NOOBADA

while i like the story itself. i think you need to expand your vocabulary more and use more sophisticated words for eg:using appalling instead of very bad. this isnt a criticis but its just something you should work to be better as a writer. also i recommend using grammarly(preferable paid but free also works) and you would notice an immediate improvement in your vocab and grammer

Don’t drop it’s really good

Damn I was hoping was something epic like ouroboros or Cthulhu

I am once again asking you for a mass release.

Bro you got privilege?

Whatever happened to the mass release.

Yo does someone have privilege That he/she can share?

Nah I’d prefer jakes point of view but it’s your discretion how you think the story would be best conveyed

I really like the novel. I was holding myself from reading the chapters so I could binge. You’ve done a really good job and I hope you see this novel to its end.

Yes yes yes! Battle royale with Jake clapping lamine would be the best