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Wind Hoths is nothing. His father, his mother, his whole entire family agreed. After the events of that fateful day, he was expelled from all he knew and loved. No more fancy cars, no more girls, no more power. His father's last fatherly act was to send him away to a planet at the edge of the universe. Barely even colonized Wind Hoths was relegated to his house playing VR games on the net.
But the universe works in mysterious ways.
A misplaced USB plugged into the wrong computer gave him the most magical thing, a system.
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A good story so far with an interesting way of using the system genre. I like the use of the system only giving a basic step into mastering skills and then it is up to the MC to work hard to develop those skills. Not so much of a plot or world building so far but as it is only 6 chapters in you wouldn't expect there to be and hopefully it's a slow build up to learning about the rest of the "universe" instead of the MC learning everything about it in a "chance in counter". Alot that the author can do with this novel and it is just up to him/her to be as creative as he/she likes and take this novel in a direction that will keep the readers entertained. 4 stars so far as its only 6 chapters in and the world building, character design and story development is only in its infant stages. Hopefully the story will develop well so it can get up to five stars.
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