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My first love...

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作者: arrette

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A girl that is head over heels with a boy...
A boy that is dreaming of seeing the love of his life...
Love at first sights...First love...
This is my first time writing a novel and i’m not sure if you will like it but im hoping that you wil give a little of your time reading this story. I can say its based on a true story but only half of it. ?

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leovenjaye

Hello there dear author....i am giving 5 shining stars for your awesome work of art...i tumbled upon your jewel yesterday and i got hooked the moment i started reading it..i love your story and how the characters made it wonderful for us,readers...the story is not also very long..i love it..thank you for this amazing treat my dear. ..🤗🤗🤗

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Staphylococcus

i really enjoy reading this novel, thanx dear author for sharing this wonderful story 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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MoonNstaR

This is the second novel of this author that I read and I love it, both of them😍. It such a short, sweet story without much conflict or misunderstanding between MC. Thank you author for your story and good luck for your next and ongoing novels 💕😘❤💖💗😊👍💞😍💓😃💖😘💖❤💝💞💕😍💗😘❤💖😘💗😍😘💗💖

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Daoist829593

I'm enjoying your story so far. Hope you could write more stories like this. Looking forward to the next story you could write soon. That was beautiful!

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riyaagg

Simple and cute story with twist of obsession filled lovers.... Really like this short stories and appreciate author to share their work... Thanks.........

5yr
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sadiah69

Nice story... Really love their relationship with each other.... Between friends and families sharing all the joy together!!! Respected each others.... Sharing all the pain and happiness...

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ifybaby03

What an incredible, interesting, captivating and exciting book. I enjoyed reading every chapter of this book. Well-done dear author u doing a great job. Kudos to u.

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Vandana_Choudhary

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joonieslove513

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Elijah_melliza

short but sweet...thanks for providing kilig moments...keep up with your writing...some grammatical error but easily overlook. thanks again. I'll be reading more of your works

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Moipone_Modise

This is the third story I read from this author and I would like to congratulate her. She is gifted and should carry on blessing readers with her stories .. This is a sweet love story of love at first sight. The FL and ML had to separate for some time when the latter's family had to relocate. What could a romantic story be without conflict and psychos intending to break up a happy couple? Finally everything was resolved and they lived happily ever after with their twins 🌹🌹🌹🌹

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Augustina_Waty

Overall is good story that is simple and not dragged on. Villains in this story is not too horrible and easily concurred. Both ML and FL show strong bonding and have no misunderstanding. Definitely a nice reading

4yr
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wynona_zack

first love never dies... lots of things happened in their life and they are miles apart but proved that they are destined to be together forever... congrats again author...👏👏👏

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Mandy_Calhoun

It was a cute short story. It was pretty fast paced and straightforward. The drama wasn’t drawn out which kept me interested in what was going to happen next. Overall, I thought it was a great read.

4yr
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Lil_vy

Sweet love story with a bit of thriller. Well written, enjoy reading it! Good job, author! Curious which part is based on true story...it's almost like fairy tale story comes into reality 😘

4yr
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DeBaj
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A*** it was a very sweet short story. I enjoyed reading it. Author thank you so much for all the time and energy you put into it. Good job! 👏👏 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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stephyyy888

Very beautifully written and such a complete story from start to finish! I wish there was more chapters as im so into the couple John and Alexa!!! The author wrote so nicely about their relationship as well as with their family! i would cont supporting more books frm this author 💞

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Onidika

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