Heartless

What? This ending didn't make sense at all.... It seemed like the author didn't know what to do with the story he/she developted and just ended it anyway. At fist it developted pretty well and the character was good too, but then started to happen things out of the blue with no explanation. Maybe it would be better if the author focus in only one story until it finish.... Because he/she got clomptetely lost in this one : (

Interesting short story. There's no real romance closure, but the author did a good job in the emotions that the characters expressed making this novel touching. I love the characters, but I just wish that we were able to have a little bit more backstory on the last pureblood vampyr. He just kinda suddenly appeared in the end. Though I am kinda happy that he only came at the end. I'm personally not too fond of the love ******** dramas. Plus it seems with the mc's character, she would kinda just act as if it was no big deal that someone was following her (that isn't the ml) I really like the author's story. Hopefully she/he can make another novel that is longer and planned.

I still don't know how to describe it.. but from the 1st to current chapter... Now I can get a little sync to this novel... can't wait for the next more chapter.. where the MC finally discover her love...