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Other then the quality of how its written I can't read past the first chapter without getting a headache trying to understand it. .....................................................................
It's a bit troubling for me to re-read all the time to get to understand what the story is saying but I understand it's difficult to translate proper sentences and words in English if your not studied or a natural born English speaker it's a great story and I'm liking it more and more the only thing that really bugs me about this story is every time there is a female introduced to the story either the author or translator keeps referring to the protagonist opposite sex as him what are they some kind of lady boys please refer to the girls/women in the story as (HER/SHE) PLEASE do this
Hi just wondering if this novel will definently not be dropped Its hard finding a decent apocalypse novel that does not get dropped. My favorite a soul magicians apocalypse was so good yet was dropped. Please tell me if going to fishing the story
I enjoy that the character is working towards something and is dense about others feelings. he fights for what he thinks is right and uses everything he has even his thick skull lol
This novel is so good, it paces everything to perfection and doesn't focus on one thing for ages until it gets boring but at the same time isn't too fast either. The characters are really entertaining and they're not just shallow characters that are there just for the sake of it instead they are all different in personality and have different qualities about them. The MC is a good guy but at the same time isn't some pushover who'll watch someone get beat up even if the attacker has got a big status. OVERALL: FUCKING AMAZING NOVEL... apart from the fact there's only 51 chapters at the moment.
The grammar in the story are for people who don’t mind mistakes but if you do mind the mistakes then this novel is not for you. Overall the story is pretty good not unique though but good.
Ok your a Filipino. English is Filipino's first and second language. You should check the spellings of your word or are you doing the wrong spelling of word on purpose? I like the story so far but the words are making me dizzy. You should rewrite the wrong words or simply edit it so that it can be readable.
Awesome I really like this story so far I hope that there is like a file dump of chapters so I can read them in excess it's a really great story so far and I'm looking forward to seeing more chapters and this turning into a great novel.
Completely enjoyed it hope... more lol 😂 thank you I completely enjoyed it I was so pull in the journey ty Completely enjoyed it hope... more lol 😂 thank you I completely enjoyed it I was so pull in the journey ty Completely enjoyed it hope... more lol 😂 thank you I completely enjoyed it I was so pull in the journey ty Completely enjoyed it hope... more lol 😂 thank you I completely enjoyed it I was so pull in the journey ty
This is a very good Apocalyptic story about Alexander who returns to the past after he died while fighting monsters & changes the future while getting a system that helps him improve very fast. Unfortunately the author has dropped this novel since about 3 months. Author please resume this novel. Why did you drop this novel? You did not even leave any notes explaining the reasons you did so.
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I really love the story line or the whole story ...............but it is hard to wait for the next update hays........ I hope the author can still continue writing this story
I really do enjoy this novel. I suggest you keep ensuring that he develops differently from others and I know its hard to motivate yourself but this story does deserve some credit it's much better than other novels Ive seen before so dont drop
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I'm currently just discovered this story. I have a high hopes with this based on the title. I hope you continue this till the end. .......................
Hoho i see another filipino author hahah. I will support it hahhaha.................................................. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . .. .
Great story. The author is improving as he write this story and that's really a good point. The story is generic, but who cares. Apocalypse for the win. It's still too early, but it really have potential.
I don't know who's brainfuc*s rated 1 star without reading this story, don't mind them author your story is good I hope this review can motivate you more, so keep up the good work
I like this novel, the release rate is 7 per week or so? but overall good story keep it up 140---------$! %! %! '';%-%;%:%;$! $$! $;$+%! $;$+$($! $+$$+$
.... Was going to read this until I saw all the fake reviews... Shame.. When 90% of the reviews are from the same 2 people.. It shows how bad a story need to be overall.. I have a feeling its your account or a friends... Just wow.. Well at least I didn't waste my time..
Just started reading it on chapter 8, so far good. I have read a lot of story with the end of the world topic and so far so good. Keep up the good work.
this is my first story after quitting wattpad and you know what I love it it just that there's so little chapter so author pls add more.....................
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I like the Apocalypse back in time setup. Inclduing that the apocalypse already started which makes the story Unique in a way, as normaly they all get back to before it. I have high hopes for this novel. And as everybody hope for more release. :=)
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good I like this novel..... pls don't drop. pls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't drop
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Other then the quality of how its written I can't read past the first chapter without getting a headache trying to understand it. .....................................................................
It's a bit troubling for me to re-read all the time to get to understand what the story is saying but I understand it's difficult to translate proper sentences and words in English if your not studied or a natural born English speaker it's a great story and I'm liking it more and more the only thing that really bugs me about this story is every time there is a female introduced to the story either the author or translator keeps referring to the protagonist opposite sex as him what are they some kind of lady boys please refer to the girls/women in the story as (HER/SHE) PLEASE do this
Hi just wondering if this novel will definently not be dropped Its hard finding a decent apocalypse novel that does not get dropped. My favorite a soul magicians apocalypse was so good yet was dropped. Please tell me if going to fishing the story
I enjoy that the character is working towards something and is dense about others feelings. he fights for what he thinks is right and uses everything he has even his thick skull lol
This novel is so good, it paces everything to perfection and doesn't focus on one thing for ages until it gets boring but at the same time isn't too fast either. The characters are really entertaining and they're not just shallow characters that are there just for the sake of it instead they are all different in personality and have different qualities about them. The MC is a good guy but at the same time isn't some pushover who'll watch someone get beat up even if the attacker has got a big status. OVERALL: FUCKING AMAZING NOVEL... apart from the fact there's only 51 chapters at the moment.
The grammar in the story are for people who don’t mind mistakes but if you do mind the mistakes then this novel is not for you. Overall the story is pretty good not unique though but good.
Ok your a Filipino. English is Filipino's first and second language. You should check the spellings of your word or are you doing the wrong spelling of word on purpose? I like the story so far but the words are making me dizzy. You should rewrite the wrong words or simply edit it so that it can be readable.
Awesome I really like this story so far I hope that there is like a file dump of chapters so I can read them in excess it's a really great story so far and I'm looking forward to seeing more chapters and this turning into a great novel.
Completely enjoyed it hope... more lol 😂 thank you I completely enjoyed it I was so pull in the journey ty Completely enjoyed it hope... more lol 😂 thank you I completely enjoyed it I was so pull in the journey ty Completely enjoyed it hope... more lol 😂 thank you I completely enjoyed it I was so pull in the journey ty Completely enjoyed it hope... more lol 😂 thank you I completely enjoyed it I was so pull in the journey ty
This is a very good Apocalyptic story about Alexander who returns to the past after he died while fighting monsters & changes the future while getting a system that helps him improve very fast. Unfortunately the author has dropped this novel since about 3 months. Author please resume this novel. Why did you drop this novel? You did not even leave any notes explaining the reasons you did so.
ネタバレを明かす I really love the story line or the whole story ...............but it is hard to wait for the next update hays........ I hope the author can still continue writing this story
I really do enjoy this novel. I suggest you keep ensuring that he develops differently from others and I know its hard to motivate yourself but this story does deserve some credit it's much better than other novels Ive seen before so dont drop
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I'm currently just discovered this story. I have a high hopes with this based on the title. I hope you continue this till the end. .......................
Hoho i see another filipino author hahah. I will support it hahhaha.................................................. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . .. .
Great story. The author is improving as he write this story and that's really a good point. The story is generic, but who cares. Apocalypse for the win. It's still too early, but it really have potential.
I don't know who's brainfuc*s rated 1 star without reading this story, don't mind them author your story is good I hope this review can motivate you more, so keep up the good work
I like this novel, the release rate is 7 per week or so? but overall good story keep it up 140---------$! %! %! '';%-%;%:%;$! $$! $;$+%! $;$+$($! $+$$+$
.... Was going to read this until I saw all the fake reviews... Shame.. When 90% of the reviews are from the same 2 people.. It shows how bad a story need to be overall.. I have a feeling its your account or a friends... Just wow.. Well at least I didn't waste my time..
Just started reading it on chapter 8, so far good. I have read a lot of story with the end of the world topic and so far so good. Keep up the good work.
this is my first story after quitting wattpad and you know what I love it it just that there's so little chapter so author pls add more.....................
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I like the Apocalypse back in time setup. Inclduing that the apocalypse already started which makes the story Unique in a way, as normaly they all get back to before it. I have high hopes for this novel. And as everybody hope for more release. :=)
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good I like this novel..... pls don't drop. pls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't droppls don't drop
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.