Undying Will

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STPRCOMMENDINGGIRL

Quite annoying.. Like I read 10+ Chp Still has Not know What MC Power Or what he can do.. What I know Just Profile Profile again... The hell Atleast Just give a hint bro.. Boring.

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Grandpa_Deadpool

Imma be honest with you it's good but not good it's bad but not too bad it's just confusing asf cause the chapters lack information it lacks INFORMATION AND BACKGROUND I understand about the devil fruit and **** but the bounties just in the hundreds of thousands what is this like one piece but the low budget edition cause if you beat doflamingo one of the seven warlords and just get a 600k bounty why don't you just kill yourself ha. The story is good but you lack information and background creativity

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Daoist198784

From the very beginning I chose two ****ty abilities, which is already annoying, they also did not normally explain how these ****ty abilities work From the very beginning I chose two ****ty abilities, which is already annoying, they also did not normally explain how these ****ty abilities work

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EnderPL

What a disappointment... I don’t know One Piece so I was just here for the novel but ehhh... Let’s start. Writing quality is good, there’s not a lot of mistakes. Stability of updates for me sucks but meh... Story starts great and I don’t mean the meeting with god as that was stupid af. I mean the time at the island with his parents and the escape. But after...wtf? Ok kid is being train but why is he calling his teacher Senpai? It should be sensei if you want to use Japanese words at least learn the meaning. Then he meets a fat guy that he trusts the moment he sees and the author tried to make the meeting funny just to destroy the settings in the novel that he made before by killing MCs mother and promising revenge. Then the story is just shiit mc changed to a idiot child ( he’s more than 30 btw) know one piece like the back of his hand but his family dies and author doesn’t even write about it. Then bla bla-bla-bla and a lot os stupid shiit. Mc OP? Fuk NO! He had one fight till chapter 70 and ... he lost. Not counting mobs. The story is jumping all over place and he just don’t care after as you don’t know what you read. Overall a total disappointment and waist of time.

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Raiohosore

The author here doing the shameless author thing! Hope y'all like my book, I would love constructive criticism so I can improve my writing and I hope y'all will be patient with me!!! Till the next time Sayonars desu!!

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Ryan_Nguyen_4639

Good job.

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Captain_Bonta_kun

-------------I thinks it's going to be fun. The name of the MC alone is funny naming him after a time machine 😂👍_--------------------------------------------------------------

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Ryan_Nguyen_4639

Ok.

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HeadCrusher

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Newnoob

I give ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ because I felt like it. Thank you author. Have good day. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Ryan_Nguyen_4639

Moreee

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Raiohosore

Does anyone know how to add an already made chapter to a newly made volume??????????????????????????? Does anyone know how to add an already made chapter to a newly made volume???????????????????????????