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From the description of the book you can already tell this is going to be a laugh out loud comedy. I mean the kid barely acts like he can crack a smile. And that just leads to a lot of ridiculous
This story has potentiel but is wasted because of a third wheel she isn’t even funny and even if you try to read without being angered with eva third wheel skill it’s still impossible To not be angered
before i start,this novel is great and one of the best on the site. but many people may drop this after v2 is complete. basically first two volumes just think are fillers with comedy while from 3rd volume you get into alex's past and the story becomes less funny and slightly dark. i would have liked the story to be funny throughout but don't mind me still the story is nice after 2nd volume but i prefer the first 2. my fav part of the story which i rarely ever tell was the harem. one of the rare time i wanted a harem because eva deserved it even after fighting in losing cause for alex's love and there were only 2 members if anyone doesn't like harem.
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I thought I would make another review after having finished reading it. Please enjoy this spoiler free review. Overall it’s a great read. While there were little things that bothered me here and there, it’s not bad. The grammar was great, with minimal mistakes (to my recollection). Where and were, were interchanged on a frequent basis, but that’s it, aside from proper terms being not used like great uncle was instead used as “other grandfather”. The writing quality was pretty good and grew it would seem as he wrote. The story progression was also great. With the story only dragging a few times (at least for me). The characters all grow, especially the MC (Alex). Alex grows quite a bit. The author ended the story with a promise of a sequel, but as of writing this review the sequel is listed as being on hiatus with only 17 chapters (18 including a note, saying he didn’t like the way it’s started and is going to restart it). By no means is the story left on a cliffhanger. The book came to a close, but left room for the sequel, especially with how it ended. Although I will say, as of at this moment the sequel isn’t based around Alex, but it does seem interesting. It’s also set years after the events of this book. I think around 10 years after, but I could be wrong. Anyways to wrap things up, the book was rather enjoyable. Some tears were shed as I read, alongside of laughs and overall enjoyment. I would recommend the read, but everyone is different in their tastes, so maybe you won’t like it, who knows. At the very least if the summary interests you, give it a try, it might surprise you.
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I have completed reading this story and I am too disappointed. I regret reading it so much. The story development from modern age then war and then comes a time where human suddenly gain super power and fighting with animals who became stronger? And dying of the important character one after another. The thing I feel so revulsive and nauseating is the lead Alex married both Rachel and eva at the same time and plus both the ladies have birth and live together. They shared partners under one roof....so they were fucking turn by turn. And atlast, those who died are in heaven....fighting and drinking together with there enemy. Seriously, don't go for this story of you are looking for a realistic story. It's pathetic.
I am currently on chapter 404 and I want to finish the book but don’t have enough coins/ fast passes. I love the mercenary aspect, really wish I could find a book purely about mercenaries but this is the best I could find. Anyway this is an amazing book.
Imma coming from demon lord and got to say I have my hopes up. Gotta get meh exp as u see hehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
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I’ve probably left a review before but thought I’d make a new one now that I’m further in. The story is quite enjoyable and you get to watch the characters grow. It’s not a quick growth either like some stories where it seems way too fast and quite impossible. While the Tory does have some parts that seem to be slow, I wouldn’t say it drags either. There have been times where I take a break, but that’s more so just a break from reading books (ebooks). Ultimately I always plan to pick up reading the story again. If you’re looking for a fast paced book, this isn’t it. If you’re looking for a good read that’s enjoyable and might even make you smile because of the characters or even laugh a little, this is it. Also the score for updating I put to 4 because the book is finished (correct me if I’m wrong) and I have no idea how it was with it’s updating so I gave a 4 instead of a 5 for something that I know nothing of
this book was superb the character design and development were great. the background story of Alex, Rachel, and Evangeline were perfect. The setbacks that Alex faces and overcomes are well writin and the story is raped up well. The fact that Alex was part of the greyhound family was a shook and the fact that his grandfather was a psychopath that only cared for revenge on the empire left me speechless. the build up of Alex, Rachel, and Evangeline love triangle was flawless and at the end when he got married to both of them was great. the only thing i didn't like about this story was the fact the both Carlo and Lyner had to die, and the fact that Lyners son didn't get and ability, But i loved the rest of the story
ネタバレを明かすThe story is now over, and what a ride it's been. From a tale of the underdog who believed in himself and his comrades to befriending foes and earning the respect of others as well as finding his love and making a family after all his adventures but still having the vigor to continue beyond this book's end, I've enjoyed it all. The relationships, friendships, and battles were all tastefully done with a mix of different known genres like wuxia which might be unexpected, that shift to fantasy, but it all works along with all the grueling cliff hangers. My only wish is that the ending felt more definite but then again, it's kinda okay to feel that the story still continues (and it technically does lol). I felt like Epilogue 2 was more of an end with his son rather than the true final chapter but whatever, doesn't matter in the scheme of things. Great story and writing, thank you author lyner for sticking with it and finishing for us readers!
The characters are amazing, the story has OP characters, good plot and totally not bad romance. The comedy isn't all that bad as well. However, from a happy go lucky school life filled with romance and some wholesome family scenes ---goes to all out godd*mn war!! My heart hurt! But its good! Not a good idea to binge read if you're like me who becomes sad when reading stuff like this. It gets better though.
ネタバレを明かすFirst staring is good but sometimes book look good but between suddenly war broke and biologycal weapons and unrelated ending chapter I 🤔 writer is child under 20 and Bran under 10 Year go to doctor
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When I first read this book... the ML personality reminded me of the ML personality in this anime call “Full Metal Panic!” 😂😂😂😂😂😂 Plus it’s so funny how both the anime ml and novel ml is the same..
I thought this was going to be a serious war fiction but I'm glad that it started off light and simple. The comedy is very good thanks to the one-liners of the main character and his personality. I wish to see more development from the female lead as well.
I seem to have found this book late but I surely enjoyed it till the end. I hope that once I get to your other works I will be in the same mind set as this review says.
Just started. Loving this. 😙 Those one liners are just as valuable as gold... 😁 Love the reactions amongs the characters. Moreover it is my first time reading a novel with this kind of character background and humorous storyline.
Very interesting read....Those ending few chapters were totally unexpected....So by what month can we expect the sequel Sir Lyner????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I am really gonna be enjoying this book Thanks author Finally got what I needed to dispel xiantain from my system
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ネタバレを明かすImmediately from the description of a book I could tell this was a laugh out loud comedy. Can’t wait for more chapters to Come ouT.
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel and don't forget to give a review: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
From the description of the book you can already tell this is going to be a laugh out loud comedy. I mean the kid barely acts like he can crack a smile. And that just leads to a lot of ridiculous
This story has potentiel but is wasted because of a third wheel she isn’t even funny and even if you try to read without being angered with eva third wheel skill it’s still impossible To not be angered
before i start,this novel is great and one of the best on the site. but many people may drop this after v2 is complete. basically first two volumes just think are fillers with comedy while from 3rd volume you get into alex's past and the story becomes less funny and slightly dark. i would have liked the story to be funny throughout but don't mind me still the story is nice after 2nd volume but i prefer the first 2. my fav part of the story which i rarely ever tell was the harem. one of the rare time i wanted a harem because eva deserved it even after fighting in losing cause for alex's love and there were only 2 members if anyone doesn't like harem.
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I thought I would make another review after having finished reading it. Please enjoy this spoiler free review. Overall it’s a great read. While there were little things that bothered me here and there, it’s not bad. The grammar was great, with minimal mistakes (to my recollection). Where and were, were interchanged on a frequent basis, but that’s it, aside from proper terms being not used like great uncle was instead used as “other grandfather”. The writing quality was pretty good and grew it would seem as he wrote. The story progression was also great. With the story only dragging a few times (at least for me). The characters all grow, especially the MC (Alex). Alex grows quite a bit. The author ended the story with a promise of a sequel, but as of writing this review the sequel is listed as being on hiatus with only 17 chapters (18 including a note, saying he didn’t like the way it’s started and is going to restart it). By no means is the story left on a cliffhanger. The book came to a close, but left room for the sequel, especially with how it ended. Although I will say, as of at this moment the sequel isn’t based around Alex, but it does seem interesting. It’s also set years after the events of this book. I think around 10 years after, but I could be wrong. Anyways to wrap things up, the book was rather enjoyable. Some tears were shed as I read, alongside of laughs and overall enjoyment. I would recommend the read, but everyone is different in their tastes, so maybe you won’t like it, who knows. At the very least if the summary interests you, give it a try, it might surprise you.
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I have completed reading this story and I am too disappointed. I regret reading it so much. The story development from modern age then war and then comes a time where human suddenly gain super power and fighting with animals who became stronger? And dying of the important character one after another. The thing I feel so revulsive and nauseating is the lead Alex married both Rachel and eva at the same time and plus both the ladies have birth and live together. They shared partners under one roof....so they were fucking turn by turn. And atlast, those who died are in heaven....fighting and drinking together with there enemy. Seriously, don't go for this story of you are looking for a realistic story. It's pathetic.
I am currently on chapter 404 and I want to finish the book but don’t have enough coins/ fast passes. I love the mercenary aspect, really wish I could find a book purely about mercenaries but this is the best I could find. Anyway this is an amazing book.
Imma coming from demon lord and got to say I have my hopes up. Gotta get meh exp as u see hehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
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I’ve probably left a review before but thought I’d make a new one now that I’m further in. The story is quite enjoyable and you get to watch the characters grow. It’s not a quick growth either like some stories where it seems way too fast and quite impossible. While the Tory does have some parts that seem to be slow, I wouldn’t say it drags either. There have been times where I take a break, but that’s more so just a break from reading books (ebooks). Ultimately I always plan to pick up reading the story again. If you’re looking for a fast paced book, this isn’t it. If you’re looking for a good read that’s enjoyable and might even make you smile because of the characters or even laugh a little, this is it. Also the score for updating I put to 4 because the book is finished (correct me if I’m wrong) and I have no idea how it was with it’s updating so I gave a 4 instead of a 5 for something that I know nothing of
this book was superb the character design and development were great. the background story of Alex, Rachel, and Evangeline were perfect. The setbacks that Alex faces and overcomes are well writin and the story is raped up well. The fact that Alex was part of the greyhound family was a shook and the fact that his grandfather was a psychopath that only cared for revenge on the empire left me speechless. the build up of Alex, Rachel, and Evangeline love triangle was flawless and at the end when he got married to both of them was great. the only thing i didn't like about this story was the fact the both Carlo and Lyner had to die, and the fact that Lyners son didn't get and ability, But i loved the rest of the story
ネタバレを明かすThe story is now over, and what a ride it's been. From a tale of the underdog who believed in himself and his comrades to befriending foes and earning the respect of others as well as finding his love and making a family after all his adventures but still having the vigor to continue beyond this book's end, I've enjoyed it all. The relationships, friendships, and battles were all tastefully done with a mix of different known genres like wuxia which might be unexpected, that shift to fantasy, but it all works along with all the grueling cliff hangers. My only wish is that the ending felt more definite but then again, it's kinda okay to feel that the story still continues (and it technically does lol). I felt like Epilogue 2 was more of an end with his son rather than the true final chapter but whatever, doesn't matter in the scheme of things. Great story and writing, thank you author lyner for sticking with it and finishing for us readers!
The characters are amazing, the story has OP characters, good plot and totally not bad romance. The comedy isn't all that bad as well. However, from a happy go lucky school life filled with romance and some wholesome family scenes ---goes to all out godd*mn war!! My heart hurt! But its good! Not a good idea to binge read if you're like me who becomes sad when reading stuff like this. It gets better though.
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When I first read this book... the ML personality reminded me of the ML personality in this anime call “Full Metal Panic!” 😂😂😂😂😂😂 Plus it’s so funny how both the anime ml and novel ml is the same..
I thought this was going to be a serious war fiction but I'm glad that it started off light and simple. The comedy is very good thanks to the one-liners of the main character and his personality. I wish to see more development from the female lead as well.
I seem to have found this book late but I surely enjoyed it till the end. I hope that once I get to your other works I will be in the same mind set as this review says.
Just started. Loving this. 😙 Those one liners are just as valuable as gold... 😁 Love the reactions amongs the characters. Moreover it is my first time reading a novel with this kind of character background and humorous storyline.
Very interesting read....Those ending few chapters were totally unexpected....So by what month can we expect the sequel Sir Lyner????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I am really gonna be enjoying this book Thanks author Finally got what I needed to dispel xiantain from my system
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Immediately from the description of a book I could tell this was a laugh out loud comedy. Can’t wait for more chapters to Come ouT.