Jeong Suhan is gonna narrowly escape with his life, isn't he?
The Germans are dwarves
I think for these POV and scene changes, that you might want to put a break in between the paragraphs such as ... or ---
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Dancing on the golden ashes
Fantasy · Aurimas_Pazikas
She needs to realize that she IS the villain and that's why she's turning into a demon
For a fleeting moment, a part of me felt a pang of pity. I knew she and the others were only defending their kingdom, their people. They weren't villains in their own eyes—just warriors fighting for what they believed in.
Dancing on the golden ashes
Fantasy · Aurimas_Pazikas
You'd think they'd question her horns lmao. Also the name "The Kingdom of Gamers" makes me believe that they are ruled by 4channers
Darn, I love kingdom building, and I would've loved to see more of this empire being built from scratch in more detail. Such as her methods of gaining her supporters, how she consolidated her land, and her daily life as an empress.
It's been enjoyable, but I feel like the past few chapters were rushed a bit
Sheesh, some people would pay money to receive that sort of treatment!
I clenched the pinecone tightly, and soon, the cave was filled with screams of agony that echoed off its walls.
Dancing on the golden ashes
Fantasy · Aurimas_Pazikas
This smells... like a red flag to me
"Let's make a pact then," I said, trying to utilize this merry state of conversation to deepen our relationship. "The three of us: regardless of our relationship in the future, we shall promise to survive until the end and help each other out."
Mythos Of Narcissus: Reborn As An NPC In A Horror VRMMO
Horror · Shin_Ou
I'd like to see a rendition of what her transformed looks like. Does she still have a human face? Or is it like the demons from warhammer?
Dancing on the golden ashes
Fantasy · Aurimas_Pazikas