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作者: ArturiaSimp

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As you or may not know this is my first time writing a novel and just a way to spend my free time. I'm also trying my best to fix my grammar and sentences. This is also a way for me to improve my writings. And im also gonna try to make it as interesting as possible for other people to enjoy.
Just so you know I'll accept bad comments and criticism but do be sure to give a valid reason and while you're at it point out you're discontent in this story

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Nan1_da_fuck

Id recommend making a shameless word count so it'd reach the 15000 requirement that way it will get more attention anywho I really like the characters you've added for the crossover also if I'm not wrong isn't that ryuuga guy actually a girl?

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ArturiaSimp

As per tradition I'll of course give my self 5 stars. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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KeeperOfBooks

Good job so far! As you have stated, you do need to improve your grammar, but it's great nevertheless. Quick question, will the original characters from The Disastrous Life Of Saiki K, Is It Tough Being A Friend and To Love-Ru also be in this novel? Also, will this novel be a Harem? If it is, YEEEEEAAAAAAHHHHHH BABY!!

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