Mr_OldHorror

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Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Commented

So it's a Klein Glazer protagonist. Sorry author, I'm dropping it here. Not because it's bad writing but because this is the worst cliche in LOTM fanfiction. Goodluck on your writing journey.

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Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Commented

We speak and repeat. PEAK FICTION[img=strong]

Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Commented

Hey author, this is such a great chapter! I hope you buy a carton of milk that is pumped with a 100 dosage of laxatives!

Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Replied to IkiruMist

Peak.

Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Replied to IkiruMist

Gae

Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Commented

Yeah. I think the Goddess should marry this kind Logi guy!

Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Commented

Oooh, nice! Good to have my already favorite character to be a main POV so early on!

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As the grey fog cleared before his view, Logi instinctively looked down at his body. His once neat, simple woollen coat was now singed and riddled with holes, its edges blackened and brittle. Most of his trousers had vanished, leaving his muscular calves exposed, while his shoes were mostly scorched beyond repair. However, his skin remained bare and intact.

Lord of Mysteries: Cuttlefish Connoisseurs

Lord of Mysteries: Cuttlefish Connoisseurs

Book&Literature · Chaoticwriting

Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Commented

I love this guy!

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Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Commented

Wassim? It sure sounds like a malfunctioning bot.

Azriel's deductions were over in a flash as he observed Charles excitedly rap the table while saying with a grin, "Since we're already here, why not make nicknames for all of us? Mine is Wassim."

Lord of Mysteries: Cuttlefish Connoisseurs

Lord of Mysteries: Cuttlefish Connoisseurs

Book&Literature · Chaoticwriting

Mr_OldHorror
Mr_OldHorror
1 months ago
Commented

"ordinary appearance" this would be the biggest lie in the story.