Reviews of The Predator by Nneeil - Webnovel

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Everything_Forever

Everything about this story sounds amazing! Well not everything,the first thing is why is there a stupid harem!? A lot of good novels were ruined because of idiotic harems! Another thing, the female lead? Really? I'm not saying anything thing about women but when the MC is a man shouldn't the woman be the supporting character instead of the lead along side the MC? Plus if there is a Harem why is one women getting special treatment? That is just really confusing. All and all the harem and female lead ruined this novel for me.

LV 4

Lord_Eternity

Well its a great and well executed story. Has a lot of potential. And plz i would like a harem of 5+ nice girls. More the merrier. Anyways as you can see most characters have intreasting backstories. Well i would appreciate if you can post faster...XD

LV 10

Srodek

This novel has really good start and the idea has a lot of potential i am allready waiting for New chapters. Characters are likeable and their reactions realistic.

LV 4

Hotwify19

Okay aggiornamento di review, Ciao , gia ti avevo dato un review, ma considero questo il miglior modo di contattarti. The predator è fantastico ha il giusto miscuglio di azione, commedia (frank xD) , Suspense, in più la cosa che mi è piaciuta di più è che non hai dato nomi strani al protagonista, cioè non l'hai chiamato qualcosa tipo "randindly", e questo fatto ti da un sacco di punti. Grammaticalmente , Non sono il migliore in inglese, ma se non leggevo che non eri nativo, probabilmente non me ne sarei mai accorto. Ora permetti una domanda ??? c'è qualche sito dove pubblichi prima capitoli??? oppure questo è il principale???

LV 11

ValcumDraco

So far so good. It has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see it will be reading this chapter after chapter..................................

LV 6

Haise99

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LV 4

Hotwify19

it's pretty good, the only thing i repent is to have started reading it with only 19 chapters, if i waited a bit i could have enjoyed more the read .....

LV 10

Jack02

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LV 4

LlMlTLESS

Awesome! MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR

LV 11

ValcumDraco

Lov3 this story and as much as it sucks to wait when ever i see that new chapter the wait was woth it keep it up can't wait to see what this story becomes

LV 14

dragon_among_men

keep going beautiful story news more chapter faster release rare pls. MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR

LV 11

ValcumDraco

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LV 14

dragon_among_men

five stars all the way only nine chapters and I'm impatient for more. grammer quality is really good. story is thrilling and I'm excited to see where its going

LV 5

Nneeil

This is my second time writing a novel, so I don't have much experience under my belt, also, take into consideration that English is not my native language, so grammatical errors are bound to slip off here and there. If you have any question regarding the novel, as long as it won't be a spoiler, I'll be more than happy to answer them.