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Only while wearing it

Most of the progress his made with them has been unplanned and will mostly be that way. I’m not going to display any major or obvious sparks as it is far too early. Has he learned of their troubles? Their dreams or aspirations? Has he helped them achieve something? Overcome something? You can’t create a spark where’s there no electricity to begin with. Then what has he done? He’s learned about their personalities. He’s inserted himself into their lives. He’s making them happier than they were. True foundations in relationships are founded and strengthened by the small things but pivoted by major things. So would you risk asking a girl straight up to be your girlfriend? Or maybe start slow with an introduction and getting to know each other. I get that harem on this app is mostly the MC just collecting women but if there’s no depth to the character then what’s the point? You get to the scenes then they feel meh. I understand wanting to see progress by this time but I’m not a traditional Webnovel author. My style focuses more on immersing a reader and creating buildup, rather than quick progression. It’s not something I can change as it is what makes my way of writing unique. But, I’m curious, how would you have Don create proper sparks and progress in his relationships, in the limited time he’s been in this world (<3 weeks)

It’s a slow shift as he settles into the world. It would be strange even if without bad intentions if he became attached to or genuinely interested in the women after less than a month. It’s possible but becoming Mr. I truly care for her or them after less than a month just seems weak minded. This book is slowpace in that it’s in depth with events and readers tend to forget how little time has passed in the grand scheme of things. All in all I get what you’re saying but I have to keep a sort of weird balance otherwise it’ll just come across as rushed once the scenes pass and we settle back into plot.