pipo_pippo

pipo_pippo

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2024-04-30 Bergabung Global
Lencana 4

Moments 44
pipo_pippo
pipo_pippo
5 months ago
Commented

The genre has been shifted successfully. We have entered in mystery genre.

pipo_pippo
pipo_pippo
5 months ago
Replied to yonalovecatz

Make sense.

pipo_pippo
pipo_pippo
6 months ago
Commented

Why is Juli acting like this?? 😭😭😭 😔

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pipo_pippo
6 months ago
Commented

Author's writing style has improved ..👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

pipo_pippo
pipo_pippo
6 months ago
Replied to A_N_O_N_Y_M

I see...btw great work...

pipo_pippo
pipo_pippo
6 months ago
Commented

This chapter was so cute until Zoa decided to visit her apartment. 🥲

pipo_pippo
pipo_pippo
6 months ago
Commented

Just a friendly suggestion. It would be better. If you could write short paragraphs like for three to four lines. Because it's to read on your phone. Long paragraphs are good but I've read a few novels here and the paragraphs are relatively small. Just a personal opinion. Don't know if it's true or not.

pipo_pippo
pipo_pippo
6 months ago
Replied to A_N_O_N_Y_M

Sure, I'll leave comments. Don't worry and keep writing. Hope your book get contacted soon as well.

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pipo_pippo
6 months ago
Commented

I want to go on a date now. 🥲😭

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pipo_pippo
6 months ago
Posted

The story is good so far. I'm enjoying it. The only problem is slow updates. Please release more chapters. The main character is not a dumb person and the male lead is kinda sus but doting person.