didn't read it, at that point I was skipping and skimming chapters, and given the Beast Cultivating system it wouldn't change a thing. Character Design: I don't have much to say here really. In not going to accuse the author of making no character design but I just done remember anything. Well other than MC being Super Hoooot, yet for some reason despite being an Frost dragon have black hair (just a nitpick). World Background: The world is your standered medieval fantasy world nothing fancy. That and the alarming amount of predatory men, seriously every background character wants to rape, bang, or kill Dana. The first people/men she encounters as a human talk about raping her. And how could I have forgot the Insane amount of times im reminded about her being Hoooooot. Plus the way men in this novel are protrayed is an embarrassment and like how SJWs very the world. Women are spiteful and hate Dana for her Hoooooootness. Both genders will be nice time to time for the plot or to be a stepping stone for the protagonist. If you read this entire thing I appaude you, coungrates I have wrote something worth reading unlike this book. To the author if you even read this, I don't hate you of course your story's just really suck. Im not a professional so I can't give you counstructive criticism. But if this is your passion keep writing, it gets better. Trust me drawing is also quite the drain sometimes.
ネタバレを明かす need more ̶g̶o̶l̶d̶ ahem .. chapters. ∧＿∧ （｡･ω･｡)つ━☆・*。 ⊂ ノ ・゜+. しーＪ °。+ *´¨) .· ´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨) (¸.·´ (¸.·'* ☆
I really like this novel so please keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A great story with a well fleshed out world and defined characters, the only problem I have with the story is that the author hasn't updated it in months.
I like this novel very much, get me hooked from the start yet after some time author stopped updating novel timely it made me sad as I like this novel very much. As such I hope one day the author can once again start updating timely. Overall a good read made carve for more
I really love the story, it had me hooked ever since she defeated her first beast. 👍 The story is interesting, although it's a bit fast paced causing one to use more braincells to understand everything. 😂 #no_regrets
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Great story I'm impatient for more bc it's a work of art with enjoyable characters.🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫
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Characters and the world are well fleshed out. Love the story but there hasn't been any updates for a long time. Please come back to us dox991.
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Girl gets reincarnated as a semi dragon (wyvern). What could go wrong? Well quite a bit. The beginning is somewhat interesting then comes a big heap of plothole and frustration. It does get better afterwards, as promised. All in all a decent read if you're bored and need some light entertainment, but leave logic and common sense behind. First of, she doesn't stay as monster for long but quickly acquires the ability to shapeshift indefinitily. Not a dealbreaker, but it cuts out a lot of potential storylines. Mostly keep in mind this is very much an average wuxia. MC is obviously op but noone knows because she hides it. Everyone is there to either fall in love with mc, hate mc, be jealous of mc or offer up valuable knowledge and/or items and power to mc. Not much explanations given as to why. The story as usual scoffs at prince, princess and other priviledged persons, but I hope the author is aware of the irony that MC is just as bad. Big plotholes, strong plot armor, shallow characters everywhere, inconsistency abounds. Aside from info on sects and cultivation and how strong people are, no worldbuilding. Slight spoiler: A side character had his father murdered, a powerful cultivation and political figure. An enemy nation was framed for it. The boy was young and is described as growing up almost as a commoner. Back to the present where the mc finds evidence of this decade old plot, still being carried around by one of the perpetrators. We also only hear of this when it is convenient. So, again, good read if you're bored and don't want to think. The writing itself is quite good. Just ignore the shallow characters, inconsistencies and plotholes.
Hey, I just wanted to ask if everything was going ok? No you don't know me, at least as far as I know, but I've read both mystic and beast system and liked them. I'm not searching for an update or anything just wanted to wish you well and thank you for what you created, so good luck well wishes and thanks for the chapters. P.S. I left this as a comment before I thought about leaving it as a review, so it might pop up a few times.
رواية رائعه و مميزه حيث انا اكثر إعجابا بالروايات الخاصة بنظام والزراعة معا بدون اكسب للترقي بالمستويات حيث يحتاج البطل للفهم والزراعة بدلا عن الاعتماد الكلي على النظام
At first I was like, ahhh is this gonna be another one of those people raising beasts that are really OP, but the person themselves are weak af? But then, when I realised the MC herself was a dragon I was like YAAASSSSSS. So in my opinion everything's great, except the UPDATES.
Huh...seems good as seen by reviews and from what I’ve read of summary☺️☺️😊😊☺️interesting....looks to be a very awesome and amazingly plotted storyline ... too bad it’s short with so few chapters I’ll wait for more chapters before reading so keep the chapters comung👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏
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I love it i love it so much (°∆° i have been reading it for the past 2 days now becous i am really doing details and stuff and i loved it so much keep doing what you do best writter