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Please post more chapters it is really hard to find any nature type MC. If you need ideas I could give you a few like for the spirit it could be a Hearth Tree. The spirit could heal others, locate herbs, and have a space inside it that can nurture plants. The herb garden grows bigger the stronger he gets decreasing the time needed to mature and increase the medical properties of the herb. only humans with a nature type spirit can go in this space to cultivate increasing the age of the rings connected to that spirit. The idea comes from a combination of the sky poison pearl and royal wood spirit race from Against the Gods. So that he is not op right from the start you could start him a level 1 and you could give him twin spirits with the other being a gardeners spade. Long Live Summons could also be used as for ideas. you could set it to where the mc meets tang san's mom before his father did you could also save the girl form spirit hall before she gets raped you could also absorb the yin yang well to the garden space
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Your pokemon work is superb!!!!But still,I hope you can continue your other work as well....CIAO!!!!!''$;//;%%**'"$$&*;:'!#%&-;'!%357-;4😭😍😍❤❤4&76😊😍❤&-8💕😘😒😭😍%&:'$%78-&%346--/:"$&*-7😊😊😍❤😂😂&-;'%%5--65&
Yo so far i quite like it, is it possible for you to continue writing on it? much love Martial artist Btw would love to read more of the story
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Please post more chapters it is really hard to find any nature type MC. If you need ideas I could give you a few like for the spirit it could be a Hearth Tree. The spirit could heal others, locate herbs, and have a space inside it that can nurture plants. The herb garden grows bigger the stronger he gets decreasing the time needed to mature and increase the medical properties of the herb. only humans with a nature type spirit can go in this space to cultivate increasing the age of the rings connected to that spirit. The idea comes from a combination of the sky poison pearl and royal wood spirit race from Against the Gods. So that he is not op right from the start you could start him a level 1 and you could give him twin spirits with the other being a gardeners spade. Long Live Summons could also be used as for ideas. you could set it to where the mc meets tang san's mom before his father did you could also save the girl form spirit hall before she gets raped you could also absorb the yin yang well to the garden space
ネタバレを明かす Your pokemon work is superb!!!!But still,I hope you can continue your other work as well....CIAO!!!!!''$;//;%%**'"$$&*;:'!#%&-;'!%357-;4😭😍😍❤❤4&76😊😍❤&-8💕😘😒😭😍%&:'$%78-&%346--/:"$&*-7😊😊😍❤😂😂&-;'%%5--65&
Yo so far i quite like it, is it possible for you to continue writing on it? much love Martial artist Btw would love to read more of the story
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