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Without the Vale beating the Lannisters and the Tyrells are impossible

I'll be waiting paitiently

Why is Catelyn here? She's better put to use running winterfell and north for Robb and being a mother to her 2 sons, best course of action as soon as arya is at riverrun send her and catelyn back to winterfell.

FOOOOODD AT LAST

Your writing has really improved alot, i can't wait for the rewrite of baelon

I was so exicted until i started to read

what do you mean hes a bastard? targaryen only in name he looks like one and rides a dragon daemon disowns him because hes smart?Secondly you spend entire chapters on aemon and alysanne's relationship but skip out and give a brief summary on the first few episodes of the show.generic shitty fic

So either baelon or aemon

Wheather the next tourney is aemonds birth or rhaenyra's marriage you can have him beat daemon in the final and have daemon piece it together aerion purple eyes bastard "this is probably my son" So daemon takes an interest on him which leads to him staying in kings landing