你看不见那太好

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Revamping12345

I love the plot and synopsis. The concise and precise. Tbh I don't grasp action book but I liked how you developed the Mc well. Your action of characters are great. Welp !I have a lil knowledge about this genre but it was a refreshing read. Hope this book be a mass hit in future. The top rank book! More kudos to the author. A worth reading book!

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Wizedex

Honestly, it's decent in my eyes. GOH fans would probably enjoy it more since it's a fan fic and can understand what's going on much better. With some googling and wiki searching I managed to get some clue ins on the world here and there. The plot so far seems alright, but again GOH fans would probably enjoy it more than I have. Other than that, I hope the author improves upon their grammar and punctuation (there was also the rare spelling error) as it's a weak point. Good job author. 👍

La da di, oh la di da Gonna be a superstar Be the girl you used to know Playing on the radio La da di, oh la di die Loving me is suicide I'm a dreamer, I'm on fire La da di, run for your life

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BlessMe_Gyro

I love this book. Tb he got the best ideas, like who woulda thought i wanted to sit down and read a book about a Hanma with the spirit of a primodial entity with the physical body of a hanma. English is on point, plot follows god of highschool with a major overhaul to some parts to actually incorpate mc into the story. Cant wait for him to awaken his power. Here before it blows up

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Suzaku_

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OneSevenEight

I don't read a lot of fanfics, but this one is definitely one of the better ones. It probably helps that I'm already a fan of GOH, but this one is one to watch!

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Doraboring101

The novel is excellent.Hope author keep doing what he does best.The reason why not many reader here are because some GOH fanfic just doesn't finish or continue so making it not trending and I hope you finish what you've started or go with the flow of the webtoon other than that I'm enjoying it.Nice. it.niceit.nice........,................ ........................................''''....................................... ........................................''''.......................................................''''''''''''........''..................'''it.nice..

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AngelLily

First of all, i love the plot of the story. it's well thought and written. The character development is very nice and the fighting scenes are real cool and fun to read.