Lonely_Cupid

Lonely_Cupid

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2024-07-24 Bergabung Global
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Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
11 hours ago
Commented

Just cricket, cricket is boring. Shift the focus to his school life, friendships outside of cricket, admirers, and romantic interests.

Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
23 hours ago
Commented

How many more times is he going to say f***? Why is your protagonist a man-child? It's irritating and annoying. Even his decision-making abilities are rock bottom, he asks every single thing to the system. What is he, a brainless imbecile? Why can't he stop being a brat?

Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
5 days ago
Commented

Aura - 1000000

"It's a name that will become more fitting as the years go by…" Damien allowed another moment of suspense to build up, enjoying their impatient looks. Alas, revealing the name firmly: "We will be The Undying Pirates."

One Piece: Path to Power

One Piece: Path to Power

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Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
5 days ago
Commented

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Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
7 days ago
Replied to DaoistArbore

You’re the kind of guy who would happily marry a prostitute and even treat her like a princess. But why shouldn’t I call them leftovers? Women like that are good for casual relationships, not deserving to be a female lead. If having a virgin woman is weird in your eyes, then I hope you end up marrying a girl who’s been dumped by at least a thousand people since you seem to like leftovers.

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Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
12 days ago
Replied to Flakito_Mio

I can't generate images as I don't have a paid AI to do so, but I can create a glossary page where readers can post images that resemble the characters.

Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
13 days ago
Replied to Phoenix1998

Khal Drogo Ra-ed her, something I can never condone, and as her brother, he utterly failed to protect her. The whole transmigration timeline is just as disappointing.

Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
14 days ago
Commented

So Daenerys already got f***** (disappointing)

Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
16 days ago
Commented

thanks for the Chapter

Lonely_Cupid
Lonely_Cupid
16 days ago
Commented

Okay, here’s one problem- female characters aren’t explored well. I mean, they all seem to submit to him or have a crush on him too early. It doesn’t feel fleshed out, maybe even rushed. You should spend more time developing their bond and connection. (just my opinion you should do what you have planned)

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