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The story has great potential, many interesting development based on technology and magic, good slice of life, i like it so far minus the romance. what i do enjoy about it the most is the fact that although it has a reincarnation trope, it has a valid explanation for the characters temperament and behavior compare with other isekai's that i have read, where most isekai MC's are given a decent background based on been well read which will gives us the assumption of been somewhat knowledgeable and become either psychotic, sociopaths or retarded. without any discernible explanation.
The story is excellent however there is a lack of updates so I was wondering if the story was dropped Please replyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Great story but lack of updates even after the author said there would be plus he doesn't keep us updated on the status of the book if he still going or if its dropped.
Sobrang interesanteng basahin. Walang lutang na storya. Lahat may ganap. Higit sa lahat aabangan mo talaga ang lahat ng kabanata. Minsan may pangit na eksena pero nababawi naman. Minsan di naayon sa gusto mong takbo ng storya pero ayos padin .
this book is incredibly interesting while having a fleshed-out backstory and lore/world mechanics. all of the mc's abilities are well explained and used in interesting ways. very well written... so far.
Its back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Did d hai fd fi d rfi r dr. Yuh r ti r uth s ti d guff s duh i I'd sy h HD duh duh uggs d fo gf DJ f do jill gee DJ juju fee DJ j.g sh h fan j.g d guh GSK kff d DJ u.s. sh h NY FAA DJ j.g uh
Very little action. Mostly a slice of life happy go lucky story. Cute yes. Not for me personaly. Almost no conflict, somehow. Very good writing tho and well thought out. So for those looking for a kinda bland, but relaxing read, here ya go.
This is the best slice of life, comedy, just non action packed novels I've ever read. If you want a laidifferent back story with some nice comedy mixed in here and there thenough this story is for you. It's lovely and I love it if hope the author keeps up the whole laid back vibe and I'm just really excited for the next update To the author keep up the great work I love your story
This is quite possibly the very best novel on QI which will never be finished. Let that soak in for a moment. This is the first novel I read when I check for updates. It is the first novel I spend my power stones on. And should it ever go premium, it will be the first novel I spend my spirit stones on. This is a slice of life type novel with wonderful and believable characters set in a unique and fascinating world. It is a pure joy to read and it is an amazing change of pace from the usual tropes and stereotypes I see too often in novels on this platform. Should you read this? Yes. Absolutely. I just hope it is updated more often.
The best thing about this story is the main character, and the abilities that he has because of his origin story. Also, the feel of this story is quite a bit different from the rest of the webnovels available on this site. It's slower and more peaceful. And even when there is some action it's presented in a different, somehow more realistic feeling way. All in all, a big fan, though sometimes the slowness of the story and releases can make me hope for a bit of a pickup, but only sometimes ;)
The story is nice and it provides a very good change of pace compared to other stories I've read. The Grammer is nice and the characters have a really good depth that makes them alive.
This book is amazing. The world building is incredible and I love the system the author has going on . The protagonist isn’t too op and best of all his personality isn’t some cliche. Characters grow and change from their experiences and have varied and different interpersonal relationships. I only have two complaints so far(chapter 90-ish), one is that the MC is a bit of a harem magnet. Nothing overly echi it’s just that most of the women around him seem to fall head over heels for him. Not sure how that will play out yet as there are other male side characters that will be available for the rejected women if he decides to go the single romance route. The other complaint is the update schedule is once a week at best and irregular at worst. I’m relatively fine with this since it’s probably helping the story quality, but I rather have longer chapters if they are gonna take a while to come out. Still it’s one of the highest quality stories on the site and it’s not some cliche copy or look alike.
GREAT READ Good book that covers reincarnation into a magic golem. You get to follow along with a new body that no one knows the limit of. A little high school drama thrown in because why not. The characters are well developed and have a good balance, which is nice that the author spends time filling in the character of everyone not just the MC.
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Could have been something special for the t.een/young @dult audience. The world-building is both interesting and well fleshed out. The magic system etc works. No stupid OP system. The MC is literally created in some underground lab and the "ingredients" are the reason he is OP. Not some convenient "god-figure". Also the author does a good job on the comedy aspect. Things turn for the worst when it comes to character design and interactions. For example the MC "itself" just a few pages after its creation just randomly/"out of the blue" adopts its creator as a grandfather and the crazy scientist (that never really wanted any kind of family) just reciprocates.... It's so..... i don't know what to call it really. The author gets away with a lot of things that make no sense just by leaving who the MC or what the MC actually is in limbo. Not human.Not shifter.Not a biological construct actually (!?). Not a child.Not a t.een.Not an @dult. All of the above at once/various combinations of the above(!?). It was too messed up for me after a while. Worth giving a shot tho. It might work for you.
Dude you know your novel made my day it have all aspect which i needed. From some time i was feeling very down . But while surfing through all thoese downgraded copy of wuxia novel i found your which was shining with holy light in it which instantly make me blissed and so that how my awssome 2 day went . Now but i have a problen as you see i have read all your chapter and i have nothing to read i ask my young lord to gave me more chapter or i will become demonic power practitioner and try cause havoc in your land.
The story is an interesting one, but, there is too much emphasis on details that don't really matter that much, it would be good if the writer should put in more action than more words.
Original storie. Follow the MC who come to a new world through invocation and meet is new family and learn how to use magic. The storie keep to be better. Nice mix between fun action learning and creation
I especially like the story so far as it is extremely refreshing to read unlike a lot of other novels which are simply about power ups. This story has a nice mix of fantasy and slice of life. The main character is lovable, especially since he is not a womanizer and pervert like alot of other protagonists (I would like it if it would stay like this in the future😄). On webnovel this is my absolute favourite novel!!!!!!
Love the story so far , love the snake up of the MC. The writing quality if great save a few glitches. It's captivating and funny at the same time also thrilling..
Great story, starts out very interesting, then settles down and slowly goes forward from there, even though it has a slow pace, it still draws you in for more. The Action is Sparse but still a good Quality and Same Goes for the Amount of Training the Main Character does. Hopefully in later chapters there will be more training and action. But for right now the Main Character is just adjusting to new life and bonding with his new family and friends(definitely thought it was a mistake to tell his secret to so many people, only his grandpa should know, and that's still one too many) but the story is slowly dropping with equal parts action, compellingness, & humor, can't wait to read more and see how the story and characters and their world develops. The author is sporadic with his release dates of chapters, but everyone has their own difficulties in life, so even tho it bothers me a bit, I understand not everyone has many things to do and sometimes things fall through the cracks. That being said this story is free so that also gives him more leeway and forgiveness than paid authors who miss their chapter upload dates(quotas). All in all thanx you author for writing a genuily interesting and compelling story that makes me want to read more...even if I can't. But still thanx and keep up the Great Work
This story is unique and Interesting. However, if you're the type that loves face paced, vengeance, face slapping sort of novel, then this is not for you. It is slow moving, and a build up of Zeph (MC) as he navigates through life and learns to live. There are some mysteries and plots happening, but that is not the main focus. To me, it's a nice balance of slice of life with drama. There is even some slight romance, family bonding, power building and freindship/allies forming. Give it a try. Updates are not frequent but it's worth the wait.
This story does a wonderfull job of bringing the reader into the wonders of a magical world. It breaks the typical stereotypes of what you would expect from magical races, and hits you in the feels repeatedly. It is light hearted however it also represents an intelligence in how magic functions in the world, and is well thought out and incredibly enjoyable to read. Character interactions are smooth and all in all an absolute pleasure to read. Thanks for the story!
there is nothing in this novel, just an old man who transfer into another world and act like a little kid and act cute with lot's of fluffy stuff, stay at home all the time play around , train to become a hero like living in a fantasy lala land and goes to school, that's all the story there is to it, the MC hasn't done anything in this novel, he was given everything, from status to power, while he acts cute and like a little kid, very N aive and ignorant about the world, and this novel is for little girls, sorry Mr. Author I'm dropping this novel, good luck.
I think it's a great story, I love the background and the follow thru of each character. I would love to get updates on chapters is the only thing negative that I have to say. 👍 to the author..
I really like this novel...its definitely wonderful..... the character is the best.. Its makes me want to read more.. It makes me feel warm at heart.. Really love it.. To the extent that i want to read Again and again.. 😊
Hey, are you okay author? It's been over a year since the last update. Did something happen to you? Did you just get tired of the book, or should we be worried?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Please come back author. ...................................................................................................................
The story has great potential, many interesting development based on technology and magic, good slice of life, i like it so far minus the romance. what i do enjoy about it the most is the fact that although it has a reincarnation trope, it has a valid explanation for the characters temperament and behavior compare with other isekai's that i have read, where most isekai MC's are given a decent background based on been well read which will gives us the assumption of been somewhat knowledgeable and become either psychotic, sociopaths or retarded. without any discernible explanation.
The story is excellent however there is a lack of updates so I was wondering if the story was dropped Please replyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Great story but lack of updates even after the author said there would be plus he doesn't keep us updated on the status of the book if he still going or if its dropped.
Sobrang interesanteng basahin. Walang lutang na storya. Lahat may ganap. Higit sa lahat aabangan mo talaga ang lahat ng kabanata. Minsan may pangit na eksena pero nababawi naman. Minsan di naayon sa gusto mong takbo ng storya pero ayos padin .
this book is incredibly interesting while having a fleshed-out backstory and lore/world mechanics. all of the mc's abilities are well explained and used in interesting ways. very well written... so far.
Its back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Did d hai fd fi d rfi r dr. Yuh r ti r uth s ti d guff s duh i I'd sy h HD duh duh uggs d fo gf DJ f do jill gee DJ juju fee DJ j.g sh h fan j.g d guh GSK kff d DJ u.s. sh h NY FAA DJ j.g uh
Very little action. Mostly a slice of life happy go lucky story. Cute yes. Not for me personaly. Almost no conflict, somehow. Very good writing tho and well thought out. So for those looking for a kinda bland, but relaxing read, here ya go.
This is the best slice of life, comedy, just non action packed novels I've ever read. If you want a laidifferent back story with some nice comedy mixed in here and there thenough this story is for you. It's lovely and I love it if hope the author keeps up the whole laid back vibe and I'm just really excited for the next update To the author keep up the great work I love your story
This is quite possibly the very best novel on QI which will never be finished. Let that soak in for a moment. This is the first novel I read when I check for updates. It is the first novel I spend my power stones on. And should it ever go premium, it will be the first novel I spend my spirit stones on. This is a slice of life type novel with wonderful and believable characters set in a unique and fascinating world. It is a pure joy to read and it is an amazing change of pace from the usual tropes and stereotypes I see too often in novels on this platform. Should you read this? Yes. Absolutely. I just hope it is updated more often.
The best thing about this story is the main character, and the abilities that he has because of his origin story. Also, the feel of this story is quite a bit different from the rest of the webnovels available on this site. It's slower and more peaceful. And even when there is some action it's presented in a different, somehow more realistic feeling way. All in all, a big fan, though sometimes the slowness of the story and releases can make me hope for a bit of a pickup, but only sometimes ;)
The story is nice and it provides a very good change of pace compared to other stories I've read. The Grammer is nice and the characters have a really good depth that makes them alive.
This book is amazing. The world building is incredible and I love the system the author has going on . The protagonist isn’t too op and best of all his personality isn’t some cliche. Characters grow and change from their experiences and have varied and different interpersonal relationships. I only have two complaints so far(chapter 90-ish), one is that the MC is a bit of a harem magnet. Nothing overly echi it’s just that most of the women around him seem to fall head over heels for him. Not sure how that will play out yet as there are other male side characters that will be available for the rejected women if he decides to go the single romance route. The other complaint is the update schedule is once a week at best and irregular at worst. I’m relatively fine with this since it’s probably helping the story quality, but I rather have longer chapters if they are gonna take a while to come out. Still it’s one of the highest quality stories on the site and it’s not some cliche copy or look alike.
GREAT READ Good book that covers reincarnation into a magic golem. You get to follow along with a new body that no one knows the limit of. A little high school drama thrown in because why not. The characters are well developed and have a good balance, which is nice that the author spends time filling in the character of everyone not just the MC.
ネタバレを明かす Could have been something special for the t.een/young @dult audience. The world-building is both interesting and well fleshed out. The magic system etc works. No stupid OP system. The MC is literally created in some underground lab and the "ingredients" are the reason he is OP. Not some convenient "god-figure". Also the author does a good job on the comedy aspect. Things turn for the worst when it comes to character design and interactions. For example the MC "itself" just a few pages after its creation just randomly/"out of the blue" adopts its creator as a grandfather and the crazy scientist (that never really wanted any kind of family) just reciprocates.... It's so..... i don't know what to call it really. The author gets away with a lot of things that make no sense just by leaving who the MC or what the MC actually is in limbo. Not human.Not shifter.Not a biological construct actually (!?). Not a child.Not a t.een.Not an @dult. All of the above at once/various combinations of the above(!?). It was too messed up for me after a while. Worth giving a shot tho. It might work for you.
Dude you know your novel made my day it have all aspect which i needed. From some time i was feeling very down . But while surfing through all thoese downgraded copy of wuxia novel i found your which was shining with holy light in it which instantly make me blissed and so that how my awssome 2 day went . Now but i have a problen as you see i have read all your chapter and i have nothing to read i ask my young lord to gave me more chapter or i will become demonic power practitioner and try cause havoc in your land.
The story is an interesting one, but, there is too much emphasis on details that don't really matter that much, it would be good if the writer should put in more action than more words.
Original storie. Follow the MC who come to a new world through invocation and meet is new family and learn how to use magic. The storie keep to be better. Nice mix between fun action learning and creation
I especially like the story so far as it is extremely refreshing to read unlike a lot of other novels which are simply about power ups. This story has a nice mix of fantasy and slice of life. The main character is lovable, especially since he is not a womanizer and pervert like alot of other protagonists (I would like it if it would stay like this in the future😄). On webnovel this is my absolute favourite novel!!!!!!
Love the story so far , love the snake up of the MC. The writing quality if great save a few glitches. It's captivating and funny at the same time also thrilling..
Great story, starts out very interesting, then settles down and slowly goes forward from there, even though it has a slow pace, it still draws you in for more. The Action is Sparse but still a good Quality and Same Goes for the Amount of Training the Main Character does. Hopefully in later chapters there will be more training and action. But for right now the Main Character is just adjusting to new life and bonding with his new family and friends(definitely thought it was a mistake to tell his secret to so many people, only his grandpa should know, and that's still one too many) but the story is slowly dropping with equal parts action, compellingness, & humor, can't wait to read more and see how the story and characters and their world develops. The author is sporadic with his release dates of chapters, but everyone has their own difficulties in life, so even tho it bothers me a bit, I understand not everyone has many things to do and sometimes things fall through the cracks. That being said this story is free so that also gives him more leeway and forgiveness than paid authors who miss their chapter upload dates(quotas). All in all thanx you author for writing a genuily interesting and compelling story that makes me want to read more...even if I can't. But still thanx and keep up the Great Work
This story is unique and Interesting. However, if you're the type that loves face paced, vengeance, face slapping sort of novel, then this is not for you. It is slow moving, and a build up of Zeph (MC) as he navigates through life and learns to live. There are some mysteries and plots happening, but that is not the main focus. To me, it's a nice balance of slice of life with drama. There is even some slight romance, family bonding, power building and freindship/allies forming. Give it a try. Updates are not frequent but it's worth the wait.
This story does a wonderfull job of bringing the reader into the wonders of a magical world. It breaks the typical stereotypes of what you would expect from magical races, and hits you in the feels repeatedly. It is light hearted however it also represents an intelligence in how magic functions in the world, and is well thought out and incredibly enjoyable to read. Character interactions are smooth and all in all an absolute pleasure to read. Thanks for the story!
there is nothing in this novel, just an old man who transfer into another world and act like a little kid and act cute with lot's of fluffy stuff, stay at home all the time play around , train to become a hero like living in a fantasy lala land and goes to school, that's all the story there is to it, the MC hasn't done anything in this novel, he was given everything, from status to power, while he acts cute and like a little kid, very N aive and ignorant about the world, and this novel is for little girls, sorry Mr. Author I'm dropping this novel, good luck.
I think it's a great story, I love the background and the follow thru of each character. I would love to get updates on chapters is the only thing negative that I have to say. 👍 to the author..
I really like this novel...its definitely wonderful..... the character is the best.. Its makes me want to read more.. It makes me feel warm at heart.. Really love it.. To the extent that i want to read Again and again.. 😊
Hey, are you okay author? It's been over a year since the last update. Did something happen to you? Did you just get tired of the book, or should we be worried?