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could not read the first chapter until the end it's too disgusting, and it's annoying that there's no lower score to give.
Trash grammar, immature story, horrible writing that you cannot make sense of. Even though the concept is interesting the things i mentioned above and many more make continuing this novel not possible for me at this moment. And honestly just look at the titles and you will understand the level of this novel.
At the start, I liked the story. The plot is good. But what has become painful to read is the repeated severe mental or physical injury of the main character at the end of every major arc. It is as if his abnormally massive good karma is just for show and he is plagued by bad luck Everytime he tries to do something major.
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How much of this did you take from desolate era? you took a ton of cultivation levels from that series can't wait to see what more you'll take from that book.
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the mc seems too naive and good hearted will it always be like this? or will he change ? i hate these naive mc's always forgiving. i bet he'll forgive his parents too who tried to kill him then he had to leave with his aunt to live in a distant village which caused his neighbour to die and aunt to get injured. but he will still forgive them i bet in the name of 'filal piety'. sigh i hope the mc dies and someone else reincarnates in his body. nice story but trash mc ruined it for me
I like the story and have recently been reading it and it is fantastic in my opinion and I hope there will be more chapters (currently chappter 496)
This is a lame novel. 01. Although the MC is supposed to be the Heavenly Dao Child, his progress and intelligence doesn't match that title. 02. This novel is being sold as a Xianxia, but there's a lot of unnecessary drama. Okay, these two points cover everything. I didn't find the beginning chapters interesting.
in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.
please give some love to this story. It's getting better and better. Yes, there are grammatical problems, but I can still understand the meaning. So yeah, you just need to be a better reader.
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The concept is great but the implimentation bad. There are too many glaring plot holes and interms of power levels or combat strength it's somewhat inconsistent. If only author had done a better job since the novel had great potential.
Its alright, sometimes the plot can be a bit ridiculous and strange. What really puts me off is the grammar. The Author tries to say too many things in one sentence and it ends up being a confusing jumble of words. It honestly reads like a machine translation. I can’t read this, purely becuase of the horrendous grammar and writing.
I really enjoy reading your story. Their are quite a few mistakes in the writing but its completely fine to me because not all stories are prefect. i also tealky enjoy the older sisters in the book.
weird wording and many basic mistakes ..............................................................................................
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Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.
The synopsis only is great. I havent even started reading the novel but im sure that this novel is greatness. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thanks for the novel 😄😀😁😃🙃😂😍😘😘😛😛🤪😜😝😝😜😘☺🙃😄😆🙃😊😗😚😗😚🤑😝☺😚😊😆🙃😅😁😅😉😊😘☺😘😜😗😛😗🤩🙃😄🙂😉🙃😘😊☺🤪😚🤪☺😙😀😃
I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences. The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up! Hope you get better!
I have no Idea on what to say about this book. I had such high hopes when I read the beginning and the author ruined it. First of all, I wish that the author can improve his writing style. Second, I believe that the plot could be adjust because this is kind of ridiculous. Third, the character development can also be improved.
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One of the best novel in webnovel. In the beginning, you will find some writing mistake but as the novel goes along the author improves a lot. In regards to the novel is has good character development. I definitely recommend.
I think, his cultivation is slow if compared with other MCs from other novels. He started cultivating from age 05, he had all the resources, all the books, the physiques of God tier body and dao child. With all these he cultivates really slow. Other MC starts really late and yet reach the peak withing 6 to 10 years at most within their universe. Only a xianxia reader that read many xianxia would understand that his cultivation is slow considering all the advantages he have. in the story it was said that he can gain enlightenment on Daos anytime he wants and yet he only has Sword, fire, alchemy, a bit of Ice dao and so. Author must remember the title of this novel seeks for OPness. But if in the story mc isn't as op as described in the titles then we will be disappointed. His cultivation is slow really slow. Instead of time skiping so much author should've fastened the cultivation speed.
Grammar is very bad. Dialogue is cringy. Couldn't get past these to aspects. Bht others seem to like it. Thank you author for your hard work, this is just my opinion, but I encourage you to keep it up. Writings super hard and the key is to write, it doesn't need be perfect or have everyone like it.
doctor said my heart may not hold on to long. pls relase it faster. maybe i can see more chapter while i am alive. why cannot be less than 140 char.
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i like how you have portrayed the MC since he was young instead of being someone who is already in his teens, the MC is strong but noway he without faults
to start love the story and mc i love the fact that he has naivety and if it wasn't for those fake sisters it would be better. second the writing is all over even in the 100s small spelling mistakes are made sometimes you have trouble even reading a sentence. third why did you put him close to such people their still making the same mistake all over again if ryuu wasnt so naive I think he would have left already or at the very least kept their relationship at a professional level. third at times you just skip out on parts to go to a future date then sometimes you will highlight parts that's not so important while making other parts that could be important seem small. fourth you started off with a heavenly dao child but then it seemed you didn't like that so you both slowed his cultivation and skipped over his whole training. fifth this book is great just missing a lot to get to awesome. maybe I'll come back one day to finish reading it.
could not read the first chapter until the end it's too disgusting, and it's annoying that there's no lower score to give.
Trash grammar, immature story, horrible writing that you cannot make sense of. Even though the concept is interesting the things i mentioned above and many more make continuing this novel not possible for me at this moment. And honestly just look at the titles and you will understand the level of this novel.
At the start, I liked the story. The plot is good. But what has become painful to read is the repeated severe mental or physical injury of the main character at the end of every major arc. It is as if his abnormally massive good karma is just for show and he is plagued by bad luck Everytime he tries to do something major.
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How much of this did you take from desolate era? you took a ton of cultivation levels from that series can't wait to see what more you'll take from that book.
ネタバレを明かす the mc seems too naive and good hearted will it always be like this? or will he change ? i hate these naive mc's always forgiving. i bet he'll forgive his parents too who tried to kill him then he had to leave with his aunt to live in a distant village which caused his neighbour to die and aunt to get injured. but he will still forgive them i bet in the name of 'filal piety'. sigh i hope the mc dies and someone else reincarnates in his body. nice story but trash mc ruined it for me
I like the story and have recently been reading it and it is fantastic in my opinion and I hope there will be more chapters (currently chappter 496)
This is a lame novel. 01. Although the MC is supposed to be the Heavenly Dao Child, his progress and intelligence doesn't match that title. 02. This novel is being sold as a Xianxia, but there's a lot of unnecessary drama. Okay, these two points cover everything. I didn't find the beginning chapters interesting.
in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.
please give some love to this story. It's getting better and better. Yes, there are grammatical problems, but I can still understand the meaning. So yeah, you just need to be a better reader.
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The concept is great but the implimentation bad. There are too many glaring plot holes and interms of power levels or combat strength it's somewhat inconsistent. If only author had done a better job since the novel had great potential.
Its alright, sometimes the plot can be a bit ridiculous and strange. What really puts me off is the grammar. The Author tries to say too many things in one sentence and it ends up being a confusing jumble of words. It honestly reads like a machine translation. I can’t read this, purely becuase of the horrendous grammar and writing.
I really enjoy reading your story. Their are quite a few mistakes in the writing but its completely fine to me because not all stories are prefect. i also tealky enjoy the older sisters in the book.
weird wording and many basic mistakes ..............................................................................................
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Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.
The synopsis only is great. I havent even started reading the novel but im sure that this novel is greatness. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thanks for the novel 😄😀😁😃🙃😂😍😘😘😛😛🤪😜😝😝😜😘☺🙃😄😆🙃😊😗😚😗😚🤑😝☺😚😊😆🙃😅😁😅😉😊😘☺😘😜😗😛😗🤩🙃😄🙂😉🙃😘😊☺🤪😚🤪☺😙😀😃
I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences. The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up! Hope you get better!
I have no Idea on what to say about this book. I had such high hopes when I read the beginning and the author ruined it. First of all, I wish that the author can improve his writing style. Second, I believe that the plot could be adjust because this is kind of ridiculous. Third, the character development can also be improved.
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One of the best novel in webnovel. In the beginning, you will find some writing mistake but as the novel goes along the author improves a lot. In regards to the novel is has good character development. I definitely recommend.
I think, his cultivation is slow if compared with other MCs from other novels. He started cultivating from age 05, he had all the resources, all the books, the physiques of God tier body and dao child. With all these he cultivates really slow. Other MC starts really late and yet reach the peak withing 6 to 10 years at most within their universe. Only a xianxia reader that read many xianxia would understand that his cultivation is slow considering all the advantages he have. in the story it was said that he can gain enlightenment on Daos anytime he wants and yet he only has Sword, fire, alchemy, a bit of Ice dao and so. Author must remember the title of this novel seeks for OPness. But if in the story mc isn't as op as described in the titles then we will be disappointed. His cultivation is slow really slow. Instead of time skiping so much author should've fastened the cultivation speed.
Grammar is very bad. Dialogue is cringy. Couldn't get past these to aspects. Bht others seem to like it. Thank you author for your hard work, this is just my opinion, but I encourage you to keep it up. Writings super hard and the key is to write, it doesn't need be perfect or have everyone like it.
doctor said my heart may not hold on to long. pls relase it faster. maybe i can see more chapter while i am alive. why cannot be less than 140 char.
ネタバレを明かす i like how you have portrayed the MC since he was young instead of being someone who is already in his teens, the MC is strong but noway he without faults
to start love the story and mc i love the fact that he has naivety and if it wasn't for those fake sisters it would be better. second the writing is all over even in the 100s small spelling mistakes are made sometimes you have trouble even reading a sentence. third why did you put him close to such people their still making the same mistake all over again if ryuu wasnt so naive I think he would have left already or at the very least kept their relationship at a professional level. third at times you just skip out on parts to go to a future date then sometimes you will highlight parts that's not so important while making other parts that could be important seem small. fourth you started off with a heavenly dao child but then it seemed you didn't like that so you both slowed his cultivation and skipped over his whole training. fifth this book is great just missing a lot to get to awesome. maybe I'll come back one day to finish reading it.