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I'm an All Stars System

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作者: AvaTheMage

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Wang Tian He is the 3rd Princess born in the great Wang’s Ancient Empire. She became skilled in the four arts: calligraphy, chess, painting, and Qin, just only at the small age of 7. Since she had the time and was bored with her life, she went to learn other arts. Then, 4 years later, she completely mastered dancing, acting, singing, and flute playing. Her family members were astounded that they birthed a genius, so they supported her in learning other arts. She was bored with arts for women, so she went ahead and started learning arts for men. Then, 5 years later, she became skilled in close combat martial arts, archery, horse backing riding, and sword fighting. However, on the day she mastered those skills and wanted to learn more, something happened.

System: “Host, you’re perfect to test this new ‘All Stars System!”

Tian He standing in a white space: “.....No.”

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*Warning*: May contain scenes not appropriate for young readers. (ex: sex)

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flakey0629

This is based on reading 8 chapters. I enjoy the characters, story, and writing quality so far, but I can't give a good review of the updates and background yet since it's only been 8 chapters. I like the FL since she says levelheaded. The other characters ...so far are likable but more needs to be written about them for me to get a better impression of them. I think this story has potential, so I look forward to reading more. If you are interested in reading about a female lead with a system, give it a try.

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Estelle

My kind of genre for system hopping world. But this is just still early review in the chapters. Mature? ☑️ Well thought plot? ☑️ Interesting MC? ☑️ Fluffy romance? ☑️ Straight to the point romance? ☑️ Angst plot here and then? ☑️

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AvaTheMage

Hello Everyone, First off, thank you for reading my novel! I just have one thought that I've always wanted to share for a while now. It is that I hope you all enjoy reading my novel as much as I enjoy writing it. Please tell me your feelings of the novel, I'll very much appreciate the feedback! P/S: It keeps me going, so please don't hold back. 😊

6yr
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fluffybootydesu

I'm writing a review since I really want to keep on reading this novel! I'm not sure how often chapters are updated, but I like how these chapters are longer than most original novels! As you keep reading, it only gets better, so I'd say give this novel a chance and read at least *2* chapters and then decide if you want to keep going or not. Also~ good luck Author! Fighting! Oh! Can I shamelessly ask for more chapters? I beg of you!! *Crawls and grabs pants with snot hanging from nose* (:

6yr
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Muizuwinda

I rate 5 star because this novel involved my favorites genre and that's entertainment or what I call showbiz with episodic structure. I hope this novel have romance too. Y(^_^)Y

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RoiRed
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Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation for readers who hesitate, see this as a "Quick Transmigration: Heroine Arrives, Woman Rapidly Retreats" focused on the world of entertainment 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...

6yr
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AJiminie

I love the plot. It's quite unique in a way that the elements, characters, and storyline are mixed together. For me, it's a new story to read that readers can surely enjoy.

6yr
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Julles

If you like system administrator stories you should give this one a try. I like the fact she didn't die just kidnapped * not spoilers first chaoter*. What I will probably like less is that she always leaves right away after the mission which is sad but also has it's good points since you see the original owner actually getting her dreams the writer should also try to use this and write how the original host does after she takes back over..... this way we get answer to the questions which the princess doesn't want to make since it should be left to the original host so that's a tip I have.... keep it up see slot of potential here...

6yr
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S1eepym00n

I love ❤️ this story so much! It’s very good. The descriptive words;the flow of the story; the characters personality, etc are awesome 😎👏. The most important part is that it effected my mood/feelings...it feels like I could go through the ups and downs of the characters mood/feelings portrayed in the story. For example, the second arc made me cry 😢. I started reading this story because I of the description...I feel it’s going to be interesting because the idea of it was somewhat different from the other systems and female mc novels that I read so far.(plus that I am a picky reader, it’s hard to find these same type of themes and the ideas in the story itself it’s not repetitive...to let me think 🤔 “oh it’s just another one of the same old thing”) I hope 🤞 that you will keep up the good work and maybe...hopefully finish this story. Thank you 😊 author for bringing this story into life and for your hard work. I am looking forward towards your next chapter. (Also I want to let you know I am your loyal fan of this work😊😍) Looking forward towards your next chapter. And I am sorry if there is too much words...hehe😋I tend to do that when I really like something.☺️

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WidestGrin

If I should say anything, then it would be...... IS THIS MAGIKYUN RENAISSANCE????? Why is the background so similar??????. . . . Apparently reviews need approx 140 words........soooooooo 😁😁😁😁😁😁 😬😬😬😬😬😬 🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐 Meeeh~meeeeh~ Is it 140 yet??? .. .. .. .. Sigh. Blah blah blah blah blah blah.

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doorlock

I like this type of story, and it's new plot which revolves around entertainment. But, the major turn off is the ML. He's the same ML like the other stories in this "quick-transmigrator" type of novel. Obsessive, stalker, insane, doesn't know a no and personal boundaries. I wish their personality is different.

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olfatlady

This story is lovely in developing the story behind both the male and female leads. Most system stories just focus on the main character, so receiving insight on both sides is refreshing and helps me connect to the story more easily! The second arc is much more smutty than the first arc to my surprise. Not in a bad way, but very contrasting.

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kenjivixen9

IAM giving you all stars because I really really love this novel ....please update more of it ... Best wishes ..author waiting for more updates

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lonnashad

I am really interested in this novel it’s a genre a like so it keeps me hooked the only downside is how frequently it’s updated but other than it it’s a wonderful novel so far and keep up the great work 😍😍👍👍

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Marou_08

This book is very interesting and I keep on thinking on what will her reaction would be when she knows that the one who she loves in every different world was the 2nd prince of the 1st world. Hahahhaha!!! I can wait to read that part. So, Author sama please update and release more chapter.

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Senku_Gen

Okay, I like this. I like how the story develop so far. It's refreshing. But I wish the story will be update more frequently. The quality of the writing is a bit off such as wrong grammar & vocabulary.

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FlowerBeauty

I really like the story. I like the plot and others. I hope author-nim will update soon. I'll patiently wait for it. Waaaah I'm so excited on what will happen next. Hehe

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EunoiaElysian

the story is quite good, although it needs stable updates. neeeeeeeedddd moaaarrrrr updaaateesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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Cyrnean
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Interesting story, but very poor updating rates. I like that she hops through different worlds on missions and gets to be a different person every time. It keeps the story really interesting and engaging. I didn’t want to put it down, so I’m really disappointed in the lack of updates.

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raeyne

I really appreciate that each chapter is pretty lengthy. There are few repetitions, but those are acceptable since the chapter has more to offer than that. I actually appreciate the plot, but I did not really like how ML is yandere/forceful since the start, that it almost became a non-consensual thing.. especially since FL did not like him yet then. He is why the rating is low. How FL fall for him was pretty fast too, which I guess is normal for webnovels, but I really hope there is some underlying reason somewhere that will explain this 😉 also hoping we get to see more ML redeeming points. Good job though, author.. Thanks for the hard work!

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