*spire in Elenaris
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*But coming up with no answer
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*Opening his eyes once more
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*djinn (unless dijin is a legally distinct djinn XD)
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Something like this maybe
Eyeing the buffing spell called the dark fae's true mask, Raven walked to the very edge of the crater and let his body be temporarily turned into a monster. One that looked just like the mother of dark fairies except in the masculine male form.
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"Even while sleeping" has been repeated twice
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*colony of Arachnes *size of the crater
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*he reined in
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*healing on its own
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not instead of don't since you already have a do there
"Hypertension?" Sensing disruption to his body language alone, she reached into her pocket and tossed Raven a locked bag filled with headache meds. However, explaining nothing at all, she began looking around at everyone. "Anyways, do you guys still don't need any help from the kingdom? I can always spare an automaton or two to aid you."
Netori: Stealing The Hero's Party!
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