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It's a nice, complicated little story...... Auther expressed so much through this short story...... In most of the stories u would find a happy ending always and sometimes u get bored by it... It's like u already know what's gonna happen in the end..... But this one is different.... Although ending is sad but in a way it's not..... Now probably I have confused u😂😂😂.... But it's a nice story.... U shold definitely give it a try
A beautiful reality hit short story which makes us to travel in fastasy with the touch of magical poetic lines...I really liked the part where the descriptions of the lake side and the party....The way of writing... Really!! No words....wow....I really loved it!!
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Interesting story I have here......*cough cough*. This is a story about a one sided love and I'd say it's portraid beautifully. And though the chapters are as short as the book itself, I truly enjoyed (writing) it.
This story is interesting cause of the author's approach in the plot and the filler chapter was actually my favorite part. Though it was only a monologue, the chapter was very interesting as it showed the reality in our society and it revealed the hypocrisy of the adults.
Its okay. Good job author. Can't wait for moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...............................
It's a nice, complicated little story...... Auther expressed so much through this short story...... In most of the stories u would find a happy ending always and sometimes u get bored by it... It's like u already know what's gonna happen in the end..... But this one is different.... Although ending is sad but in a way it's not..... Now probably I have confused u😂😂😂.... But it's a nice story.... U shold definitely give it a try
A beautiful reality hit short story which makes us to travel in fastasy with the touch of magical poetic lines...I really liked the part where the descriptions of the lake side and the party....The way of writing... Really!! No words....wow....I really loved it!!
ネタバレを明かす Interesting story I have here......*cough cough*. This is a story about a one sided love and I'd say it's portraid beautifully. And though the chapters are as short as the book itself, I truly enjoyed (writing) it.
This story is interesting cause of the author's approach in the plot and the filler chapter was actually my favorite part. Though it was only a monologue, the chapter was very interesting as it showed the reality in our society and it revealed the hypocrisy of the adults.
Its okay. Good job author. Can't wait for moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...............................
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