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Well cool story btw no doubt about that but listen man this is not how it works. In atg verse there are something called laws ok the true god and creation god knows how to use laws ok. So even if you go super saiyan god blue it ain't gonna work. but I like the story so 5☆, good 👍 work. bye bye
I liked it so much I loved it, the story and the story is incredible, the personality of the protoganist doesn’t need to change, and the harem is forming incredible, I hope he comes back soon from the hiatus, I highly recommend
I quite liked this story, It's a shame that it was dropped. If you haven't read it you should. The idea of a saiyan in a cultivation world like this and how the different power systems and abilities clash is quite interesting. I like the MC's backstory, mindset, development, and ability. Quite a fun read.
.....................................................this is simply one of the best ATG fanfiction out there if you drop this I will hunt you down and make you continue writing
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Is this dropped? I really loved this story and hope it starts up again someday. I still find myself checking for updates every week or so. :P
Awesome story, i like the concept of a the mc already being a god lvl entiety. The start was by far the best with his reaction towards the betrayal alongside response. His past was decently explained and whether intentional or not, the best thing about this story were the references to team4star or even Escanor. He didnt treat ChuYuechan or however u spell her name like a goddess and she actually fell for him over a period of time, in a logical way, atleast compared most ****ty romances in cultivation novels. Love this novel alot and do keep up the good work. Best of luck with the rewrite. Ps: Did i forget to mention that DBZ, no matter which series is my absolute fav anime of all time so that earnt u a default vote from me and im pretty sure many other. Peace my fellow dragon'sball lover😏
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It's pretty good . First few chapters are backstory that's pretty useless. The mc is pretty bad, too cold and cruel for an Atg fanfic. If the story changed to a kinder mc who actually tried to participate in the romance it would be great
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Love the story at-least its not like the origin that is super long and has a super massive plot armor. The only downside is the updates there has been a long period that this was not updated at-least the author gave a note of what is happening.
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parte delle persone lì credono nel principio del commercio equo. Per quanto riguarda la giustizia assoluta, penso che si riferisca alle dottrine più rigide. Se sei uno di questi, puoi scegliere di unirti a loro. " Lu Sheng scosse leggermente la testa. Non era una buona scelta. “Allora sceglierò la setta del ramo verde. Quando posso partire? " “Tra cinque giorni. Prenderò le disposizioni e qualcuno verrà per te. La persona porterà il mio segno; fai attenzione a non confonderlo con un nemico ", affermò semplicemente Zhuang Jiu. "Tutto a posto."
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I like the novel but in my opinion being a sayan is already op and the trick of having control of the genes is even more op and therefore speeds up the story too much, choose one of the two and in my humble opinion one of the best fanfiction will come out ever created. (choose gene control and the most suitable in a world full of inheritances and bloodlines like ATG)
Its really interesting to read simply it gives you excitement because its unique and more its overpowered what do you want more than that plus he also have a saiyan ang genetic access so removing limiter per zenkai boost will be really really op love you work keep it up
I just started and finished reading this in an hour and it's super interesting! Honestly, of all the fan fictions I've read, this one has proven to be the best one on here so far! Yes, the world background isn't the authors, but this story has just proven to be so damn interesting and gripping that I could not put it down! I just want to read more chapters now!
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Overall the story is great, the writing is good and the MC OP and I like it, good job. I wish there author will start update the novel faster.
todo iba bien los primeros 50 capitulos pero no se que demonios le paso al autor que despues, de la nada le da un supuesto "rival destinado" y el cerebro del MC se vuelve pasta cerebral que lo deja volverse mas fuerte y incluso mas tarde sigue sin importarle una desgracia para tan buena novela
I like the book, even If it May be childish at some Times and similar, its still a good read, the only problem i have about the book is its updating really.
So, where is the harem? The guy is constantly rambling about wanting emotions and now he is only running away from them doest want to have anything to do with love doesnt take any relationship seriously and doesnt even try to kill his enemy while 1. He is a otaku so he knows to avoid clichés and 2. He has more than enouge power to kill him
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Please update Author-San i wan more because this is something i like and i have some similarities with Mc so i want read more about him. Thanks for the work.
I am very bad at making reviews but just from reading a lil bit, I like it, also when I first read the description and seen the disclaimer I thought/read it like in those commercials where at the end the person says stuff but its sped up faster sounding like a chipmunk
MC is overpowered and is not very emotional; exactly the type of MC I like. 140 characters, 140 characters,140 characters, 140 characters, 140 characters, 140 characters
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Well cool story btw no doubt about that but listen man this is not how it works. In atg verse there are something called laws ok the true god and creation god knows how to use laws ok. So even if you go super saiyan god blue it ain't gonna work. but I like the story so 5☆, good 👍 work. bye bye
I liked it so much I loved it, the story and the story is incredible, the personality of the protoganist doesn’t need to change, and the harem is forming incredible, I hope he comes back soon from the hiatus, I highly recommend
I quite liked this story, It's a shame that it was dropped. If you haven't read it you should. The idea of a saiyan in a cultivation world like this and how the different power systems and abilities clash is quite interesting. I like the MC's backstory, mindset, development, and ability. Quite a fun read.
.....................................................this is simply one of the best ATG fanfiction out there if you drop this I will hunt you down and make you continue writing
nice!!!😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌
Is this dropped? I really loved this story and hope it starts up again someday. I still find myself checking for updates every week or so. :P
Awesome story, i like the concept of a the mc already being a god lvl entiety. The start was by far the best with his reaction towards the betrayal alongside response. His past was decently explained and whether intentional or not, the best thing about this story were the references to team4star or even Escanor. He didnt treat ChuYuechan or however u spell her name like a goddess and she actually fell for him over a period of time, in a logical way, atleast compared most ****ty romances in cultivation novels. Love this novel alot and do keep up the good work. Best of luck with the rewrite. Ps: Did i forget to mention that DBZ, no matter which series is my absolute fav anime of all time so that earnt u a default vote from me and im pretty sure many other. Peace my fellow dragon'sball lover😏
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It's pretty good . First few chapters are backstory that's pretty useless. The mc is pretty bad, too cold and cruel for an Atg fanfic. If the story changed to a kinder mc who actually tried to participate in the romance it would be great
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More please More please More please More please ........,....................................................................................
Love the story at-least its not like the origin that is super long and has a super massive plot armor. The only downside is the updates there has been a long period that this was not updated at-least the author gave a note of what is happening.
Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.Harem.harem.harem.
parte delle persone lì credono nel principio del commercio equo. Per quanto riguarda la giustizia assoluta, penso che si riferisca alle dottrine più rigide. Se sei uno di questi, puoi scegliere di unirti a loro. " Lu Sheng scosse leggermente la testa. Non era una buona scelta. “Allora sceglierò la setta del ramo verde. Quando posso partire? " “Tra cinque giorni. Prenderò le disposizioni e qualcuno verrà per te. La persona porterà il mio segno; fai attenzione a non confonderlo con un nemico ", affermò semplicemente Zhuang Jiu. "Tutto a posto."
ネタバレを明かす I like the novel but in my opinion being a sayan is already op and the trick of having control of the genes is even more op and therefore speeds up the story too much, choose one of the two and in my humble opinion one of the best fanfiction will come out ever created. (choose gene control and the most suitable in a world full of inheritances and bloodlines like ATG)
Its really interesting to read simply it gives you excitement because its unique and more its overpowered what do you want more than that plus he also have a saiyan ang genetic access so removing limiter per zenkai boost will be really really op love you work keep it up
I just started and finished reading this in an hour and it's super interesting! Honestly, of all the fan fictions I've read, this one has proven to be the best one on here so far! Yes, the world background isn't the authors, but this story has just proven to be so damn interesting and gripping that I could not put it down! I just want to read more chapters now!
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Overall the story is great, the writing is good and the MC OP and I like it, good job. I wish there author will start update the novel faster.
todo iba bien los primeros 50 capitulos pero no se que demonios le paso al autor que despues, de la nada le da un supuesto "rival destinado" y el cerebro del MC se vuelve pasta cerebral que lo deja volverse mas fuerte y incluso mas tarde sigue sin importarle una desgracia para tan buena novela
I like the book, even If it May be childish at some Times and similar, its still a good read, the only problem i have about the book is its updating really.
So, where is the harem? The guy is constantly rambling about wanting emotions and now he is only running away from them doest want to have anything to do with love doesnt take any relationship seriously and doesnt even try to kill his enemy while 1. He is a otaku so he knows to avoid clichés and 2. He has more than enouge power to kill him
ネタバレを明かす Please update Author-San i wan more because this is something i like and i have some similarities with Mc so i want read more about him. Thanks for the work.
I am very bad at making reviews but just from reading a lil bit, I like it, also when I first read the description and seen the disclaimer I thought/read it like in those commercials where at the end the person says stuff but its sped up faster sounding like a chipmunk
MC is overpowered and is not very emotional; exactly the type of MC I like. 140 characters, 140 characters,140 characters, 140 characters, 140 characters, 140 characters
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!!
where can I read the rest of the chapters?