Novel's about to get heated. stay tuned for more.
I think Patriarch could have been better in that statement
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Fantasy · Simma_boi
Bro isn't that a mistake? Thought her family's name was Kin? Then hows's it now Vin?
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Fantasy · Simma_boi
Impressed bro, expected nothing less.
Already falling in love with plot...can see potential twist though. Nice work author, keep it up.
Forgive my shame, giving myself a five star review. Jutst a budding writer... This is a question and answer session, if you spot any confusions, alterations or mistakes , I'd be happy to accept all criticisms in good faith.
I think that spelling should be forgiven. Or is it unique?
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Games · TheAbyssWritesBack
The novel plot and settings aren't peak, but the pacing is marvelous.
Hey people... This is my first attempt at trying to harness the gift of the pen, so I plead with you all to forgive all detected errors and short-comings, as the mistakes of a imperfect author. You all are free to criticize and ask radical questions ..I will surely reply them in the comments. Once more forgive me and prepare to suffer the danger of been addicted.
F class? Darn