Ashley_Young_5203

I like Miles' personality. I would love it if we could get more chapters with him in it. I know Sophie and Damien are the main leads but having him show up every here and there should be good enough to spice things up a bit.

Story could use a little tweaks to improve it a bit more but I can see this is the writer's first story so I guess I should cut him some slack. Lol. But regardless, it's a fantasy story I'd recommend.