/ Anime & Comics / (Danmachi)To you who have my heart
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(danmachi fan-fic)
Mark lost everything, the past he lived, the present he was living and the future he would live, all because of one bad decision, but his story didn't end there. Making a deal with the "god" who rules the cycle of reincarnation, Mark now had a new chance to be reunited with his beloved, but would he make it? or would he become just a pawn on a bigger board?
Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to danmachi or its characters.
The cover used was taken from google and all credit goes to the artist who made it.
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Hi readers here is the author, I hope you like my story, for more information go to the first chapter of the auxiliary volume which will be updated from time to time
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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the story is good and love story between mark and selene is awesome 👍 and pls dont dont the story like the others
I have to be honest, I don't mind the story. I'm not saying the plot is super original but it still attracts interest and the character interaction is smooth and not at all forced. Also, the fact that the Mc gradually becomes strong and doesn't start op immediately is an extra score. The only downside would be the grammar of the first few chapters, but the author has started correcting them so I can't say much more.
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story is bad. a lot of weird problems going on. it is like mc doing both imposibble job and total waste. it is not a fantasy, it is a conspiracy. totally wortless.
Solid MC personality, Solid goal and the skills which are not that overpower but fast growth. I really like the way author handle the emotional problems and the fighting style of MC is really is my cup of tea. Thank you author for writing such a magnificent and cool fanfic of danmachi.
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
I don't have any professional advice to give but I would like to ask a question, this story's title is 'to you who have my heart' now in the auxiliary chapter you said that there will be harem now it sounds contradictory. I mean I kind of understand that how you might portray the mc. But it really reeks of hypocrisy how protagonist loved his wife only and after going to another world he forgets her and gets a harem. BTW, I don't know what will the future direction of story will take place but let's say you that mc became strong and got back to his original world to get to his wife now then the harem will be the problem and if you don't go that route and mc gets harem and is not able to go to his original world then what meaning will the story's title hold?