This entire story is a copy+paste of “Three to Backstep” by Sinyk. You can find the full story on fanfiction .net …………………………………………………………………….
No images please
personally, I feel like it doesn't let me imagine a character freely when I am 'reading' a novel but if the image is chosen correctly it does help a lot when you imagine scenarios, and also helps you connect to the story more?
Anime & Comics · Jin_4671
+1
2- don't give mc the skill and let the women be fucked by other actors (obviously happens in the real porn industry) which is somewhat more realistic (MC will still create the harem he is meant to create)
Anime & Comics · Jin_4671
Too real :(
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Anime & Comics · One_Fall_Leaf
I don’t mind them, except when they use the same one over and over again. I can only read so many *THUD*’s before I start think the author doesn’t know any other sounds.
It was going to be a long day.
Anime & Comics · Orion_Art
Ah, I wondered if/when the the psycho and her idiot brother would be introduced
Skill issue
"CUM 10 TIMES IN 24 HOURS?! THAT'S NOT POSSIBLE!"
Anime & Comics · ParodyGirl
Pretty good. Nothing much to critique other than how fast Marcus gets OP, but if the author is going for a more character heavy focus like I think: then that will work very much in their favor…just to get the grinding for levels out of the way as soon as possible. I look forward to seeing where this goes :)
If you’re asking for original jutsu? 1) some kind of hard light ninjutsu technique that creates illusion like objects/terrain ei: trees, bushes, houses, roads, swords etc. except for the lack of any smell or taste and the fact they are made of chakra (sensors and dojutsu hard counter it) they are indistinguishable from the real thing, plus they’re as fragile as tempered glass so no infinite weapon glitches. The upper limits and shortcomings are ultimately up to you but I think these are pretty good. 2) Some kind of Yin and/or Yang + Fire style explosive jutsu, like the phoenix flower jutsu but with a bangIf you’re asking for original jutsu? 1) some kind of hard light ninjutsu technique that creates illusion like objects/terrain ei: trees, bushes, houses, roads, swords etc. except for the lack of any smell or taste and the fact they are made of chakra (sensors and dojutsu hard counter it) they are indistinguishable from the real thing, plus they’re as fragile as tempered glass so no infinite weapon glitches. The upper limits and shortcomings are ultimately up to you but I think these are pretty good. 2) Some kind of Yin and/or Yang + Fire style explosive jutsu kind of like the phoenix flower Jutsu but with a bang If your asking for more cannon stuff: hiding like a mole and water prison are all time greatest low level jutsu that I still stand by
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Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
Are there any fanfics similar to this one in star wars that you would recommend? I really enjoyed this story so I’d love to read more!
Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi
Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario