Supreme Truth of Chaos

For readers: hello, leaving some things clear this novel is good, despite the name suggesting an idiotic / poorly written adventure and it's just a story where the character is too much OP from the beginning. is not, so far (chapter 48), this kind of story, the characters are well treated the world's abilities and limitations are also respected (although not yet totally aborted) is a little slow nothing at the Monster level in Goshujin he and he will just leave the earth and enter the fantasy world now (48-50), but the previous chapters are not just filler, they enrich the main character and those around him, along with the base of the power and what the protagonist can do and what he can not (they are not boring), the fights are realistic and do not have convenient secret power drawn from the butt hole.vale just read at least 5-10 chapters to experiment. the stability of the releases is not good because of the extras that the author leaves at the end of the volumes. read the below only if you have already read the work and have patience, a lot of patience. 3 ° still in the theme, why does not he question and test his own ability? let's split it into three (shadow, dream and divine sense / soul), can it create shadow things? he can put other things in the shade (people objects)? he becomes a shadow then how fast can he run? How can he distort his body, does he avoid wounds in this way? Can he divide, stretch, grow, diminish or sleep in the shadow? or how weak he is bound to his body yet? now the dream, he did not wonder how he got into the loop after losing his arm? he may even be afraid when trying to enter that loop and be in a coma again, but this has not been passed on to us because the speed of the dream equals reality? we dream only in a small part of the sleep and it has no relation with the normal time, being able to be very fast or very slow 'answer: the dreams are being influenced by the protagonist that has like time of the real time. we were not given this information. finally the divine / soul sense (you did not name it) because he did not relate the awakening of power to the pain he felt when he left the loop? are clearly related, what are the properties of that sense? Is it circular? can be shaped? How cool is he? can be concentrated? expanded? why did not he try to improve that sense? Does it work in dreams? stay connected while he's sleeping? Can he move things with him? help reading? improves memorization? Can you imbue / mark something? he increased the reach after you mentioned ONE ONCE THERE LATER ????? WHY HAS NOT IT MENTIONED AGAIN ??? YOU FORGOT THE REACH, DO NOT YOU ??? end for now. 4 ° he 'trains' 4 things including the body (he only trains the body, or he has already reached the theoretical limit presented (shadow) or has no idea how to improve (dream) or still only ignores (sense)) , and as already mentioned he has talent for body training and is where we can see from the vision of the protagonist the difficulty of cultivation do not ignore / eliminate or facilitate and this for the protagonist since he is overly talented in other things he is good at physics, he is not as absurdly talented as he is in shadow. With that done now on the foundation building stage, he has 6 abilities, okay, for each element he has 6 standard abilities or more. protagonist chose this in specific? is it possible to train more than 6 before the semi-god stage? what possibly blocks this development? or is it only more effective for humans to move forward like this? to advance you have to understand what? the element or something that is related / simplified in the abilities? if the elementary is not standard, then the body also does not have to understand the body. the body itself, one of the abilities (understanding regeneration, strength etc) or even weapon that uses (fist, knife, sword)? Can elementals understand weapons, too? including staff? there are fighters what else can you produce with this world, energy and power? demons train the same things as humans or have other weapons elements? we train the arms and legs and the other races they train what? claws and teeth for dragons / beasts? tails and horns for demons? wings and halo for angels? branches and roots for trees? Thunder and acid for clouds? 5 ° this is the last and there are more warnings and things that I thought sitting on the throne or walking: the fights are good, I think that fights more realistic and without making things too absurdly big or complicated, at least in the physical, it makes us more tense by being closer to reality, usually the powerful ones in the works are immune to murders by cause of a thousand and one secret techniques that the murderers decided not to develop any against measure, already in the magic you can insert what you want there can exaggerate the will. As for the race, I will give my conception of some and you use them as inspiration (or not): demons - selfish and unstable race, born with a great physical and mental consciousness and sensibility even in the ultral / egg is already as easy as a normal human and when born in human terms is so sensitive that it is as if a human was drugged the because they tend to violence and men tend to massacre and fight for adrenaline, and women tend to ***, rape men and women, food and drink, and when they get older and / or can tame their the creation of harens, objects (art, weapons, food), reading and writing (searching) and the exploration of sexuality, the first self-control technique created was created by an extremely old and powerful female demon that took thousands of years of (peace acquired by having no one at his height) to tame his impulses and begin a long and problematic self-contemplation (with the right to various attacks of anger and frustration) and seeking other means of acquiring pleasure and satisfaction, which resulted in castles / houses, harens, created the first form of writing, speech, which were periodically destroyed by lighter anger / lust / frustration and hence the origin of technology, and society no longer self-destructive. they train in the control / directing of their impulses, strong bodies, the variations of the races have specialty and special organs like: horns wings and magical tails are the most common has several forms of reproduction. angels - race that originated from organic puppets, which is the evolution of an experiment where they placed special and modified parasites inside a live-dead puppet, which contained no significant damage to the heart and vessel veins after the fusion and resuscitation of the body , there was success in erasing the consciousness and in the improvement of the puppet power and intelligence, but the increase of the power of the puppet, caused the previously conscience stopped to move very little, in human terms, would be smaller than the movement of a near dead, but later of several events and for a long time, his small consciousness through his intelligence and improved power made a revolution by killing his creative race and creating a new society with different castes (described here: https://healingdeva.com/ranks-angels/). low-level angels (or eggs) have no consciousness at all and only after awakenings are they assigned to their caste and can grow in it. God is a mysteriously born entity within the network of angels' consciences, aiming to improve themselves and to the angels, all the awakened angels are attached to this network and contribute to it. the more powerful they are, the more busy and individual they are their consciousness, those with medium power have personality and consciousness similar to that of a common human, have the network and the race above all and all, while in contact with the network, enter in relationships but reproduce from cloning 1 angel can burn (and die) to generate 2 eggs at a time and if you put 1 egg is far away and can not put another egg without the help of another angel and even with help will die in the end , but with 2 angels one can try to generate an egg without receiving permanent damage. an angel only dies if he burns to generate 2 eggs or is destroyed, if he dies naturally or is killed he returns to the net and is reborn as an egg his conscience and memories serve as food for the net to compensate for the damage of death and loss of the body. As they clone they are born equal and change depending on the caste, personality and strength.

Writing Quality - you can not judge me now that I translate with google (I am pt-br) Stability of Updates - great Story Development - entertained me Character Design - I do not like them but they are good World Background - what would I most complain about in this review? Good but with holes fix the holes mentioned here and I improve to the note for 4.8 ... of all my accounts 5 of them

For readers: hello, leaving some things clear this novel is good, despite the name suggesting an idiotic / poorly written adventure and it's just a story where the character is too much OP from the beginning. is not, so far (chapter 48), this kind of story, the characters are well treated the world's abilities and limitations are also respected (although not yet totally aborted) is a little slow nothing at the Monster level in Goshujin he and he will just leave the earth and enter the fantasy world now (48-50), but the previous chapters are not just filler, they enrich the main character and those around him, along with the base of the power and what the protagonist can do and what he can not (they are not boring), the fights are realistic and do not have convenient secret power drawn from the butt hole.vale just read at least 5-10 chapters to experiment. the stability of the releases is not good because of the extras that the author leaves at the end of the volumes. read the below only if you have already read the work and have patience, a lot of patience. 3 ° still in the theme, why does not he question and test his own ability? let's split it into three (shadow, dream and divine sense / soul), can it create shadow things? he can put other things in the shade (people objects)? he becomes a shadow then how fast can he run? How can he distort his body, does he avoid wounds in this way? Can he divide, stretch, grow, diminish or sleep in the shadow? or how weak he is bound to his body yet? now the dream, he did not wonder how he got into the loop after losing his arm? he may even be afraid when trying to enter that loop and be in a coma again, but this has not been passed on to us because the speed of the dream equals reality? we dream only in a small part of the sleep and it has no relation with the normal time, being able to be very fast or very slow 'answer: the dreams are being influenced by the protagonist that has like time of the real time. we were not given this information. finally the divine / soul sense (you did not name it) because he did not relate the awakening of power to the pain he felt when he left the loop? are clearly related, what are the properties of that sense? Is it circular? can be shaped? How cool is he? can be concentrated? expanded? why did not he try to improve that sense? Does it work in dreams? stay connected while he's sleeping? Can he move things with him? help reading? improves memorization? Can you imbue / mark something? he increased the reach after you mentioned ONE ONCE THERE LATER ????? WHY HAS NOT IT MENTIONED AGAIN ??? YOU FORGOT THE REACH, DO NOT YOU ??? end for now.

For readers: hello, leaving some things clear this novel is good, despite the name suggesting an idiotic / poorly written adventure and it's just a story where the character is too much OP from the beginning. is not, so far (chapter 48), this kind of story, the characters are well treated the world's abilities and limitations are also respected (although not yet totally aborted) is a little slow nothing at the Monster level in Goshujin he and he will just leave the earth and enter the fantasy world now (48-50), but the previous chapters are not just filler, they enrich the main character and those around him, along with the base of the power and what the protagonist can do and what he can not (they are not boring), the fights are realistic and do not have convenient secret power drawn from the butt hole.vale just read at least 5-10 chapters to experiment. the stability of the releases is not good because of the extras that the author leaves at the end of the volumes. read the below only if you have already read the work and have patience, a lot of patience. For the author: for this dear author I only have complaints, 1 ° the name of the work is horrible does not attract any public, attracts those who like terror but drives them away because it has no terror, it does not attract those who like adventure because it does not seem to have a good adventure (it looks like the low-quality works that are only there to show harem and ***) and it drives away fans of this type because it has no *** and harem. I do not recommend that you change the name unless a better one comes up, but putting a '(adventure / fantasy / heavy fantasy / not terror)' should help direct the audience (I just entered the play because after reading 'my house of horrors' I wanted to read some more works of this style ... see how the name makes a difference).it was very long because I typed all my doubts and incocistencias of the work, I can not do more than read and point out the problems (and of course give my little pebbles) read at least the 1st and 5th. 2 ° Humans think and question, assuming this, because the protagonist does not ask or reflect on the obvious things? Since since the earth is connected to the other (which is twenty times bigger than the earth) also have other planets connected to it? one zero has to go to the other to go to the semi-god stage and they do not come back because their energy dissipates here, right? So where does this energy go? Does it enrich the planet or just disappear for no reason? and the gods they can not return to the earth? because? the cultivation described by the guy was created by humans? If yes then are there other types of internship? for example, little demon / great demon and king demon? perhaps Seraphim, Cherubs, Thrones, Dominions, Powers, Virtues, Principalities, Archangels, Angels, Geniuses of Humanity, demonstrating how the cultivation system can be different and broad? it would also be good not to vilify or glorify other races and keep faithful to their pre-definition, although you also have to balance that with the strangers of each race.

For readers: hello, leaving some things clear this novel is good, despite the name suggesting an idiotic / poorly written adventure and it's just a story where the character is too much OP from the beginning. is not, so far (chapter 48), this kind of story, the characters are well treated the world's abilities and limitations are also respected (although not yet totally aborted) is a little slow nothing at the Monster level in Goshujin he and he will just leave the earth and enter the fantasy world now (48-50), but the previous chapters are not just filler, they enrich the main character and those around him, along with the base of the power and what the protagonist can do and what he can not (they are not boring), the fights are realistic and do not have convenient secret power drawn from the butt hole.vale just read at least 5-10 chapters to experiment. the stability of the releases is not good because of the extras that the author leaves at the end of the volumes. read the below only if you have already read the work and have patience, a lot of patience. For the author: for this dear author I only have complaints, 1 ° the name of the work is horrible does not attract any public, attracts those who like terror but drives them away because it has no terror, it does not attract those who like adventure because it does not seem to have a good adventure (it looks like the low-quality works that are only there to show harem and ***) and it drives away fans of this type because it has no *** and harem. I do not recommend that you change the name unless a better one comes up, but putting a '(adventure / fantasy / heavy fantasy / not terror)' should help direct the audience (I just entered the play because after reading 'my house of horrors' I wanted to read some more works of this style ... see how the name makes a difference).it was very long because I typed all my doubts and incocistencias of the work, I can not do more than read and point out the problems (and of course give my little pebbles) read at least the 1st and 5th. 2 ° Humans think and question, assuming this, because the protagonist does not ask or reflect on the obvious things? Since since the earth is connected to the other (which is twenty times bigger than the earth) also have other planets connected to it? one zero has to go to the other to go to the semi-god stage and they do not come back because their energy dissipates here, right? So where does this energy go? Does it enrich the planet or just disappear for no reason? and the gods they can not return to the earth? because? the cultivation described by the guy was created by humans? If yes then are there other types of internship? for example, little demon / great demon and king demon? perhaps Seraphim, Cherubs, Thrones, Dominions, Powers, Virtues, Principalities, Archangels, Angels, Geniuses of Humanity, demonstrating how the cultivation system can be different and broad? it would also be good not to vilify or glorify other races and keep faithful to their pre-definition, although you also have to balance that with the strangers of each race. 3 ° still in the theme, why does not he question and test his own ability? let's split it into three (shadow, dream and divine sense / soul), can it create shadow things? he can put other things in the shade (people objects)? he becomes a shadow then how fast can he run? How can he distort his body, does he avoid wounds in this way? Can he divide, stretch, grow, diminish or sleep in the shadow? or how weak he is bound to his body yet? now the dream, he did not wonder how he got into the loop after losing his arm? he may even be afraid when trying to enter that loop and be in a coma again, but this has not been passed on to us because the speed of the dream equals reality? we dream only in a small part of the sleep and it has no relation with the normal time, being able to be very fast or very slow 'answer: the dreams are being influenced by the protagonist that has like time of the real time. we were not given this information. finally the divine / soul sense (you did not name it) because he did not relate the awakening of power to the pain he felt when he left the loop? are clearly related, what are the properties of that sense? Is it circular? can be shaped? How cool is he? can be concentrated? expanded? why did not he try to improve that sense? Does it work in dreams? stay connected while he's sleeping? Can he move things with him? help reading? improves memorization? Can you imbue / mark something? he increased the reach after you mentioned ONE ONCE THERE LATER ????? WHY HAS NOT IT MENTIONED AGAIN ??? YOU FORGOT THE REACH, DO NOT YOU ??? end for now. 4 ° he 'trains' 4 things including the body (he only trains the body, or he has already reached the theoretical limit presented (shadow) or has no idea how to improve (dream) or still only ignores (sense)) , and as already mentioned he has talent for body training and is where we can see from the vision of the protagonist the difficulty of cultivation do not ignore / eliminate or facilitate and this for the protagonist since he is overly talented in other things he is good at physics, he is not as absurdly talented as he is in shadow. With that done now on the foundation building stage, he has 6 abilities, okay, for each element he has 6 standard abilities or more. protagonist chose this in specific? is it possible to train more than 6 before the semi-god stage? what possibly blocks this development? or is it only more effective for humans to move forward like this? to advance you have to understand what? the element or something that is related / simplified in the abilities? if the elementary is not standard, then the body also does not have to understand the body. the body itself, one of the abilities (understanding regeneration, strength etc) or even weapon that uses (fist, knife, sword)? Can elementals understand weapons, too? including staff? there are fighters what else can you produce with this world, energy and power? demons train the same things as humans or have other weapons elements? we train the arms and legs and the other races they train what? claws and teeth for dragons / beasts? tails and horns for demons? wings and halo for angels? branches and roots for trees? Thunder and acid for clouds? 5 ° this is the last and there are more warnings and things that I thought sitting on the throne or walking: the fights are good, I think that fights more realistic and without making things too absurdly big or complicated, at least in the physical, it makes us more tense by being closer to reality, usually the powerful ones in the works are immune to murders by cause of a thousand and one secret techniques that the murderers decided not to develop any against measure, already in the magic you can insert what you want there can exaggerate the will. As for the race, I will give my conception of some and you use them as inspiration (or not): demons - selfish and unstable race, born with a great physical and mental consciousness and sensibility even in the ultral / egg is already as easy as a normal human and when born in human terms is so sensitive that it is as if a human was drugged the because they tend to violence and men tend to massacre and fight for adrenaline, and women tend to ***, rape men and women, food and drink, and when they get older and / or can tame their the creation of harens, objects (art, weapons, food), reading and writing (searching) and the exploration of sexuality, the first self-control technique created was created by an extremely old and powerful female demon that took thousands of years of (peace acquired by having no one at his height) to tame his impulses and begin a long and problematic self-contemplation (with the right to various attacks of anger and frustration) and seeking other means of acquiring pleasure and satisfaction, which resulted in castles / houses, harens, created the first form of writing, speech, which were periodically destroyed by lighter anger / lust / frustration and hence the origin of technology, and society no longer self-destructive. they train in the control / directing of their impulses, strong bodies, the variations of the races have specialty and special organs like: horns wings and magical tails are the most common has several forms of reproduction. angels - race that originated from organic puppets, which is the evolution of an experiment where they placed special and modified parasites inside a live-dead puppet, which contained no significant damage to the heart and vessel veins after the fusion and resuscitation of the body , there was success in erasing the consciousness and in the improvement of the puppet power and intelligence, but the increase of the power of the puppet, caused the previously conscience stopped to move very little, in human terms, would be smaller than the movement of a near dead, but later of several events and for a long time, his small consciousness through his intelligence and improved power made a revolution by killing his creative race and creating a new society with different castes (described here: https://healingdeva.com/ranks-angels/). low-level angels (or eggs) have no consciousness at all and only after awakenings are they assigned to their caste and can grow in it. God is a mysteriously born entity within the network of angels' consciences, aiming to improve themselves and to the angels, all the awakened angels are attached to this network and contribute to it. the more powerful they are, the more busy and individual they are their consciousness, those with medium power have personality and consciousness similar to that of a common human, have the network and the race above all and all, while in contact with the network, enter in relationships but reproduce from cloning 1 angel can burn (and die) to generate 2 eggs at a time and if you put 1 egg is far away and can not put another egg without the help of another angel and even with help will die in the end , but with 2 angels one can try to generate an egg without receiving permanent damage. an angel only dies if he burns to generate 2 eggs or is destroyed, if he dies naturally or is killed he returns to the net and is reborn as an egg his conscience and memories serve as food for the net to compensate for the damage of death and loss of the body. As they clone they are born equal and change depending on the caste, personality and strength. Writing Quality - you can not judge me now that I translate with google (I am pt-br) Stability of Updates - great Story Development - entertained me Character Design - I do not like them but they are good World Background - what would I most complain about in this review? Good but with holes fix the holes mentioned here and I improve to the note for 4.8 ... of all my accounts 5 of them

Pretty good novel! It has good character development, with a MC suffering setbacks and becoming stronger and developing as a character from a slightly normal man to a "cultivator" mindset. I also like the skill set of the MC how op and at the same time full of flaws it is with its "weakness" to direct combat.