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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
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I think its good at the start, as there still are only 5 chapters.I suggest it to people who like magic novels and long chapters, EXTREMELY long chapters.
the author should just concentrate on one book first dont bite more than you can chew... pick one of the book and concentrate on it make it a better story, dont use too much overused tropes it will get boring arrrrggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡
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- 1 Dean Powers 6 years ago
- 2 Ready or Not 6 years ago
- 3 Let the Experiment Begin! 6 years ago
- 4 Unfathomable 6 years ago
- 5 The Demon King’s Trail. 6 years ago
- 6 The First Incident 6 years ago
- 7 The Forest of Kings 6 years ago
- 8 Some People Have All the Luck 6 years ago
- 9 Dastardly Black and the Four Mistakes 6 years ago
Just evening out the 1 star. I have not read this at all. And in just doibbg this additional run-on to fill de 140 requirement because it really is a pain in the ass writing like twitter in the good old days when you twitted about every crap you saw. Anyway, that should be 140.