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100% Beyond the Stars / Chapter 1: Chapter 1: … How did you come with me?

章 1: Chapter 1: … How did you come with me?

(Teaser for now, editing these couple of chapters, will try to update ASAP)

Light? No, not light. Darkness? No, not darkness- it, it felt like... like nothing at all. Emptiness. Yes, that's what it felt, empty but free. That was what she- wait she? Who was she? Or was he a he? Or an it? What was her name?

"Oh, you dumb woman… you can't go off killing yourself and then forget who you are?! You and that Ari boy honestly leave me speechless! That little Ari brat dare think he can kill me? Master of the Universe? Me the Undying Serpent? The All Mighty? The Incredible? As if!" a loud and obnoxious voice sounded out echoing into her mind.

"Who is that?"

"Oh, WHO IS ME?"

A green and greatly… small dragon, immediately appeared out of nowhere. (Think of a green Mushu from Mulan)

"I, I AM THE GREAT SERPENT OF THE UNIVERSE!"

"Serpent?"

"Yes!"

"Is it just Serpent? Or like, what is your name?"

"A name? WELL I AM THE GREAT SERPEN-"

"Yes, yes you said that already…"

"…"

" That brat Ari always called me serpent…"

"Ari?"

"Yes your boyfriend that sacrificed himself for you? The man who thought he could outsmart me?"

"My… boyfriend?"

"You still don't know who you are? Wow-that genius kid really chose a dumb person to sacrifice himself for"

"…."

A painful feeling suddenly coursed through its mind. Who am I? Screaming? Wake up, you dummy! You're –

"Diana!"

"Dian!"

A young teenage boy sitting in a chair snoozing suddenly woke up.

"Dian! What the heck are you doing?"\

"Huh?"

"Finally, you're awake! So, what did she say?"

"What?" Diana could not understand at all what they were talking about. Wait, what was this weird thing she felt in her pants? And her head was aching...

"… Did you lose your brain cells or something after you asked her out?"

"..." Diana remained silent.


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Ah, sorry about the chapters... For some reason some of the edits didn't save and I have to reeedit the chapters before multirelease. The teaser here was ok in terms of edited content, but the rest of it has to be edited. Have fun reading!

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