Robert_Biederman_3424

I love this novel keep the chapters coming

awesome story keep them coming the plot line is perfect the world building is outstanding the characterization is spot on it's just some small areas that don't have all the I's dotted and all the t's crossed if you get my meaning

one other thing that I've noticed is that our MC mental abilities meaning his telekinesis is still able to function perfectly but being everything in the MC's world operates on Ather and ather alone I can only assume that it's being pulled from his body meaning the cells in his body but what's going to happen when that runs out how is the ather being replenished would not his intelligence and wisdom begin to weaken after a while it's obvious they need the aether from this portal but how did Lucian know that that portal was going to appear here reading the story as it is written it is more like chance that this happened it's odd for this is exactly what the MC needs right now I'm not buying it

awesome storytelling I have just one question here well more of an observation with all that either that's being pumped out by this portal why aren't some of these people using some of their abilities that require ether I'm not seeing any of that here

I would give this novel and and A+ right up to this point here where he just literally killed that woman without any thought and what he did to the guy here for me it's a disappointing occurrence it was so unnecessary feels to me like from this point on where he is going to be devolving more and more into the dark side becoming evil

I have a question here if that net turn the dust the moment he touched it why is he able to touch this rope and use it it doesn't make any sense because the rope by definition is no different than that net

as we see right here right now he didn't have to kill her and what's he going to do right now kill the guy without even asking a single question question and answers session should have been done first he could have disarmed them

none of this was necessary considering the fact his level of power being what it is he could have handled both of them I believe would have been some effort in doing it but he could have done it

a little paranoia is fine but this goes way over the top in my opinion does this mean that every fracking person that he needs from this point on other than those from the village he is going to kill immediately without any thought because this is the personality of someone that would do that just because those two attacked him at the knoll village does not mean that every person he needs from then on is going to be part of it you can't assume that

I don't like the implications here he attacked without even knowing why they were there you assume people are innocent first and then you interrogate them to find out why they are there but even that is stupid because so what if these two came in behind him maybe you can work together with them I don't like the fact that he attacked immediately without any thought whatsoever