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I don’t like yue Che pls take most of his girl and pls update I like this novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hi these the author i want to explain a thing a lot of you think that itachi is cold and pridful man but you are worng if he can live a normal life with his familly in konoha he will give everthing for that wish 2/ in these fanfic itachi well be the most powerful man because he has the power of higher dimension god (ATG is just a little Universe in a little Dimesion)
hi these the author i want to explain a thing a lot of you think that itachi is cold and pridful man but you are worng if he can live a normal life with his familly in konoha he will give everthing for that wish 2/ in these fanfic itachi well be the most powerful man because he has the power of higher dimension god (ATG is just a little Universe in a little Dimesion)
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Please, either learn basic English or stop writing, I understand that English is not your main/first language, but neither is mine. The writing is so bad that it actually hurts. I got to chapter 5 before getting a seizure. ANOTHER OPTION IS USING A BASIC ENGLISH TRANSLATOR INSTEAD OF TRYING TO KILL US WITH THAT S H I T. Sorry for being rude, but I needed to vent my emotions. Good idea for the novel by the way, just learn English and I think it would be a cool story.
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My eyes hurt... From the good idea to worst nightmare..... The inconsistencies character, damn.... Worst Itachi ever in stories.... Dropped and will never touch this book again
2nd chapter and I lost it!! please check the grammar before posting the chapters!! 2nd chapter and I lost it!! please check the grammar before posting the chapters!! 2nd chapter and I lost it!! please check the grammar before posting the chapters!!
First time i read this novel it's make me excited, but after i read until ch 5, the story is too rushed. I don't know why you do that and it's make me disappointed....
I’m legit dying of grammar mistakes in this story or novel. Author, please make improvements and revise all sentence before publishing. Overall, it could be great novel, but should try ask help from reader to make improvements on the novel.
Okay where we begin....... first your itachi suck, its not itachi its facking OC with name itachi Second, your character building is nonexistent Third, you dont even bother to explain your current world what change in the world you just follow canon without bother to explain any of the **** Forth, your writing like 12 years old kid who want to be writer without bother about any plot and plothole Im not trying to flame you, i just want to make you check your own fic before posting it to public and please check the character you want to write like WTH itachi not like your MC who like kid with sugar high Sorry for my bad english
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
sorry for the late days because i have a little thing to do so i will give three ch tomorrow thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you
Gonna leave this here. Only reason why im giving 3 stars in all except character design is cause in the first chap itachi acted like an over excited kid, Not like a former ANBU that was forced to kill his clan to avoid destruction and mayhem and to avoid weakening the forces of konoha enough to be susceptible to attacks. I want an unsung hero, so seeing the blatant disregard for the built up character of Itachi I lost interest immediately, only looked at the chapters not bothering to read. **. Kind off a diss but just plain saying 'y u no respict tachi's characta?'
ok good Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎
Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎
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Ok i know you will see it as a bad review but your novel is good although its a generic fanfic with itachi as a mc. Your grammar is the only thing thats keep me away from reading it. I tried i really tried but i cant for example yun che is his nephew not a niece, niece is for girls and the spell check your chapters befpre posting i know you want to post a chapter constantly but it looks like rushed maybe read it 3 times to check the spelling that all .its a good fanfic keep on improving.
Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi. Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi. Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi. Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi. Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi.
Uhhhhh...this is not how itachi is like. Suddenly hating yunche because he is incompetent with ****ty veins. Please don't spoil our itachi with your ****ty influence. I get it, you hate yunche cause you read the novel and dislike his arrogance and personality as the protagonist. But please do not bring itachi uchiha into the same level as you. He's better then that. He's itachi of the uchiha clan, not a character influenced by author sans hate for yunche. Would've been betta if it was the true itachi uchiha.
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Your grammar is so bad it's not even funny. All throughout the novel you have not gotten any better. Actually, you seem to be getting worse. Please get an editor or at least use something like Grammarly.
Good novel as I'm a fan of itachi this novel and won 5 stars just hope that this chu yuechan in his harem the rest I do not care ...........
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hi these the author i want to explain a thing a lot of you think that itachi is cold and pridful man but you are worng if he can live a normal life with his familly in konoha he will give everthing for that wish 2/ in these fanfic itachi well be the most powerful man because he has the power of higher dimension god (ATG is just a little Universe in a little Dimesion) 3/he have the source power of deathGod (like zhao feng in KOG) and thank you for watch and read my fanfic
hey, Sry but i think the idea behind your story is good but........ I just cant read it. If you would sometimes spell the words wrong or use the wrong tense it would be ok but this........... I just cant i really wanted to read on but noop,i cant.......
Hello there PrimeofDestruction. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
ネタバレを明かす I don’t like yue Che pls take most of his girl and pls update I like this novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hi these the author i want to explain a thing a lot of you think that itachi is cold and pridful man but you are worng if he can live a normal life with his familly in konoha he will give everthing for that wish 2/ in these fanfic itachi well be the most powerful man because he has the power of higher dimension god (ATG is just a little Universe in a little Dimesion)
hi these the author i want to explain a thing a lot of you think that itachi is cold and pridful man but you are worng if he can live a normal life with his familly in konoha he will give everthing for that wish 2/ in these fanfic itachi well be the most powerful man because he has the power of higher dimension god (ATG is just a little Universe in a little Dimesion)
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Please, either learn basic English or stop writing, I understand that English is not your main/first language, but neither is mine. The writing is so bad that it actually hurts. I got to chapter 5 before getting a seizure. ANOTHER OPTION IS USING A BASIC ENGLISH TRANSLATOR INSTEAD OF TRYING TO KILL US WITH THAT S H I T. Sorry for being rude, but I needed to vent my emotions. Good idea for the novel by the way, just learn English and I think it would be a cool story.
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My eyes hurt... From the good idea to worst nightmare..... The inconsistencies character, damn.... Worst Itachi ever in stories.... Dropped and will never touch this book again
2nd chapter and I lost it!! please check the grammar before posting the chapters!! 2nd chapter and I lost it!! please check the grammar before posting the chapters!! 2nd chapter and I lost it!! please check the grammar before posting the chapters!!
First time i read this novel it's make me excited, but after i read until ch 5, the story is too rushed. I don't know why you do that and it's make me disappointed....
I’m legit dying of grammar mistakes in this story or novel. Author, please make improvements and revise all sentence before publishing. Overall, it could be great novel, but should try ask help from reader to make improvements on the novel.
Okay where we begin....... first your itachi suck, its not itachi its facking OC with name itachi Second, your character building is nonexistent Third, you dont even bother to explain your current world what change in the world you just follow canon without bother to explain any of the **** Forth, your writing like 12 years old kid who want to be writer without bother about any plot and plothole Im not trying to flame you, i just want to make you check your own fic before posting it to public and please check the character you want to write like WTH itachi not like your MC who like kid with sugar high Sorry for my bad english
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
sorry for the late days because i have a little thing to do so i will give three ch tomorrow thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you
Gonna leave this here. Only reason why im giving 3 stars in all except character design is cause in the first chap itachi acted like an over excited kid, Not like a former ANBU that was forced to kill his clan to avoid destruction and mayhem and to avoid weakening the forces of konoha enough to be susceptible to attacks. I want an unsung hero, so seeing the blatant disregard for the built up character of Itachi I lost interest immediately, only looked at the chapters not bothering to read. **. Kind off a diss but just plain saying 'y u no respict tachi's characta?'
ok good Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎
Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎
ネタバレを明かす you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid you are doing good job don't listen to the stupid
Ok i know you will see it as a bad review but your novel is good although its a generic fanfic with itachi as a mc. Your grammar is the only thing thats keep me away from reading it. I tried i really tried but i cant for example yun che is his nephew not a niece, niece is for girls and the spell check your chapters befpre posting i know you want to post a chapter constantly but it looks like rushed maybe read it 3 times to check the spelling that all .its a good fanfic keep on improving.
Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi. Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi. Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi. Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi. Shitty novel. This ain't my itachi.
Uhhhhh...this is not how itachi is like. Suddenly hating yunche because he is incompetent with ****ty veins. Please don't spoil our itachi with your ****ty influence. I get it, you hate yunche cause you read the novel and dislike his arrogance and personality as the protagonist. But please do not bring itachi uchiha into the same level as you. He's better then that. He's itachi of the uchiha clan, not a character influenced by author sans hate for yunche. Would've been betta if it was the true itachi uchiha.
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Your grammar is so bad it's not even funny. All throughout the novel you have not gotten any better. Actually, you seem to be getting worse. Please get an editor or at least use something like Grammarly.
Good novel as I'm a fan of itachi this novel and won 5 stars just hope that this chu yuechan in his harem the rest I do not care ...........
go on don't drop it go on don't drop it $ go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it go on don't drop it
hi these the author i want to explain a thing a lot of you think that itachi is cold and pridful man but you are worng if he can live a normal life with his familly in konoha he will give everthing for that wish 2/ in these fanfic itachi well be the most powerful man because he has the power of higher dimension god (ATG is just a little Universe in a little Dimesion) 3/he have the source power of deathGod (like zhao feng in KOG) and thank you for watch and read my fanfic
hey, Sry but i think the idea behind your story is good but........ I just cant read it. If you would sometimes spell the words wrong or use the wrong tense it would be ok but this........... I just cant i really wanted to read on but noop,i cant.......
Hello there PrimeofDestruction. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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