KalamitiCker

KalamitiCker

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An Author In Progress...

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KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
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KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Posted

Well, it's a decent novel, but it’s not really to my taste. The main character is too forgiving and gets pushed around constantly. Even when people try to kill him, he just forgives them and lets them go. He very well knows that the terrible deeds were committed by the body's previous owner, but to protect himself, he should be more ruthless. He already lost his sister in his past life, yet he still acts like Gary Stu.

KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Commented

He should've just killed her when he had the chance

Without his traps and strategic thinking, he stood little chance against her. 

Trapped Inside My Favorite Novel

Trapped Inside My Favorite Novel

Fantasy · UntoldQuill

KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Commented

Is his traits just for show...

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"What?!" Quill shouted, his shock breaking his usual composure. All eyes in the classroom turned to him, confusion evident in their gazes.

Trapped Inside My Favorite Novel

Trapped Inside My Favorite Novel

Fantasy · UntoldQuill

KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Commented

Don't make another Mc who is a simp...

KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Commented

Without any kind of backing, I think it's a pretty smart decision to stay low .

It was designed to weed out the weak. If someone was already afraid of another's wealth, they wouldn't be a valuable asset against Humanity's enemies.

Trapped Inside My Favorite Novel

Trapped Inside My Favorite Novel

Fantasy · UntoldQuill

KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Posted

This novel reminds me a lot of "Author's POV," which itself was inspired by "The Novel's Extra." I haven't read "The Novel's Extra," but I have read "Author's POV," and both characters are quite similar. Despite that, I really like this one. Although it doesn't quite reach the "Author's POV" level, I can tell the author put a lot of effort into writing it. I believe this is his first original work, and he's doing a great job. With only 19 chapters out so far, I can already see the potential. If he continues and develops it well, this could turn into another masterpiece.

KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Commented

His characterisation is changing...

KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Commented

Alexander be like

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> The Inviter is amused at your revisions and wishes you luck on the rest.

The Author's Privilege as an Extra

The Author's Privilege as an Extra

Fantasy · HappyVainGlory

KalamitiCker
KalamitiCker
3 months ago
Replied to Okojus

yo. why stopped writing your novels??

Neo did not feel guilty for stealing the Divine Water.

Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades

Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades

Fantasy · FailedWriter101

  • I am The HERO  I am The VILLAIN original

    I am The HERO I am The VILLAIN

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM MAGIC MYSTERY TRANSMIGRATION ANTIHERO INVINCIBLE

    "What was that? People cheering me as a hero for saving them? Well, I didn't plan on that." "What!? Those very people are also branding me a villain for the lives lost? Well, I didn't plan on that either." "That f*** survey really screwed me over. I'll definitely find that jerk responsible for this mess." "Mhm... What did you ask? So am I a villain or a hero?" "Well, it seems according to everyone," "I am The Hero, I am The Villain"  ------- Karl was never a heavy thinker, heavy worker, or heavy anything. All he ever wanted was to sit and relax for ages and he was doing that just fine until he answered some random questions online after completing a long novel. He didn't think too much about the survey and answered every question with whatever answers came to his mind. Suddenly the day after, he found himself in the very same world of the novel he finished. And he can't even take advantage of the future knowledge of the events as he was thrust 1000 years before the beginning of the plot. "What kind of shitty twist is this?" he screamed. Moreover, the real tragedy is that his physical abilities are worse than a 10-year-old as a gentle breeze could whisk him off and a mere sneeze could send him fly with his abilities being pretty much useless in a fight. But there's no one to blame for that except his lazy ass. If only he’d wished for cool stuff like Super Strength, Dragon Breath, or much better, a Nuclear Attack when the survey asked what abilities he would like to have. As humans worse than predators close in on him, he’s stuck with nothing but some lame abilities. —or so he thought. Little did he know that his powers far surpassed his initial understanding. As he delved deeper into their capabilities, he uncovered the unprecedented true potential of his abilities. And that’s how Karl’s seemingly lazy choices, transformed a vulnerable Prince into the most dreaded and dangerous entity, not only in the world of Nevora but also across the realms beyond imagination. ------ Author Contact Information: Email: KalamitiCker@gmail.com Discord: https://discord.gg/t8ehdyCxXu

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