I can't say that he's a super famous person that literally captured some of the most powerful people in the world for no reason at all..... let's cause problems for absolutely no reason.... That's what good writing is right????
ch 184 Chapter 185: Eldest Princess, Ouyang Yue'er
Eastern · Fish and Meat
why doesn't he use the single skill point he has to learn some of those other techniques like that level 5 sword technique or something???
ch 23 Late At Night, Doubtful About Life
Eastern · Stellar Week Position
why do they think it's a living being??? why not think that it's just a carriage that moves on its own??? those literally exist....
ch 165 Chapter 166: The Sudden Appearance of the Beggar
Eastern · Fish and Meat
I think it's confusing to use body refinement for the stage and technique ....like "he's only at the body refinement stage" but didn't know he was doing body refinement".... see how confusing that is ???
ch 30 Chapter 30: Eryao Goes into Battle, The Terrifying Strength of the Dragon Whelp (2)
Sci-fi · One word, that's settled.
this feels really forced..... Even if you want to be low key if you could just upgrade one level it isn't that big of a deal.... you will ask him more resources and more protection.... hell the fact that some rando could try and kill him just because of a so-called insult also feel stupid.....
ch 25 Chapter 25: Six Heavens, Two Spirit Fields (1)
Sci-fi · One word, that's settled.
you need to remember that it's a gas powered vehicle and basically the spirit stone is transforming and converting the energy before using it..... so at its core it's naturally not very efficient because it's not a device meant to use spirit stones.....
[Lamborghini: High-end sports car, top configuration, as swift as lightning, fast speed, consumes one high-grade Spirit Stone per kilometer. (Ten thousand high-grade Spirit Stones)]
Eastern · Fish and Meat
he doesn't have to hide his cultivation anymore now.... in fact he needs a higher level now
ch 104 Chapter 102 Skipping Class to Farm _1
Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
why does he need to lie and pretend to be at the second level???? so that more people target him and that he'll have more danger???? like if his cultivation level was mysteriously high that would be one thing.... but if he was at the third or fourth level he just be considered a bit of a threat and maybe a little talented but that's it....
ch 24 Chapter 23 Blood Jade Ginseng_1
Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
I think it's just to show how untalented our MC is.... he should spend several years just to get to the third level and the fourth level.... meaning he has no talent at all for cultivation.... That's why there are so many older people at the fourth level and unable to go beyond....
ch 20 Chapter 19: Qi Cultivation Level 4 (Seeking Follow-up Reading)_1
Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
he should have already have been at the fourth level a while ago.... also let's not forget the fact that he never needed to actually hide when he broke through to the third level.... that level itself isn't that strange....
ch 20 Chapter 19: Qi Cultivation Level 4 (Seeking Follow-up Reading)_1
Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
please don't drag out the relationship with her and the others....
ch 331 Chapter 241: Obtaining the Nascent Soul Pill and Crafting the Robbery Thunder Worm_5
Eastern · Thousand Lakes True Person
"this time he's going to be in trouble" does the author literally need to repeat these lines over and over again???
ch 58 Is a dog-like thing worthy of touching my nephew?
Fantasy · EverGreen
it needs basic proofreading.... it looks like decent machine translation only lacking proper energy
ch 0 4 Complete the mission and receive the reward
Fantasy · EverGreen
our MC could literally transform himself to look like the person and frame the sea people
ch 327 Chapter 241: Acquiring the Nascent Soul Pill, Crafting the Robbery Thunder Worm_1
Eastern · Thousand Lakes True Person
if his body can't absorb it.... then why is a plus 1???
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 Taking Kickbacks
Eastern · Sunk into the Pacific Ocean
He should just make a trade he helps her go through her tribulation and she becomes his dao companion
ch 326 Chapter 240: Obtaining the Thunder Robbery Fruit, The Terror of the Golden Light Ten Thousand Poison Gu_2
Eastern · Thousand Lakes True Person
tao and dao are the same thing
Comparable to his Tao companion.
Eastern · Thousand Lakes True Person
what about the eye technique???
I hope the author doesn't repeat this too much... like her getting into a sect and then her master or whatever thinking he's unworthy and he has to prove himself again and again and stuff like that.... it will get old if overdone...
ch 170 Chapter 22 There's no need for the apprentice to be so cautious_3
I Just Want Outlive You, Don't Force Me to Beat You to Death
Eastern · Nine Lamps and Goodness