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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Hi! I thought I should take a different approach to the story and add more details. I have also started to edit the chapters from the beginning so please enjoy.
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Good Concept and good potential. Poor update stability. Needs to improve language skills. .
The story is very interesting and the mc thinks before he acts what in my opinion is a good and rare thing. What I miss is to know a little bit more about what happened before he came back in time.
Hi All, happy to know that I’m the first reviewer here. To the author the novel looks interesting at least from as far as I ready and I’m expecting it will continue the same in the future. One suggestion is don’t have too many time skips as that will spoil the plot one of the fun thing about Novel is reading about the effort the MC had put to grow himself strong but don’t drag it.
ネタバレを明かす Hey! Guys its the author please tell me how I can improve the novel. I am also looking for an editor. I cannot pay anything it has to be on your accord. Please participate more in this novel. If anyone is interested please contact me asap. Email id - baxterbharat170@gmail.com
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Its realy very good concept...but u didnt updated it....please update soon i will wait for it.... Very good storyyyyyyyyy................... Very good storyyyyyyyyy................... Very good storyyyyyyyyy................... Very good storyyyyyyyyy................... Very good storyyyyyyyyy................... Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................Very good storyyyyyyyyy...................
Hi! I thought I should take a different approach to the story and add more details. I have also started to edit the chapters from the beginning so please enjoy.
Plz update more plz its good Xnxjxjdjdjsjsjisiwiwoowpwpsodididjdjcjcjxjcjcjcjcjcjcjcuduueheehjeidicudjebdjxiudejdhxjixuxjdhduxudueijduxueueujdjdjeuwoqppqidudywjnwlzoxirhdb
Wow keep it up and going Xnxnxjdjdjsjsjsjskksksskksksksksksksksksksowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowoowowowowowowwowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowoowowowowowowowowowowoowowowowowowowowowowowoowowowowowowowoowowowowowowowowowowowo
Good Concept and good potential. Poor update stability. Needs to improve language skills. .
The story is very interesting and the mc thinks before he acts what in my opinion is a good and rare thing. What I miss is to know a little bit more about what happened before he came back in time.
Hi All, happy to know that I’m the first reviewer here. To the author the novel looks interesting at least from as far as I ready and I’m expecting it will continue the same in the future. One suggestion is don’t have too many time skips as that will spoil the plot one of the fun thing about Novel is reading about the effort the MC had put to grow himself strong but don’t drag it.
ネタバレを明かす Hey! Guys its the author please tell me how I can improve the novel. I am also looking for an editor. I cannot pay anything it has to be on your accord. Please participate more in this novel. If anyone is interested please contact me asap. Email id - baxterbharat170@gmail.com
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.