The Locked System

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Burst17

Well, I'm not going to give myself 5 stars because I'm medium slow writing, also English is not my native language, so I apologize for any writing error

Having a mix with an anime and manga system for Hayato along with an original world you came up with your story is great for the setting. Hayato has to rise above his challenges and enemies as he goes through his adventure. Whether they’re from nobility, criminal, deities, and other anime or manga characters.

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_EMI_

It's good. I like it and I would recommend it to everyone to read. It need more chapters though. So author, please don't drop this. 1401401041041041041040

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Ghoul1357957913

The story is good and you should continue on. But give him even more exciting powers like divine divide, etc and all which will at least give me goosebumps

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Zeferath

I just point in solid caseing love the story it for me has hit a close to heart fantasy nerve and rattled my emotions to read when available.

LV 6

leradicateur

really nice to read, waiting for next chapters update. Don't drop it, but don't hurrytake your time to write it!! Sometimes need to be careful, you repeat some of your text

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Brann_Sixxx

I like this i hope the author dont drop this . . B.

LV 4

Crayon_Devourer

Is it finally back? After a year of waiting. The story is great with a few grammatical errors, which an interesting story that differs from common fanfics.

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Slaxkers1

Despite my good rating I do have somethings that I sorta dislike and that is that the MC isn't really getting abilities from other anime worlds like for example he could get the boosted gear and the commandments from Nanatsu no taizai. The other thing is that the MC doesn't really seem to I guess increase in power because he says he's training but he doesn't elaborate on that which I don't like.

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Linkertoon

El ingles se me da mal para escribir pero thanks for the chapter and the novel I hope you continue the story because it leaves a lot of intrigue

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Ghoul1357957913

The hero's backstory is quite bad and unwell, leaving many holes in the plot. Though his new attitude and vision on life is commendable. The story's progress is quite nice and well a little fast paced. The writing aint bad and i commend the way the theme is used

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HeavenlySun

Cool picture 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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NomadicCloud

I can’t believe how entertaining this story is. I honestly believe this story has the potential to become very popular “especially if author gets a proofreader”. If you like stories with systems than you will definitely enjoy this one because of the little twist. Looking forward to what will happen next. To all potential readers give it a chance you won’t be disappointed.

LV 5

Arkszero

Not bad. I like this. Although some grammar mistakes here and there, it's not too much. As for updates, the rate has fallen recently. Other than that, I don't find any problem with this novel.

LV 6

LoliWorld

I like your story and i give you 5 star dont deop this and dont think about something trash like rank just write your novel for ppl ho like your story

LV 14

Rairaidani

All good except writing skill i think. U just need keep writing and update new chapters as fast as u can😁 The plot and concept is classic jap novel? Well old but gold. Its harem? At least make all his woman pure. We dont like our future already used by someone isnt?? And mc already op in there so dont hold back when he do something then do it fast!!

LV 6

MagicSand

Its a great fanfic and i hope you dont drop this Also, you can try find an editor or consult to one because it kindof weird with the wording And you can try to write from 3rd person(author) point of view(POV) instead of just from the 1st(MC) POV

LV 6

newthings

5 stars to not drop and keep posting //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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Ireallylikereading

the description and title was so i think im gonna read