Always You

LV 5

Daoist_Zhang_Dao

Me likey, me likey a lot! Very good story till now For writing quality, I give 4 dumplings because author-chan writes well but has some spelling/grammar errors here and there. For stability of updates I give 5 dumplings because only 10 chapters are out right now so it's hard to judge. I give the benefit of the dumpling to author-chan! For story development I give 5 dumplings because the story is well fleshed out till now, there is a good mysterious air in the plot and the flow is very good. For the character design, I give 5 dumplings because the characters are already very meaty in terms of emotions. Their personalities are fleshed out pretty well and fit the book. Author-chan, you are doing good! For world background, I give 3 dumplings because the world hasn't really been fleshed out but since it's only 10 chapters I give 1 bonus dumpling for a total of 4, not 1, not 2, not even 3 but 4 whole dumplings! Author-chan fight on! In total this book has stolen 23 dumplings from me gaining the title "Dumpling Rain" 0-4 = dumpling takeout 5-9 = dumpling platter 10-14 = dumpling feast 15-19 = dumpling buffet 20-24 = dumpling rain 25 = dumpling dragon gate Author-chan, Work Hard!

LV 5

mikay

looks good, waiting for more chapters s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2 s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2s2