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Great start.
This author is super versatile. He can write about business, action, and even football really well. I loved how the football scenes were written—they were exciting and fun to read! However, there are moments when the pacing drags, and some plot points feel a bit rushed. It would be great to see a little more depth in certain areas. That said, I think he should write three more books, especially a football one. He really knows how to make those scenes come alive. If you enjoy stories that mix different genres, give this series a shot!
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