nichocolas

The father you delve in this book, the more trash it become.

Not worth it ..

sorry to the author but your story could easily be so much better ... as of chapter 14, its pure garbage.

Story, characters and world development are too simple/lacking/empty !!!! i will wait to read your next book because its netherless a good start for a writer. . . . .

Just read it .

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We should be paid to read such garbage !!! Shame on you webnovel/qidian !!! At the least, you should give a "basic 101 story writing" guide to new writers !!!!

worth reading . . . .

I was really surprised ... in a good way. A "6 stars" grade compared to the others "Webnovel" books. . . .