We speak and repeat. PEAK FICTION[img=strong]
Hey author, this is such a great chapter! I hope you buy a carton of milk that is pumped with a 100 dosage of laxatives!
Peak.
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Book&Literature · Chaoticwriting
Gae
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Yeah. I think the Goddess should marry this kind Logi guy!
"The Goddess answered our prayers!
Book&Literature · Chaoticwriting
Oooh, nice! Good to have my already favorite character to be a main POV so early on!
As the grey fog cleared before his view, Logi instinctively looked down at his body. His once neat, simple woollen coat was now singed and riddled with holes, its edges blackened and brittle. Most of his trousers had vanished, leaving his muscular calves exposed, while his shoes were mostly scorched beyond repair. However, his skin remained bare and intact.
Book&Literature · Chaoticwriting
I love this guy!
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Wassim? It sure sounds like a malfunctioning bot.
Azriel's deductions were over in a flash as he observed Charles excitedly rap the table while saying with a grin, "Since we're already here, why not make nicknames for all of us? Mine is Wassim."
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"ordinary appearance" this would be the biggest lie in the story.
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So it's a Klein Glazer protagonist. Sorry author, I'm dropping it here. Not because it's bad writing but because this is the worst cliche in LOTM fanfiction. Goodluck on your writing journey.
Lord of The Mysteries: Eternal Suffering
Book&Literature · Moriarty_Sherlock