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Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
Good job author, for your second language your English is very clear. I just thought that I'd tell anybody looking at this book that the MC has the basic good guy personality. Also with the stereotype love insterest of a whiny brat like personality. So if you like that type of people this book is for you!!!
And1, it's a fucking awesome read, keep it up, but I would like some more content, because I breeze through it way to quick. Already said your grammar sucks, but I forget that I am pretty much a grammar Nazi and I have problems. 👍
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Very weird but also find myself coming back for more, a well portrayed original that is certainly original! Happy with what has been posted so far but I hope to see more in depth character building in the future! Good kuck author and congrats on this fantastic work!!
It's not the best grammar, but the story is pretty good, a fun read if you don't have anything else to do, waiting for more chapters to know how the story develops.
I know it's a bit absurd that I value my own work. But I want to explain some of the circumstances that surround me and, therefore, affect my novel. English is not my native language, therefore, I have many grammatical errors, it is my first webnovel and I also have errors because of that, I will never complain about receiving bad comments but do not hurt my feelings strongly (be gentle senpai), I will thank all the errors or advice that you leave in the comments. I am an engineering student, writing is a hobby for me, from which I do not obtain any monetary benefit, if I ever obtained it it would be to pay a translator / editor (If someone wants to apply for a free editor I am willing) to increase the speed and improve the quality. That's why I ask you a little patience, I know that some chapters can be disappointing, but I will try my best to improve my English and grammar at the same time. Regarding the story, I started very fast because it was part of Writing Prompts Contest # 10, which I was lucky to win. The story will go a little slower, in a more detailed way. My idea is a novel with action and romance. There are many things that are not explained, but I plan to make a long webnovel so do not worry, you will discover it slowly. Finally, thank you very much to all the people who read me, who take the time to comment and value my little hobby. Thanks for being part of this!
It’s really weird, though it has potential, i love the idea of a wolf wife. I don’t think it should had taken the cultivation/Xianxia route though. There are also a lot of grammar errors. I’ll keep in touch just in case things Improve and I can’t really rate this since it’s to soon
Its a good read and though its a bit rushed ,needs editing and some stuff is left unexplained I really liked it. .................................................................................................................................................................................................
Engaging and fun to read hope to see more of the story and where they go with it. The action the happens seems at odds with the characters age in the story.
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
Good job author, for your second language your English is very clear. I just thought that I'd tell anybody looking at this book that the MC has the basic good guy personality. Also with the stereotype love insterest of a whiny brat like personality. So if you like that type of people this book is for you!!!
And1, it's a fucking awesome read, keep it up, but I would like some more content, because I breeze through it way to quick. Already said your grammar sucks, but I forget that I am pretty much a grammar Nazi and I have problems. 👍
😮😮😮😮👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Very weird but also find myself coming back for more, a well portrayed original that is certainly original! Happy with what has been posted so far but I hope to see more in depth character building in the future! Good kuck author and congrats on this fantastic work!!
It's not the best grammar, but the story is pretty good, a fun read if you don't have anything else to do, waiting for more chapters to know how the story develops.
I know it's a bit absurd that I value my own work. But I want to explain some of the circumstances that surround me and, therefore, affect my novel. English is not my native language, therefore, I have many grammatical errors, it is my first webnovel and I also have errors because of that, I will never complain about receiving bad comments but do not hurt my feelings strongly (be gentle senpai), I will thank all the errors or advice that you leave in the comments. I am an engineering student, writing is a hobby for me, from which I do not obtain any monetary benefit, if I ever obtained it it would be to pay a translator / editor (If someone wants to apply for a free editor I am willing) to increase the speed and improve the quality. That's why I ask you a little patience, I know that some chapters can be disappointing, but I will try my best to improve my English and grammar at the same time. Regarding the story, I started very fast because it was part of Writing Prompts Contest # 10, which I was lucky to win. The story will go a little slower, in a more detailed way. My idea is a novel with action and romance. There are many things that are not explained, but I plan to make a long webnovel so do not worry, you will discover it slowly. Finally, thank you very much to all the people who read me, who take the time to comment and value my little hobby. Thanks for being part of this!
It’s really weird, though it has potential, i love the idea of a wolf wife. I don’t think it should had taken the cultivation/Xianxia route though. There are also a lot of grammar errors. I’ll keep in touch just in case things Improve and I can’t really rate this since it’s to soon
Its a good read and though its a bit rushed ,needs editing and some stuff is left unexplained I really liked it. .................................................................................................................................................................................................
Engaging and fun to read hope to see more of the story and where they go with it. The action the happens seems at odds with the characters age in the story.