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La historia es vastante interesante sobre todo el desarrollo de la historia de los personajes principales. Al igual que el desarrollo de los sentimientos de cada personaje
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Isekai Maou to Shoukan Shoujo no Dorei Majutsu female Animanga roulette · 98kakera Claim Rank: #4338 Like Rank: #8694scencsj s x exwwx Wf Ef e ef Ef
If you have read My Wife is a Beautiful CEO, than no need to read this one just change the MC name to Naruto and fight with ninjutsu. I stopped reading after some chapters, because there was nothing new.
Author-san. .. Are nine tailed fox, transmigrate with naruto too? ? ?? ?? ? ?? ?? ?? ?? ? ?? ?? ?? ? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??
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It is almost a copy of the original story but thanks to this fan fic I've come to not like Naruto. This is my 2nd ff of this story and I can say the other seems better then the original. While this one seem to be a bit of a downgrade...
Lost me on chapter 1. Many mistakes, chapter is literally the script from Beautiful CEO but with Naruto, and for some reason his rent in china is only 2 dollars usd. A bowl of his ramen probably cost more than that. Also why are you not calling Rose, Rose? Calling her, her real name is not going to change the fact you pretty much copy and pasted this chapter.
Im just putting 5 stars for everything because i dont give 2 Fvcks.... i have not read this yet, so i wanna know two things and that is if naruto has his powers in this fan-fic and if he kills anyone like he’s supposed too🧐
Sad... THIS IS SO SAD! WHY THERE'S NO CHAPTER ANYMORE T_T Anyways, I only hope that the author would have enough energy once again to write this piece. I mean, I've spent days and nights to read this without rest, only to end up finding that the author isn't writing anymore... FREAK, I WANT MOOOOOOOREEEEEE!!!
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This story is interesting, but where are new chapters?..........,.,.,..,,..,.,.,.,.,,,,.,...,.,.,.,,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,..,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
The real story is to unique for you to have tried just to add Naruto and expected to be good. Naruto is a lil pussy everyone knows it and the main the dude is totally bad ass gives 2f about anyone so when you add Naruto it’s kind off like getting rid off Thanos in the avengers and putting Winnie the Pooh. It would of been nice if say you split it in 2 story and made your own main character in the first story and then in this one brought your Mc into this one as if he needed a break from all that happen kind off play and that way we would off been able to sort off know all his powers from the start and not have as many complains about it
There's not much to say I like...no, I love this novel Much better than the original Not so much of dramas . . . I hate the update frequency though I want more, more, more, and mooree
Everything is good but the grammar is iffy at some points. I've mentioned this via a review on chapter 100 on fanfiction.net already, but if you need a beta reader, please PM me (my main site is fanfiction.net). I'm willing to go over grammar (spelling, punctuation, etc) and syntax with you.
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lately .... i've been feeling to just give 1 star to many novels ..... so is it dropped? then so .. thank you for dropping this **** ................................................................................................................................................. if not then ........................ i feel sorry
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This one is under ranked really, only bcz the realese isnt as stabil as other.. The story it self was good really, its even better than cannon. And the harem was managed well, hell maybe theyll become sister later.
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Good story Lovable character Addictive Ninja Hypnotic Illusion NSFW Stable update Fan fiction of Naruto Just read it My wife is beautiful CEO, office lady, and so on
I really like the fact that Naruto is in a diffrent realm All the battles are so detailed that with a good imagination it is very easy to visualise the fights.Then again the way u balance his social life with his ninja life along with his hidden marriage life makes it more exciting cant wait to see the end.
The story is original although fan fic The Naruto character may a bit different than in comics, but IAM a a fan of my wife is beautiful CEO. The story is still follow the original story.
Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
The best fanfixtion ever...i read a lot of fanfixtion..and i dare to say this the best...i love the way you make naruto more mature and funny...I basically don't really like the canon...naruto in canon like a loudmouth but you naruto really badass and lady killer... Love you fanfiction sorry for my English though
La historia es vastante interesante sobre todo el desarrollo de la historia de los personajes principales. Al igual que el desarrollo de los sentimientos de cada personaje
ネタバレを明かす Isekai Maou to Shoukan Shoujo no Dorei Majutsu female Animanga roulette · 98kakera Claim Rank: #4338 Like Rank: #8694scencsj s x exwwx Wf Ef e ef Ef
If you have read My Wife is a Beautiful CEO, than no need to read this one just change the MC name to Naruto and fight with ninjutsu. I stopped reading after some chapters, because there was nothing new.
Author-san. .. Are nine tailed fox, transmigrate with naruto too? ? ?? ?? ? ?? ?? ?? ?? ? ?? ?? ?? ? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??
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ネタバレを明かす It is almost a copy of the original story but thanks to this fan fic I've come to not like Naruto. This is my 2nd ff of this story and I can say the other seems better then the original. While this one seem to be a bit of a downgrade...
Lost me on chapter 1. Many mistakes, chapter is literally the script from Beautiful CEO but with Naruto, and for some reason his rent in china is only 2 dollars usd. A bowl of his ramen probably cost more than that. Also why are you not calling Rose, Rose? Calling her, her real name is not going to change the fact you pretty much copy and pasted this chapter.
Im just putting 5 stars for everything because i dont give 2 Fvcks.... i have not read this yet, so i wanna know two things and that is if naruto has his powers in this fan-fic and if he kills anyone like he’s supposed too🧐
Sad... THIS IS SO SAD! WHY THERE'S NO CHAPTER ANYMORE T_T Anyways, I only hope that the author would have enough energy once again to write this piece. I mean, I've spent days and nights to read this without rest, only to end up finding that the author isn't writing anymore... FREAK, I WANT MOOOOOOOREEEEEE!!!
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This story is interesting, but where are new chapters?..........,.,.,..,,..,.,.,.,.,,,,.,...,.,.,.,,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,..,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
The real story is to unique for you to have tried just to add Naruto and expected to be good. Naruto is a lil pussy everyone knows it and the main the dude is totally bad ass gives 2f about anyone so when you add Naruto it’s kind off like getting rid off Thanos in the avengers and putting Winnie the Pooh. It would of been nice if say you split it in 2 story and made your own main character in the first story and then in this one brought your Mc into this one as if he needed a break from all that happen kind off play and that way we would off been able to sort off know all his powers from the start and not have as many complains about it
There's not much to say I like...no, I love this novel Much better than the original Not so much of dramas . . . I hate the update frequency though I want more, more, more, and mooree
Everything is good but the grammar is iffy at some points. I've mentioned this via a review on chapter 100 on fanfiction.net already, but if you need a beta reader, please PM me (my main site is fanfiction.net). I'm willing to go over grammar (spelling, punctuation, etc) and syntax with you.
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lately .... i've been feeling to just give 1 star to many novels ..... so is it dropped? then so .. thank you for dropping this **** ................................................................................................................................................. if not then ........................ i feel sorry
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This one is under ranked really, only bcz the realese isnt as stabil as other.. The story it self was good really, its even better than cannon. And the harem was managed well, hell maybe theyll become sister later.
Weak naruto 🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁🙁😔🙁😔🙁🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔😔🙁😔🙁🙁😔🙁🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁🙁😔🙁😔🙁😔🙁
Good story Lovable character Addictive Ninja Hypnotic Illusion NSFW Stable update Fan fiction of Naruto Just read it My wife is beautiful CEO, office lady, and so on
I really like the fact that Naruto is in a diffrent realm All the battles are so detailed that with a good imagination it is very easy to visualise the fights.Then again the way u balance his social life with his ninja life along with his hidden marriage life makes it more exciting cant wait to see the end.
The story is original although fan fic The Naruto character may a bit different than in comics, but IAM a a fan of my wife is beautiful CEO. The story is still follow the original story.
Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
The best fanfixtion ever...i read a lot of fanfixtion..and i dare to say this the best...i love the way you make naruto more mature and funny...I basically don't really like the canon...naruto in canon like a loudmouth but you naruto really badass and lady killer... Love you fanfiction sorry for my English though
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