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Its pretty meh, not as good as some of they other works. But even those are dropping in quality. Didn't find it too engaging or anything to draw me into the plot or story. Maybe it'll get better but judging from the recent release of his other works I don't have high hopes.
I hope you'll make him more romantic like that guys said overthr. >.<!! Kalan is really dense,, and I hate it when he try to dump Bulma! but still I really like your novel... :D!!
Can’t wait for more stories from you I love your main work and the hair one does deserve more love and I know I’m gonna like this story as well
Is this novel gonna be long, or just a short novel for the contest's sake? Also i agree, make the MC less dense. In ur other novel he is like the typical saiyan, all muscle, very little brain.
Try to make the mc a more romantic man pleased. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . According to your last work he was sorta dense, let me rephrase it REALLY DENSE
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Its pretty meh, not as good as some of they other works. But even those are dropping in quality. Didn't find it too engaging or anything to draw me into the plot or story. Maybe it'll get better but judging from the recent release of his other works I don't have high hopes.
I hope you'll make him more romantic like that guys said overthr. >.<!! Kalan is really dense,, and I hate it when he try to dump Bulma! but still I really like your novel... :D!!
Can’t wait for more stories from you I love your main work and the hair one does deserve more love and I know I’m gonna like this story as well
Is this novel gonna be long, or just a short novel for the contest's sake? Also i agree, make the MC less dense. In ur other novel he is like the typical saiyan, all muscle, very little brain.
Try to make the mc a more romantic man pleased. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . According to your last work he was sorta dense, let me rephrase it REALLY DENSE
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.