I am not sure I understand your critique, could you please specify?
Thank you! :)
Sorry, for the slow updates, we are all sick at home. Lying down with a nasty fever... hope I can continue soon!
Could you please specify which conflict you feel is forced? I would like to improve my writing to give you a better reading experience. [img=recommend]
Next chapter coming up today! :D
This is going to be a loooong ride. Dozens of different realms to explore, creatures to fight, abilities to gain. And that is only the beginning. [img=proud]
I don't want to make it to easy for her, there will be all kinds of struggle and things won't always go as planned. But soon she will get her hands on more skills and so on. [img=thinking] There is actually a reason as to why she didn't get the invisibility ability, which will be revealed at a later point in time. :)[img=proud]
Thank you! Happy to hear that! :D
Happy to hear that! [img=recommend]
Still recovering, but am slowly getting back on my feet, thank you! :D Yes, they are both very similar in some ways. We will see how their relationship will develop, there is supposed to be some romance in this story after all. ^^ But will it be Andrew, the alien man, or maybe someone entirely else? [img=proud]
I Got A Cheatsheet For The Apocalypse
Sci-fi · Lyris_Nova