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Tags: Naruto, System, Jujutsu Kaisen
Hiatus/Dropped/Writer's Block?
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I do not own Naruto, JJK, and any other similar aspects that are seen throughout the story. All copyrighted content is the property of its respective owner(s).
I do not own the cover image. If it is yours and you want it taken down, please send me a message.
WARNING!
This fan-fiction is being written by a noob writer who has a soft heart!
Will be basing the timeline off of this Tumblr post: https://keepyourpantsongohan.tumblr.com/post/170439568877/timeline-of-naruto-universe
WARNING!!
There will be Jujutsu Kaisen spoilers! Beware!
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Well, Not the best story but is good enough to read and enjoy...Was kinda dissapointed that the world was not Jjk there are hundreds of Naruto story so I want someone to make me Jjk story anyways did u know that "Every sixty seconds in africa, a minute passes!"
I'll tell you what. The most cursed thing about this book is the cover. Oh yeah, I forgot, this is a review. Not bad 4.2 out of 5 stars.
Man, this guy is pathetic. Has the charater devlopment of a third-rate trash canon fodder. Willingly wanting to be a servant to a character? Simping a guy? Guy has a same backbone as a dry twig. 40 Chapters in and all development we have is him SIMPING to a kid whos full of ego that can fit Mt.Everest If nothing changed in the later chapters and him in the end is still a SERVANT of a clan... This is way beyond pathetic.
being honest...I found the cover photo quite interesting that's why I started reading it but after I started reading I realized I really was struck up with gold a very excellent combo of naruto and jujutsu kaisen you are one of the first people opting for this combo anyways it was nice just keep going...
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it would be good if you forget about the fact that he had a shattered mind skill that should have have affected his psyche and personality. otherwise he is an utter #**# in this story that you made amazingly. oh and him liking a centipede and calling it cute then saying I will kill you to the said centipede does not seem to be enough to justify his shattered mind skill. he is needlessly childish like bruh tone it down. and do not make him TOO MUCH enthusiastic about meeting plot characters like come on bruh currently he is way too much of a a$$kisser. with all that said and done your fic is good but it could be WAY better if you pay attention to your oc's pros and cons, how much attention he will get, his first impressions, and how will he deal with butterfly effect.
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It is amazing you should continue it anyway I feel like you wanted Yukio to just get stronger with less details cause when we saw his stats raise high while he was doing a parkour course it was like how and what happened I need details DETAILS[img=coins]
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very cool story. I had to download the app so I could continue to read this. I hope the author updates!! Cool read with the potential to get a lot better!
so far, so good. you could empathize on when he unlocked his chakra since he could somehow stick a leaf on his head at age one lol. grammar is a solid 5 stars, great read overall.
I hate that you gave him chakra and cursed energy so I quit. I saw no point in him having both except for being unnecessarily op and though it was stupid and wasteful. sorry
I don't know if the story is good or bad because I haven't read it but the only thing I want to say is the cover photo looks disgusting. I don't know why but it feels weird and wrong and disgusting for some reason. But I will not say the story is bad. But there are many good reviews so I will give it 4 star.
🙂🙂Author It's good novel try update please you should continue story development is also very good, i check every day if updated new chapter...............
When he's with Gojo he's acting like how a Jojo fan is near anything Jojo related. A simp, beta, loser. He gunna suck off Gojo or what? He gay or what? Is he gonna genderbend himself and have Gojo fug him or what?
IF YOU WANT TO ENJOY THIS........ You must know about Jujutsu Kaisen System! I do not know anything about this series so I could not get into this....Just knowing Naruto is not enough....Two other things to note, 1 the Jujutsu Kaisen System takes up like almost half of the chapters so the pace is slow when you are constantly going over system info...2nd the personality of the MC is best described as Sai from Naruto...emotionless apathy. Many readers seem to enjoy this so as long as you know Jujutsu Kaisen then its for you..I don't so I could not enjoy it as much. And Sai sucks!!!!!