How many more times is he going to say f***? Why is your protagonist a man-child? It's irritating and annoying. Even his decision-making abilities are rock bottom, he asks every single thing to the system. What is he, a brainless imbecile? Why can't he stop being a brat?
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"It's a name that will become more fitting as the years go by…" Damien allowed another moment of suspense to build up, enjoying their impatient looks. Alas, revealing the name firmly: "We will be The Undying Pirates."
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Anime & Comics · Paradox_
You’re the kind of guy who would happily marry a prostitute and even treat her like a princess. But why shouldn’t I call them leftovers? Women like that are good for casual relationships, not deserving to be a female lead. If having a virgin woman is weird in your eyes, then I hope you end up marrying a girl who’s been dumped by at least a thousand people since you seem to like leftovers.
I can't generate images as I don't have a paid AI to do so, but I can create a glossary page where readers can post images that resemble the characters.
Khal Drogo Ra-ed her, something I can never condone, and as her brother, he utterly failed to protect her. The whole transmigration timeline is just as disappointing.
So Daenerys already got f***** (disappointing)
thanks for the Chapter
Okay, here’s one problem- female characters aren’t explored well. I mean, they all seem to submit to him or have a crush on him too early. It doesn’t feel fleshed out, maybe even rushed. You should spend more time developing their bond and connection. (just my opinion you should do what you have planned)
Just cricket, cricket is boring. Shift the focus to his school life, friendships outside of cricket, admirers, and romantic interests.
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