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The story is well developed and the characters have good character design and there's even a developing romance. However, the story is placed on hiatus and does not seem to be continued any time soon. I suggest you look at another novel now
I loved it but mid way the author stopped posting. I want to read more of this novel.manu of the novels in webnovel never get updated, I hate it when it happens like you have started a novel, no matter how bad it is (this one is good) you should at least give one chapter a week for those that read them.
Semi-decent story, though not my cup of tea. Really slow in the beginning, even up to this point, which is where I leave. Hopefully others will enjoy this story, whereas I can't.
Good novel, interesting story and god characters. ...................,....,...,,,.......................,....,......,.,................................................................................................................
Good start of a story. Yes it is a bit slow at the start for the MC's power but it is starting to roll. READ IT! if you like SciFi cultivation storys set a few years from today.
One of the best Modern World stories I have ever read on this site. Seamlessly links the fantasy concepts with concepts currently ambiguous in the current world, making it easier to understand and comprehend the intent of the author. This Phoenix apporves it.
Great character building on sophisticated characters. Interesting society. A different spin on cultivation novels more of a scientific progress over a metifisical existence makes it easier to understand the state of the world. So far so good I look forward to the day when I can gift you some spirit stones to make your life as an author easier and have a few more releases. Keep up the good work.
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Great chapter It shows planning and foresight for the MC on how he is starting to develop his recovery to the top. Would love to see the chapters a little longer. But overall great plot development.
The (author) story is knowledgeable about real life history, geography and etc. Updates are quite stable, Story development is not that bad, I really like the main character cause he loves and sacrifices himself for his sister yet he still has a more realistic personality because he can be greedy too, And plus he is smart!
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thx for the novel :D _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It was quite dark in the first few chapters but it gets better after that.Overall I like the way its heading and I hope the quality doesnt drop. Rjrjdjdjfjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjdjfjdjdkdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjfjdjfndndndnfjfjfjfjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjjdjdjfjfj
Great great great story you should continue to write this way, show emotion to readers let it be more challenging to guess what happen I hope you reach top of webnovel Good luck
I already have over 300,000 words floating around on various web novel sites... I would like to say that I am not a total rookie and know what entails good story telling. This work is a crystallization of my realizations through the course of my stint at writing. All I can say is, according to me, this is a great addition to your reading list. Don't believe me? Want to refute me? Give it a chapter to draw you in. I guarantee, you won't be able to stop at just one.
The story is well developed and the characters have good character design and there's even a developing romance. However, the story is placed on hiatus and does not seem to be continued any time soon. I suggest you look at another novel now
I loved it but mid way the author stopped posting. I want to read more of this novel.manu of the novels in webnovel never get updated, I hate it when it happens like you have started a novel, no matter how bad it is (this one is good) you should at least give one chapter a week for those that read them.
Semi-decent story, though not my cup of tea. Really slow in the beginning, even up to this point, which is where I leave. Hopefully others will enjoy this story, whereas I can't.
Good novel, interesting story and god characters. ...................,....,...,,,.......................,....,......,.,................................................................................................................
Good start of a story. Yes it is a bit slow at the start for the MC's power but it is starting to roll. READ IT! if you like SciFi cultivation storys set a few years from today.
One of the best Modern World stories I have ever read on this site. Seamlessly links the fantasy concepts with concepts currently ambiguous in the current world, making it easier to understand and comprehend the intent of the author. This Phoenix apporves it.
Great character building on sophisticated characters. Interesting society. A different spin on cultivation novels more of a scientific progress over a metifisical existence makes it easier to understand the state of the world. So far so good I look forward to the day when I can gift you some spirit stones to make your life as an author easier and have a few more releases. Keep up the good work.
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Great chapter It shows planning and foresight for the MC on how he is starting to develop his recovery to the top. Would love to see the chapters a little longer. But overall great plot development.
The (author) story is knowledgeable about real life history, geography and etc. Updates are quite stable, Story development is not that bad, I really like the main character cause he loves and sacrifices himself for his sister yet he still has a more realistic personality because he can be greedy too, And plus he is smart!
ネタバレを明かす thx for the novel :D _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It was quite dark in the first few chapters but it gets better after that.Overall I like the way its heading and I hope the quality doesnt drop. Rjrjdjdjfjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjdjfjdjdkdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjfjdjfndndndnfjfjfjfjfjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjfjjdjdjfjfj
Great great great story you should continue to write this way, show emotion to readers let it be more challenging to guess what happen I hope you reach top of webnovel Good luck
I already have over 300,000 words floating around on various web novel sites... I would like to say that I am not a total rookie and know what entails good story telling. This work is a crystallization of my realizations through the course of my stint at writing. All I can say is, according to me, this is a great addition to your reading list. Don't believe me? Want to refute me? Give it a chapter to draw you in. I guarantee, you won't be able to stop at just one.
Good story and characters